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May 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It feels like it's been so long since an update... but it hasn't; I'm just so impatient for more! I loved this chapter (as I've loved them all). I totally enjoyed Baisyl's "discomfort" towards the sewer and its dwellers. I kinda also want to know if there's more to Baisyl's magic than we know. His brother is super powerful, it seems, but the fairy lady is after Baisyl, not his brother... so, doesn't that mean there's something special about Baisyl? I can't wait for more (and hopefully some more Baisyl/Kedean lurve moments~).
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May 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, great chapter! I didn't expect Rhyan ending up with Zyric but I'm very excited about it. Zyric's awkwardness was so cute and they had great chemistry together, in a comical way too. Zyric trying to appear all tough, even though Rhyan is not impressed - probably because he can sense that Zyric is a big softie. :)
Also, isn't Baisyl a tease? In a good way, though, because I like it when he manages to ruffle Kedean's feathers. And a jealous Kedean is quite a treat, indeed. I can definitely feel Baisyl's smugness. Their moment with the dressing and massage was quite hot too. Lots of anticipation, and I could totally understand Baisyl's reaction to Kedean's closeness. I can't wait for the hot mansex if it involves those too...
And I'm very much looking forward to Rhyan and Zyric bonding more and trying to get out of their predicament. I'm a bit afraid for them, though... I hope Kedean and Baisyl will find a way to save them. And no killing Zyric (or Rhyan), please?
Also, isn't Baisyl a tease? In a good way, though, because I like it when he manages to ruffle Kedean's feathers. And a jealous Kedean is quite a treat, indeed. I can definitely feel Baisyl's smugness. Their moment with the dressing and massage was quite hot too. Lots of anticipation, and I could totally understand Baisyl's reaction to Kedean's closeness. I can't wait for the hot mansex if it involves those too...
And I'm very much looking forward to Rhyan and Zyric bonding more and trying to get out of their predicament. I'm a bit afraid for them, though... I hope Kedean and Baisyl will find a way to save them. And no killing Zyric (or Rhyan), please?
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May 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm really very much enjoying this, it's very unique and creative and well written. I hope you're able to update again soon. :)
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May 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
aw Baisyl is so crafty. He and Kedean make a hilarious couple. I'm dying for the next chapter. love the story. I'm also excited to see how Zyric and Rhyan get along.
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May 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Made my week! Can't wait for the next update... literally. You have me
compulsively checking the new updates page.. mean, mean writer :)
Loved it as usual,
XOXO
compulsively checking the new updates page.. mean, mean writer :)
Loved it as usual,
XOXO
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May 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thanks so much for the update! I love this story :)
I was wondering why he wasn't worried too, so thanks! I can't wait for the next part! <3
I was wondering why he wasn't worried too, so thanks! I can't wait for the next part! <3
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May 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I was super duper excited when I saw that you updated! Baisyl made me laugh throughout the entire chapter. I'm glad to see that the two of them are "unofficial" friends now. I can't wait to see, though, if Kedean is right about controlling your own destiny...
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May 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I hope you mean your story to be humorous... because it is... it makes me chuckle and I find the double gender thing sexy. Obviousily the pair are attracted to one another despite Bas' so-called curse, but my impression is Mr Bodyguard would be happy to bed either incarnation of the lovely Bas. Hopefully you wont let the class thing interfere with their relationship. Love your story and praise to your muse, for its original and intertain bent. I look forward to more story soon! G
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May 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Funny how it went from rather comical with Baisyl drunk to a more serious conversation about the prophecy - and Baisyl even managed to make Kedean lose his calm for a bit!
All things considered, I like Kedean's thoughts about the prophecy being only one possible future, able to change depending on their choices. Particularly because I don't want him to have to kill his own brother. :'(
Also, if I didn't review the previous chapter: I really liked to know more about Baisyl's mother and how she still cares about her children, since before that I had the impression that she was more indifferent to them. And Rhyan's powers are quite special and impressive, and Alroy is full of surprises. I wonder where Rhyan disappeared to too? My guess would be that he landed where his mother is, since he's not with Baisyl. And that would definitely complicate matters since she's not supposed to know he has powers and he could be seeked by her enemies too...
Oh and I look forward to a jealous Baisyl and his reasons for being so (since Kedean is so proper and in control all the time)!
All things considered, I like Kedean's thoughts about the prophecy being only one possible future, able to change depending on their choices. Particularly because I don't want him to have to kill his own brother. :'(
Also, if I didn't review the previous chapter: I really liked to know more about Baisyl's mother and how she still cares about her children, since before that I had the impression that she was more indifferent to them. And Rhyan's powers are quite special and impressive, and Alroy is full of surprises. I wonder where Rhyan disappeared to too? My guess would be that he landed where his mother is, since he's not with Baisyl. And that would definitely complicate matters since she's not supposed to know he has powers and he could be seeked by her enemies too...
Oh and I look forward to a jealous Baisyl and his reasons for being so (since Kedean is so proper and in control all the time)!
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May 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I've been passing over this story and passing over it; I'm glad I finally stopped to read it because so far, I've been enjoying it greatly. :) Can't wait for the next chapters.