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You paint well with words, I enjoy reading the rhythm of your words and the scene was slow and sexy. Look forward to more of your story, however long it takes. G

So hot and steamy. ;) And fucking adorable... I found myself thinking "awww," like, fifty million times...>____> But more questions arise! Like, why does Kedean think he doesn't "deserve" love? Did he do something bad in the past...? And the whole sickness thing coupled with the fact that he knows someone who may be able to lift Baisyl's curse makes me think we have much more to learn about Kedean.

I love what Kedean is thinking to do him. I would love to see that happening. Great update. Don't worry too much about the naughty things. You did fine. :)

wow super hot chapter!! Hopefully they'll have more time later to get hot and heavy again :)
I love how Kedean gets under Baisyl's defenses it's really adorable. Love the story, can't wait for more

I can't believe you stopped there... But we finally got Kedean's answer to Baisyl's question about his preference of him! Yay! It was totally the answer I expected from Kedean too. :)
It does look like Baisyl has more feelings for Kedean than vice versa, but it could be because he seems more emotional and less guarded than Kedean (at least in recent chapters)... Actually, a lot of the chapter looked like foreplay in a way, and I'm amazed at the way it seems like an evidence they will eventually get together. Will we get a chapter with Kedean's perspective on things and his relationship with Baisyl?
Also, I understand how Baisyl doesn't want to do anything in his female body. Even without his prejudices regarding women, it must not be very comfortable not to be in his own body and to feel alien in his own skin. But he apparently is falling in love with his sexy guardian... Or is he?
The anime-like scene you wrote in the note: I can totally see what you mean! Baisyl in grateful uke mode with considerate seme Kedean... XD
I'm very much looking forward to the next chapter!

Please, please, never apologize for updating too quickly.
Thank you.
Loved the chapter, love you, so much love right now...
XoXo

loving this story! i just hopr theres some twist where he kills his brother but not really cuz he would be devastated!

Awesome~ Don't worry about the dancing scenes--they were written beautifully. I feel really sorry for Baisyl because he feels so lost in his own skin (totally understandable, the rain must be a godsend). But the interactions between him and Kedean are so funny and "adorable." I love your story~~

ME likes, <3 I won't comment everytime but know that there is a silent lurker here :PxD please update soon <3 and thank you!

-facepalm- Oh Zyric. Great chapter, Baisyl and Kedean are so adorable together and all this blushing and flirting is so fun to read.