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I love this story! It was funny when Kedean told Baisyl about his prophecy about the losing to a dragon and having a child by a man in a woman's body. Baisyl probably felt like choking to death. I hope for more updates soon. Thank you for sharing!!

I'm totally I. Love with your story :) usually I wait til there are at least 10 chapters before I start reading, but the summary sounded so interesting that I couldn't resist:)

i don't want kedean to kill his brother!!!!

I haven't mentioned this recently, but, this story is quite wonderful--A gem
thank you
XoXo

I'm definitely not a fan of MPreg, but (whether it happens or not) I can't stop reading now. I was even a little hesitant about Baisyl being in a woman's body for most of the story. BUT, once I started reading, I just couldn't stop. You write well (like, grammar, OMG!), the storyline is pretty flipping awesome, and the characters are COOL (and there are no pathetic, girly men, even despite the fact that one of them happens to be a woman...>___>). I can't wait for more~~~

With the prediction part... I almost died. In a 'Nooo! Now I know what happens!' kind of way (although admittedly, half of that was expected anyway). I am hoping you'll put some seriously awesome twists in :D
If Kedean actually kills Zyric I will cry. Real human tears that exist outside of the (magical, delicious) internet. I kind of want to cry already.(Unless by 'brother' the fortune-teller meant some COMPLETELY random dude who Kedean kills for some noble reason, who rasps out (while coughing up blood) 'Brother... I...' before dying, thereby revealing his long-lost-brotherness with Kedean and Zyric (or Zyr-Zyr, as I have now just thought of him). That would be lame, but acceptable, as long as the sweet, molestable Zyric gets to live. But if Zyric somehow turns evil... he would no longer be sweet (but probably still molestable) and therefore he had it coming.)
I actually spent a while considering a pregnant Baisyl before I could actually manage to read on. So many questions have been raised! Does this mean that girl-body Baisyl and smexy-manly-normal-body Kedean will have HET sex? Will Baisyl have to be a chick for 9 months? If he doesn't, will he be a preggers man or a normal man who will turn back into a preggers chick? Or would the turning-into-a-man-again thing make him a non-pregnant girl? Or will he be a pregnant guy? AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHH. As you can see, I am stuck on this. But I am content to wait and see what happens 8D
Poor Kedean. I suspect that, deep down, he was truly scarred for life by the fortune teller :P Although exposure to Baisyl would likely have left similar scars sooner or later. Meh, I call it inevitable.

Kind of surprised that you didn't put in a bit with Kedean asking Baisyl about what he meant by his 'When I was a boy' slip-up (or was it? >__>). I was expecting awkward questions and 'convenient' (but damn annoying) interruptions, though I do like how everyone got to find out about Baisyl and his penis. By which I mean, his true manhood. That was possibly worse. But you know what I mean. I hope.

I really loved this chapter! I also really love Desper, even though she appears to be a baddie at the mo'. I have complete confidence in her inherent awesomeness. I usually hate female characters (because they're so freaking annoying - too wimpy, too ditzy, excessively badass, breaking up slash pairings, etc.), but I was won over by the drunken captain. Desper FTW.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

P.S. Sorry if my review is weird, it's just how I think. I can't even blame the time because I'm usually up at this time anyway <__< >__> Reading slashy goodness...*drool* (It's 1:41am in my part of the world, just in case anyone was wondering.)

P.P.S I'm pretty sure that eight in Roman numerals is VIII, not IIX.

The fortune was probably the funniest thing I ever heard the mental image I got of Baisyl was the great.

Although with a women's body its not techinally a mpreg story is it?

Oh wow, amazing chapter!!!! I didn't realize when I started reading that it would be so exciting. Love Baisyl, he's so blunt and prickly, and it's fun to see him insult people. Assuming Baisyl can't die so early on, but I am still anxious to see what happens next. update soon!!!

Yay for Chinese! And yay for visiting China! I'm jealous that you're going, but wish you all the luck. :D As for your story, I absolutely adore it. I enjoy Baisyl's character and I hope he keeps his sharp personality even as he learns about life and its ups and downs. I'm dying for something to happen between them. I feel obligated as a fan to pressure you into rushing it, but I shall refrain! I got so excited when Baisyl asked if the sound was 'thunder', because I thought maybe a storm was coming.. and with it rain... and with it, the man body! Woo! .. but I guess I need to wait on that a bit more. I wonder, will Kedean willingly fight/hit/attack Baisyl once he finds out he's not technically a woman? Kekeke. Regardless, you're doing great. Keep it up!

Ack. Noooo.. Don't stop there. x3 I wanna know what happens next. Please update soon. I really enjoyed the story so far. You have definitely found a reader that will keep looking out for updates to this. Happy Writings.