rate_review Reviews

Loving your story so far. Though, I will admit it isn't as interesting to me when Kedean and Baisyl (sorry if I spelt that wrong) go at it when Syl is a chick. It's better when he's a dude lol but, overall its good, because it kinda shows that Kedean likes Syl for who he is, rather than what gender he is or what he looks like. XD

I absolutely love your story and hope you finish it. Or update soon or whatever. It's awesome. Though, I think I'll go put it on my alert list on fictionpress, so that I can get updates on it there XD

Sexy time= perfect. Writer= perfect. Story=perfect.
Reader= perfectly satisfied.

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It's utterly perfect :D, omg... *loses ability to think for a while*

yum finally some real smexing :D Poor Baisyl, the both of them are so emotionally repressed, but it's so fun to see them struggle through their mutual awkwardness around each other. I hope Baisyl can lure Kedean into another amorous liaison soon. Awesome chapter. I hope you can squash that writer's block soon I need more story!!!!

It's about time! I loved it! I think you may actually be getting better at writing too (if that's even possible for you!). I love how Baisyl is totally head-over-heals... and it's incredibly sad that he knows that he may not be able to do anything about it knowing Kedean's past history with lovers. But Baisyl isn't like all those others... I don't think he's just going to give up. I think he may fight. Or maybe he won't have to... since Kedean may be a little head-over-heals himself. ;)

I spent the better part of my day reading through the story thus far, and I thoroughly enjoyed myself. The characters are very personable, the dialogue smart, and the story is wonderfully engaging. I'm can't wait for you to update again, since the last chapter was a major block to my metaphorical cock. You're doing fantastically, please keep it up!

I really like your story. And it was interesting to get a bit more background of the mysterious Kedean.
And yippie, looks like Kedean and Baisyl are getting closer and closer to realize and act on their feelings (well, maybe not realize). Fighting in the rain is so classical great, as action is always.
It wouldn't even be strange for me, if they do something later on with Baisyl as a woman - he seems to feel a tiny little bit more comfortable in this form with Kedean...

But, well - does Kedean have a second brother out there? Sounded like that.

Hope a muse continues to bless you...

Haha, I love your descriptions and how you've made the rain a part of the story, it's so hot when they're wet of course :D

lovely chapter as usual. The mud wrestling was a nice touch :D