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I love this story. I like how you write too, easy to understand buy still nice and descriptive.
Can't wait to see what happens next!

Time to bribe your muse, buy him a beer or a shot of rum,a chocolate bar, and then something extra salty... twirl around 3 times, then bow to the north, south, east, AND west! Write down any 3 sexy words and connect them together in a story!

If that doesn't work give your muse a good kick in the ass for me, for the little bastard lazy!

Gslinger, the Wizard of the Word

Go ahead try it, might work, it might work???

enjoying the story so far. though, with what Kedean told Basil about having his fortune told once, not looking forward to him having to kill his brother. T_T
ah, will have to see how it goes.

I absolutely love this story, I have since the very first chapter. Your characters are complex and unique, and feel very real even with the fantasy elements of the story. The storyline has been fun and engaging so far, I'd really love to see it continued. Hoping for an update soon.

This is one Of the best stories I've read in a looooong time! I don't usually review anything because the storys never quite piek my interest, however this story is amazing! It has love adventure and mistery to it with a healthy dose of hanky panky *Q* please keep this story going! It would be a shame not to know what happens to leaden and basil, and I'd also love to see how the lill brothers develop either a friend ship or from what I gather some healthy romance between them too :3 I can't wait for the other chapters I'm so exited to read them!!!

a great start! I really like your style of writing, and the plot is far more interesting then your normal boy meets boy stuff

Loving it! Your characters make me squeel

I love Baisyl, its always neat to see characters with those wierd personality traits.

Thank you very much for your answers (I'm relieved about the cuties too!) and for the chapter! It's nice to see Kedean getting worked up sometimes and losing his calm, and nice to know more about him too. I do hope Baisyl will be able to change his view on love, though... Now I'll go and read the next chapter. Sex, right? ;)

Loved it! The sex was so hot and intense... And a jealous (because of Kedean) Baisyl is quite exquisite. I wonder how Kedean would have reacted if Baisyl had admitted his feelings to him (instead of pretending otherwise)? Would it have made Kedean want to run away, or forced him to consider his own feelings (which I'm sure are there and growing)? I'd also like to believe that Kedean will find a way to free his brother without giving Baisyl away. The latter should comfort himself (at least) with the fact that Kedean promised a second time... But they'll have to get dirty again if Baisyl wants to do it as a man (the bath went to waste, though).
By the way, is your inspiration back now? Because I assure you that it's a very interesting story, with great characters and plot, and I (and I'm sure I'm not the only one) would be very disappointed to never know how it ends... :)