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for The Coquette and the Thane

by DaggersApprentice

person Althydia
schedule March 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, thanks for the answer, and sorry for asking several times. :) But would Kedean answer such a question honestly, if Baisyl were to ask him? He might find a way to avoid the issue completely...
That chapter was very nice, their relationship is developping in a very sweet way, by discovering more and more about each other, and getting fonder of each other's habits and quirks. I'm very much looking forward to them getting more intimate, but at the same time, it could lead to sexual urges which might become a bit too distracting in such small quarters, and after repressing their urges for so long...
On another note: poor Zyric's naivety has got himself and his brother in quite a mess. What's Kedean going to do to save him without endangering his charge?
So, more blushing Baisyl and sexual tension to come? Can't wait!
schedule March 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What a sweet couple. It's good that they managed to find a method of transport. Hopefully their luck will continue. Happy Writings.
person unknown20troper
schedule March 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This, like all your stories, is awesome! The characters certainly have an awesome dynamic, though I recall mistaking the brothers for lovers one or two times.
person fudge
schedule March 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
great story!
person Vandra
schedule March 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, new chapters...and really interesting.
Well, I hope it was not his mother that cursed Baisyl, but it sounded like that. And it sounds strange, that somebody wants him dead, while he himself has no powers.
And Kedean is getting cockier and the interaction between him and Baisyl in male is quite interesting. I really do hope that there will be more (like a kiss and more), because Baisyl seems quite willing...
The journey will be interesting and I hope we get to see more of Kedeans past.

schedule March 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Those two are funny together. It reminds me of how I act when I'm around those close to me. For us, it's mild bickering in a playful manner. Lovely chapter. Good luck, and happy writings.
person elegantenvy
schedule March 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love this story more and more!! despite Baisyl being the sarcastic prickly side of the pairing I think he's got his work cut out for him breaking through Kedean's shell :D
Looking forward to the next installment
person LaLa
schedule March 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Me gusta tu historia~ I really, really Baisyl. He's so witty and frank... and spoiled. But who is this Natara (a relative, a woman he was/is in love with...?). Can't wait for more~
person RJaneyP
schedule March 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love this story its well done and makes me smile, its so sweetly twisted... and so am I! G
person DarkSacrifice
schedule March 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay :DDD I loooved the part where K pinned B :P that was hot (sorry I am typing in dark, so I am shortening the names)XD anyways thank you for updating! still love it <3<3please update soon!!