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February 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Loved this chapter. It was really funny, at least in my opinion. And it's nice to know that Baisyl can defend himself in a fight.
Out of curiosity, is Kedean gay or bisexual?
Out of curiosity, is Kedean gay or bisexual?
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February 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
“However,” his charge added, “if want to end this…”
Is there supposed to be a 'you' or possibly an 'I' in there?
I was looking forward to the fight scene so much and this chapter far surpassed my expectations! Not to worry, they were reasonably high ^^ I loved every part of it, plotwise. Lengthwise... I am guilty of always wanting the fun chapters to last forever :D
I'm thoroughly enjoying this story and eagerly awaiting your further updates, so please keep them coming!
Is there supposed to be a 'you' or possibly an 'I' in there?
I was looking forward to the fight scene so much and this chapter far surpassed my expectations! Not to worry, they were reasonably high ^^ I loved every part of it, plotwise. Lengthwise... I am guilty of always wanting the fun chapters to last forever :D
I'm thoroughly enjoying this story and eagerly awaiting your further updates, so please keep them coming!
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February 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story is one of the most interesting and entertaining thigs I have ever read.
I have to commend your writing its so easy to understand and follow which is super awesome.
Looking forward to the next update!
I have to commend your writing its so easy to understand and follow which is super awesome.
Looking forward to the next update!
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February 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I don't really understand, why there are not more reviews. Maybe because of the seemingly non-slash beginning. It is an interesting beginning, a story promising a lot in regards to the characters and the world (I do hope for more of it). And it flows smoothly, so I really enjoy reading it.
I really love the characters. The slightly strange nobleman, now -woman...fighting against what his father wants him to do; the fighter, played with by before mentioned nobleman. The twisted brother, the loving brother. The father to obsessed with influence and himself to really care for his child.
And though it may sound strange, but I hope the two main characters find to each other (would be a nice change...with the one with the slighter build being the one to tease. But I would hope it stays with a classical role allocation).
In the last chapter the fighting scene was really nice. I loved the reaction of the characters, I could almost see it before my eyes...loved it.
So, I hope you continue writing your story. Would be a shame if it ended to early.
I really love the characters. The slightly strange nobleman, now -woman...fighting against what his father wants him to do; the fighter, played with by before mentioned nobleman. The twisted brother, the loving brother. The father to obsessed with influence and himself to really care for his child.
And though it may sound strange, but I hope the two main characters find to each other (would be a nice change...with the one with the slighter build being the one to tease. But I would hope it stays with a classical role allocation).
In the last chapter the fighting scene was really nice. I loved the reaction of the characters, I could almost see it before my eyes...loved it.
So, I hope you continue writing your story. Would be a shame if it ended to early.
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January 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Interesting! Did I read it wrong or does Baisyl turn back into a man if he's standing in a rainstorm? There are plenty of those out at sea, so that makes me a little more than excited to see what you have planned for them. Don't feel obligated to rush into sex! Personally I love chemistry between the characters, the 'build up' of tension, more than the actual act. I have a feeling Kedean and Baisyl are going to have a lot of 'build up' between them, but I'll have to wait and see! Anyway, keep up the good work!
Oh! Are Kedean and his brother Chinese? Didi means little brother in Chinese, right?
Oh! Are Kedean and his brother Chinese? Didi means little brother in Chinese, right?
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January 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. Unlike others I've read it actually has a plot! And a good one at that.
Keep up the good work. BTW I really admire your writing style it's very clear and easy to understand and the details are very much appreciated.
Keep up the good work. BTW I really admire your writing style it's very clear and easy to understand and the details are very much appreciated.
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January 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oooo I really like it so far. It's gonna be an interesting trip for Kedean haha. can't wait to read more
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January 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Lovely writing! Looking forward to more :)
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January 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm intrigued :) I like it and look forward to see where this goes.
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January 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So far so good, I'll be waiting for the next chapter :D