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Well, Baisyl is indeed a tease... and Kedean is quite mysterious. I love the interaction between them, though. They are rather complementary in characters and looks.
So, will they get closer in Baisyl's woman or man form? Which one does Kedean like best? ;)
I'm glad that Kedean is not set on bringing Baisyl to his fiancé anymore - and trying to find his very cute brother! Yay! Zyric must be very worried about Kedean by now... But what will the latter do with Baisyl once he's found who he's looking for? Will they try to find a way to break the curse?
Such a fascinating story...

This story is awesome. Basiyl is rather caustic, but it suits his personality. He has good reason to be pissed off about that curse. Keadon is a sweety, deadly, but still a sweety.

love this story!!!

I love it! I love the characters, the plot, just everything! I don't think stories with just smex are fun to read. Man I missed this kind of fic, it's hard to find nowadays! thank you very much, you made me happy:P greetings from your soon to be stalker ;) btw the prediction part was fun to read, uaahah :P

..... Cliffhangers... are evil and must die.. This, is so not fair. I'm dying to know what is going to happen next. Please update soon.

That was mean...not especially because of Baisyl alone, but because it seems as if the chance for a kiss is postponed again (and that when the Captain thinks both of them already have a strong relationship). But I loved how Baisyl defended himself twice in this chapter and didn't end as a damsel in distress.
The prophecy an Baisyls reaction were great - but it doesn't mean it is all going to be true. Well, maybe. The first part has already happened. I am just curious what Kedean will do and think, when he and Baisyl are reuinted and what the fairy-captain does. Wouldn't it be totally inconvenient when Baisyl is not there?

Well, have a nice time in China...I hope you still finde enough time to write.

No, don't stop here! I'd really like to see how Baisyl gets out of this one... And it's true that he hasn't even kissed Kedean yet! (why were they interrupted... almost there!) Plus, Kedean had finally seen Baisyl's real body! Now I wonder what's his opinion of it and which one he prefers...
Also, what happened to Kedean's brother? And if they want Baisyl to lure his mother out, does she actually care enough about her son anyway? She doesn't seem to have had a great part in his life until now... right?
This story is quite original, with a complex plot and interesting characters, and well written too. Will the next chapter be out soon?

P.S. You're not really going to make Kedean kill his own brother... right? I like him and Kedean would be crushed! :'(

I'm so glad you changed the summary. The one before tweaked my interest but not enough to read it. This one made me think well i'll give a try...I'm glad i did.

of course he is not dead! I realized that right away. What i am upset about is the kedean killing his own brother thing. Please tell me he has an evil half brother out there he didn't know about. Cause what i've seen of zyna princess i like and i want to see were his thing with alroy goes. Plus i think it would truly kill something in kedean to have to kill his own baby bro.