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June 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
i really liked the story, I was wondering if you are going to continue it?
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December 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I can't remember how many times I've gotten off to this story, and I especially like the scene on the train. Hoping to see the scene where Kaede takes Kaori's virginity. :)
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July 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is a very good story, one of the hottest i have read in its category, please continue.
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June 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Your first time writing one of these, eh? Well, all I can say is...good grief, keep writing! And if you were to write a third chapter, I wouldn't object.I'd welcome it (if I say 'please', will that help?). Great read and good luck with your writing. :)
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March 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really liked it. The only problem I can think of is all the pronouns. When she keeps doing something to her, making her react in some way, it can get a little bit confusing. I could figure it out easily enough most of the time, but I was stumped once or twice. It would take a lot more than that to ruin this story for me, though.
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February 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
more chapters please.
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January 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i've got nothing profound and even useful to say. just that so far i've really enjoyed this story.
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January 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hot
and good job developing characters and a bit of plot
but why do the (seemingly white) characters have Japanese names?
and good job developing characters and a bit of plot
but why do the (seemingly white) characters have Japanese names?