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This is very well written! I'm really looking forward to reading more

i am really getting into this story, i cant wait for the next chapter, please update more soon!!!!! :)

At first I was like "Eh it sounds okay." So i clicked and was plesantly surprised that the summary didn't really do the story justice. It's a lot better than I had expected. I'm looking foreward to your next update. Oh and can we get a more detailed description of Logan and Raven. Just a question you don't have to if you don't want to.

This story is ok so far, but it has one great drawback that takes away from it: the world is confusing. The first chapter had a horse-drawn carts and campfires, so I figured this was in some kind of historical setting, but then there's jeeps, jeans and electricity, and that doesn't add up to me.. I'm sure, in some pats of the world, both means of transportation might be used, but the story needs to explain everything a bit more clearly... I'm sure you see the whole picture, but we, as readers, have no idea where to place this stry either in time or place... please make that clearer, and also if this is supposed to be read as an alternative universe of earth or "real" earth, if you know what I mean... tess us where we are and when before starting the story... ;)

I hope to read more of this story.

Poor Raven has been through so much but he still has some fiestiness left...Logan is an engima...he worked as a slaver, but that wasn't his fault he was raised and taught to do those things. I also like Russ he may tease Logan and Raven but he still is kind...I'm glad that Raven told Russ that he trusts Logan.


Keep up the good work.

I really like your new story. I am so happy that Logan rescued Raven from the slave traders. I can't wait to see how Raven settles into his new home and job.

I like this, but I'm thinking Raven's problems are far from over. Please continue.