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September 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
"Ren’s dick didn’t matter, and never would" made me laugh out loud. I think you covered most bases, except the lack of condom and the fact that ass-to-mouth is a health risk. >.>
Good God.
Good God.
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January 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
lol I feel like this ending is more *technically* true to the yaoi genre, but at the same not a bit bit too ... serious :P I personally like version 1 a little more. lawlz though, I really appreciate seeing something like this just so effortlessly tear yaoi apart. haha, so lawlz
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December 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You're going for nauseatingly stereotypical, right? If so, congrats. I think I may try something similar also, but fantasy. Something that lets out the most perverse a la Japanese fantasies and spreads them to the world. I'm hoping for an update from you, it was hot.