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Pooo! is annoyed.
the format kept running off thge page and woukldn't let me scroll across to read it.
*pouts
Can't wait to find out what Kali actually is. ^^

I love Mi's bubbly attitude but that chick is dense. I kinda expected the sisters to fight a little bit to get outta there and back home. And the Clan trying to work to make them believe that they're safer with them. A little more push and pull between this group. But I am excited to read more of Kali's dreams and figure out what the hell is going on. Good work. Keep the updates coming.

Can't wait for the next update. I'm really excited to see what Kali's past life was like. Keep up the good work and work hard. :D

certainly sounds like Kali is a something or has the blood of somthing huh and not just fom her other life.

btw, whats with all the format changes? Also, i'm glad there are a lot less spelling and grama errors. They were making it hard to read. Love the idea though and they'll have to think up anotheer lie to spin in a couple of months for Kali's bro too. wonder what the fanngs will think when she runs outta meds.

Hey this is a really good concept and getting really interesting. Here are a few things to watch out for: Spelling Mistakes!!, Space your paragraphs out (they're so long and blocked together I can't read through them), and pay attention to your word choice. I know you have a pretty good image of your story and characters but more description.
Good work!! I really do like it :D Update soon.

Hey, I like it. Well to be honest I couldn't stop reading it lol. Keep going with the story I can't wait to find out what the deal is with Kali.
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good fic.. you should check out mine and review it... it's Lynly's chronical