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April 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well, no, the last chapter definitley didn't suck. It all runs nice along the way, leaving me always eager to see when Kedean takes the next step - being as correct as he seems to be. And now, why Baisyl can't use his magic, while his brother seems like a top-notch-wizard...
I simply like your story...
The chapter was great. Baisyl bluffing his way out of such as situation, leaving me wondering, how a competent guy like him could be cursed at all. And how he didn't manage to flee his familiy (okay, well, they are of similar blood...). I am just always wondering when they can't stand the tiptoeing any more and finally follow their urges. And when Kedean helps Baisyl break the curse. And what will happen with all the other characters.
Hope you have better experiences from now on...
I simply like your story...
The chapter was great. Baisyl bluffing his way out of such as situation, leaving me wondering, how a competent guy like him could be cursed at all. And how he didn't manage to flee his familiy (okay, well, they are of similar blood...). I am just always wondering when they can't stand the tiptoeing any more and finally follow their urges. And when Kedean helps Baisyl break the curse. And what will happen with all the other characters.
Hope you have better experiences from now on...
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April 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I adore this story. I love that your characters are so original and different. I love Zyric and i hope you don't kill him off :(, in fact pair him up with Rhyan i dono why but i love the thought of them together.
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April 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love Bais, he is such an unique and original character, and such an unrelenting naughty flirt.. he should win the prize, which undoubtly is the the big bad warror Mr K, [who is not bad at all] but kind and noble.
If, that is, his beautiful lordship don't alow his foolish noble pride interfere with the situation and his much hidden affection for his bodyguard. Despite his apparient smoke screen of lust for a merely so-called casual relationships... his lovely dragon lordship wants much more from the big guy!
G,ever impatient and wanting more.
If, that is, his beautiful lordship don't alow his foolish noble pride interfere with the situation and his much hidden affection for his bodyguard. Despite his apparient smoke screen of lust for a merely so-called casual relationships... his lovely dragon lordship wants much more from the big guy!
G,ever impatient and wanting more.
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April 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Baisyl is devious, but I like his character. Kedean really is far to innocent for his own good. I think Baisyl will be good for him.
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March 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great story, getting even better, please don't make us wait too long for more! G
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March 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Loved it really. Nice sex scenes and relationship developments... plus some new plot at the end? Was the person with Alroy Baisyl's brother?
I'm glad Kedean and Baisyl finally had some sexual relief, and that Kedean also makes some moves on his sexy charge and has some thoughts about Baisyl and himself... and he preferred Kedean's male form too! For good reasons too. Also, I find it rather funny that the noble uses more curse words and has less manners than the man who is supposed to be below him in status...
I love it when Baisyl shows some vulnerability sometimes and Kedean becomes all protective. Will that Moreah really be able to help him with his curse?
I'm very much looking forward to the next chapter, as usual!
I'm glad Kedean and Baisyl finally had some sexual relief, and that Kedean also makes some moves on his sexy charge and has some thoughts about Baisyl and himself... and he preferred Kedean's male form too! For good reasons too. Also, I find it rather funny that the noble uses more curse words and has less manners than the man who is supposed to be below him in status...
I love it when Baisyl shows some vulnerability sometimes and Kedean becomes all protective. Will that Moreah really be able to help him with his curse?
I'm very much looking forward to the next chapter, as usual!
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March 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo, I like this story so much! It's so hard finding good stories, I do hope you continue updating. But don't kill Zyric! :O I have a horrible habit of falling inlove with the minor characters and I LOVE him, I would love to se more of Zyric and Alroy! (Don't kill Zyric!) <3 :P
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March 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Just found this story today, and I'm very glad I did. I simply adore it so far, and I have to say it's vastly different from anything else I've read. Which is definitely a good thing lol.
By the way, about how tall is Kedean anyway? You never actually tell us except to say he's giant-like. But an aproximate guess would be lovely, if nothing else to help with my own little mental pictures.
Thanks ^_^
By the way, about how tall is Kedean anyway? You never actually tell us except to say he's giant-like. But an aproximate guess would be lovely, if nothing else to help with my own little mental pictures.
Thanks ^_^
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March 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, finally the kiss...I was beginning to think Baisyl was going to lose his cockiness. It was nice to see them interacting and gaining speed like a ball rolling downhill and I loved it. They got somewhere, learned a tad bit more (Kedean never being sick...Baisyl was rightfully startled)...
So, I hope you continue soon (with more story, more Baisyl and Kedean interacting...). Love the story.
So, I hope you continue soon (with more story, more Baisyl and Kedean interacting...). Love the story.
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March 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i like this story.....the sex scene is good for the first time, i hope when they do all the way sex is include their feeling for each other...love