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for The Coquette and the Thane

by DaggersApprentice

person myrt
schedule May 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
;) it's not that I don't believe that love doesn't exist in any form at all. I do believe in family, in friends, but I have yet to witness the passionate love between woman and man. there's still time, but I can't halp to be a bit sceptical when seeing divorses, lies and cheating at every turn. you could say I believe in love and nature, but I don't believe in humanity in general. I love your story, but it's more of a fairy tale :) but, ehi, we need faity tales, too. thanks for the update.
person Chibikodo
schedule May 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh Keadan... Baisyl sure has it bad. But I keep thinking about the prophecy(?) involving Keadan and his brother which I hope was misinterpreted... I wonder where they will go from here (obviously beyond what we know is coming in the next scene haha).
schedule May 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am utterly speechless. If and when I find words again, you'll be the first to know.

Oh my God.
schedule May 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely adore Zyric. It's so amazing and likable. I'm glad that Baisyl and Keadan are sending so much time together though I guess they really should be a bit more quiet. :D I'm glad all is going well though I still have a feeling of foreboding. Hopefully, I'm wrong. Great, amazing job! Can't wait for more!!!!!
person Perona
schedule May 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well all those feelings are finally out in the open. Is Kedean really goning to run off somewhere? Poor Baisyl, in love with a wayfarer. I'm still anxiously awaiting when someone will tell Baisyl that he's pregnant, I don't imagine he's going to be happy about it, at least at first. Anyway, lovely chapter as always. I eagerly await the next installment.
schedule April 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Just to be clear, he's going to find the place where his family has lived?
Why can't Baisyl come with him? *pouts* I don't want them to part ways!
Lovely chapter, feels good to read a scene in which they're having intimate moments, after a few months of being without this story.
Oh I wish I could imagine what will happen with this plot, but I can't! ;)xxx
person Anon
schedule April 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You spoil us with so many updates!
And an update at last where they finally declare their feelings? You're really too good to us.
person myrt
schedule April 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It was so sweet and tender and real... I just melt down. and even though I don't believe in love in real world, for a moment I felt it all so sincere, as if this fantasy world was more authentic then the real one.
please, update soon. this story is addictive
schedule April 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
NOOOO Kedean CANNOT GO!!! Please, please, don't let him leave! Please?

XoXo
schedule April 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Poor poor Baisyl. No leave Kedean no leave. I'm not sure if it will be better or worse for him to find out he's pregnant before or after Kedean leaves. their live are so very complicated. great job!