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One: external backup!! Even a memory stick will do the job.

Two: Yes, that was wordy, but I liked it -I like dialogue- and it made me both aww and laugh and the thing between Alroy and Zyric cracked me up. I missed Rhyan, though; I like him. Some Rhyan/Zyric in the next chapter, pretty please? :3

I love this story so much! I love all the charactors names you've made up. I think Kedean and Baisyl are so cute together, and I also think that Zyric and Rhyan would make a really cute couple as well. Cant wait for more!

Well, I seldom review stories, but I signed up with AFF just to leave a review for you =). I must say, this story is great. I love the complex dialogues and interactions between Baisyl and Keaden; it's of several standards higher than what you normally find on this site, with the exception of a few other writers. I hope you'll complete the story! =)

I Love this story and I can't wait for the end (I'm the type that loves my favorite stories to end, not drag on). Hopefully, Baisyl will find out he's pregnant (it's weird saying that) before he leaves. But, then Kedean would be staying for responsibility and not for love... I don't know, I just want more!

Hey, I loved this chapter and he last one was just everything...left me speechless.
I can just imagine the way he'll freak out when he finds out. I can't wait to see it LOL.
Seeing this update today was a great thing on such a shitty day for me.
Thank you for writing!! :) xxx

-_- Kedean's leaving. But a wonderful chapter despite that heart wrenching fact!

Oh god, I absolutely LOVE your writing style. You have to be one of my favorite authors, published or not, ever. You have such an amazing sense of characterization and your plot is so intricate it draws the reader in and doesn't let go. You add JUST the right amount of description to get the point across without heading into purple prose. I love how your writing style changes, ever so slightly, for that specific character you're writing as. I'm a Grammar Nazi, and a pretty good one at that *toots own horn*, yet I don't think I've found ANYTHING wrong/out-of-place in your entire story (granted, I've been so entranced with the plot/characters that I could have skipped over a minute detail).

This last chapter, you could practically FEEL the love oozing off the page. It made me grin soo hard. And, even though they've only known each other for about a week, it doesn't feel rushed in any way, shape or form. It doesn't feel fake like a lot of cheesy romance novels out there. What they have feels completely real and true.

You have me COMPLETELY hooked in your story and I can't WAIT until your next chapter!

Can I just tell you how wonderful this story is?? Again? This last chapter has proved it!! Not only was it hot, but as a reader, I feel satisfaction on another level because I truly like these characters and couples together. We watch them go through awkward phrases and saying things they never thought they'd say, FEELING things they never thought they'd feel! Oh, it's just lovely! Thanks for another wonderful chapter!! Can't wait for more!!

love it~ so beatiful, more please :)

I'm so pleased, I'm just so pleased! But I'm also nervous, because I don't want Kedean to go away! In any case, I love these characters so much!

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