rate_review Reviews

good book^^

lol, Zyric should have learned the keep your mouth shut from his brother years ago

I wanted to revew this chapter before I finished reading, chapt. 35, falling together and falling apart, although I know the story's complete, or I'd probably forget what chapter it was. I think now would've been a better time for Baisyl to get pregnant, instead of during drunk sex. Its so loving! Could say outside, he's male, but, due to the curse, inside, he's still female, like the time of the month during a rain storm explanation. Look male, but still bleeding. I'm glad you made it so easy for him to revert to looking male. Of course, if you hadn't, there'd be a lot more male/female instead of male/male.

I loved this story so much!

Ah poor Baisyl, I'm dying to know what he does when he finds out he's carrying Kedean's child--epic meltdown I assume. Is Zyric really going back home with Alroy?
Anyway,amazing story. I hope your muse is generous for when you're writing the next installment.

Yoz will post the swequel to this here, right?*puppy eyes*
I wanna read more about Rhyan; and Basyl's pregnancy...
pretty please with a cherry on the top?

Oh my heart hurts for Kedean and Baisyl! Looking forward to the next one! I would beta, if you like :) camargo.40824@gmail.com!

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It's kind of alarming just how often I check back for updates - it's at the stage where all I need is to type 'c' and my computer suggests here. Which just goes to show how awesome and addicting this story is. I occasionally forget authors have lives outside of the internet/writing but I want you to know that I gladly will wait a damned long time to find out where this goes. Take me places and show me things, it'll be worth it in the end. Are Baisyl and Kedean EVER gonna find out they're expecting though? SOMEONE has to say SOMETHING. Guh.

I think it was a fairly good ending to the book. You know there's more to come, but it's not a cliffhanger of doom that readers often dislike writers for. I'm happy to hear you've been invited to submit a short story and good luck :D can't wait for the sequel. I'm quite curious to see how things will turn out. marvelous job!!!!

AHHHHHH!! I can't believe it's over! It was a fantastic ending! I cannot wait for the next book~~