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Wow, this was an interesting chapter, I liked it. I did think Kedean has some kind of magical heritage. I like the sketch :), of course the quote makes me wonder what it is about. (strangely my mind is leaning towards Baisyl threatening someone! haha)

"I want to know if it made sense, if it felt rushed, if it all fit in well or felt sloppy from the reader's perspective..."

It was fitting as far as I'm concerned. I can see you're a perfectionist about writing, I'm one too, also yours and mine visions of what's right match, so I'm lucky. :D

Oh, oh! An update! And then not only one but two chapters in a row! Thank you, you made my day :D But now I better start reading.

In my head the chapter didn't end. In my head, Baisyl goes and finds Kedean, says "Kedean, I love you, lets have passionate sex for the next day and a half." In any case your chapter left me wanting more as always. Good luck with the work and I hope to see the updates coming!!

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Ahhh, the long awaited reunion, like a deep relaxing breath, but you, you minx you, didn't allow your readers even a speck of release. You kept the tension high with question after question, and just enough answers for us to be kinda satisfied until we walk away and realize, no, no you didn't answer anything, in fact, you just left us I with more questions. You've set this up brilliantly. The characters, their interactions, the timeline. Everything is beautifully intricate and balanced on a knife's edge. But I want more...so much more. And there's not a damn thing I can do about it because there's no way I can walk away and come back when its further along. Ugh, you wicked, wicked writer. I hope you know, understand, and are responsible with the power you wield. If not, I'm officially screwed. You're absolutely wonderful, terrible, but wonderful. But, in the end, I still thank you for the addition and desperately crave more. Totally your fault.

If only Keadan knew- but actually does Baisyl even know he's pregnant? Glad their brothers survived.

YOU'RE BACK!!! YESSSSS What is Baisyl going to do with this new information? Can't wait to find out!

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I'm so happy you posted a new chapter!!!!!!!!! Thank you so much!!! This story just gets better and better! It's so great! I have no clue what will happen next and I hope we'll get to see soon...
I sincerely hope you are good, and everything's as you want it to be in your life. xxx <3

ah this made my day! Baisyl and Kedean are so adorable, I hope they realize they need to stick together. Is Allroy going to tell Baisyl he's pregers? On second thought, he might freak out, probably not a great idea. I'm also liking this Rhyan/Zyric thing. Anyway, I love this story, can't wait for the next installment.

Oh wow the joy of seeing a new chapter knows no bounds for me. I'm so excited to see more of kadean's and zyric's past and to see more of the pregnancy news being found out too. yay!!!!

Baisyl and Keadan. They're so conflicted and they both just want to stay together. why do they make it so complicated? Poor Alroy having everyone running to him and demanding answers. Can't blame Keadan there though. I'd want to know why I couldn't remember anything too. great job and I do really hope you update soon :)