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.. chapter 1 and 2 seems to be the same text, although in chapter 1 it's all mashed together...?

Yes, have just fixed that - hit a few snags with editing.

great upload

I always found strange people's favoritism of Caddy; the brat got on my nerves so many times! But I love learning more about Ghali, he has by far been my favorite carrier because he is not selfish or dumb, he's resilient and beautiful. I hope you continue with his story in a sequel of sorts, because although it seemed as he's already had his happily ever after there is still a lot left to explore. Even if Ghali is obedient he still embodies the strength of the desert and because of it he will fight his husband. Love it!

Uh oh, did Phidias get disciplined for Caddy's mistake? Hope to see Caddy's story soon!

Caddy was one of my favorite characters. This made me happywiggle so hard. Can't wait to read it with the revisions~
Love your style of writing. Stay classy!

At least we knew Ghali wasn't raped mercilessly on the floor of some tent...
that would've pulled the angst factor up and past the scale of ten.

But then again, when I think back about how Ghali had tried to run, and the misfortune of getting caught by the wrong people. It wasn't wrong, for him to run, of cause, he'd try to run. I don't think he'd have gotten into as much trouble, if Azim was the one who caught him again. but........... well............
life's life? *shrugs* what to do...

is there gonna be more to this one? I really like Ghali's story. I hope there's more, with Ghali in it.

Wow. just wow I love your writing. Poor Phideas and Caddy, more Ghali in a world they never wanted.