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"plot development, character growth, and logic be damned!" ROFL - Awesome line! Wonderful laugh and great satire!

(Note: Recaptcha is Pedo Happcack...)

HILARIOUS! OMG, you wrote everything that I have been thinking for awhile. I adore Yoai but yeah there are many elements that can be made fun of. Good job.

lawlz, I'm so glad to see another person carry the torch for a bit :P this was lulz, especially the whole "tears flooding the bathroom to his knees" thing, hahaha

This was brilliant... had me giggling like an idiot through the whole thing. I have to agree with the above review, there are a couple of grammar mistakes that need fixing, but I didn't think they were too bad.
I started reading yaoi because someone (on AFF I think) mentioned "Haru wo Daite Ita" to me, and I was hooked. And you've nailed just about every cliche, that I know, in this little story.
So, standing ovation and a stomach-ache of giggles. :)
My favorite part was this...

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“From now on, we will fuck whenever I want. I will spend hours upon hours lovingly preparing your ass, unless I’m extremely horny, in which case I will jump you without warning and take what I need. I will never touch your penis, because you don’t have one. This is because I was clearly a homophobic straight man at the beginning of thist story, and the switch is never addressed or explained. I just jump in bed with you against my will, because the writer makes me do it. Is that understood?”
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Though they never stood a chance at growing as characters, their universe was vague, and their plot was paper-thin, Taichi and Ren had lots and lots of sex. There were no emotional or legal consequences what-so-ever for the rape. In fact, it's the reason Ren fell for Taichi! The hot, and completely illogical yaoi pairing lived happily ever after. End Quote.

This is so painfully true... and yet so frigging funny... Good job.

Very funny!! Especially the suffocating tits in the beginning!!

LOL, I loved it! XD Even if you butcher it, would people notice since it's a bad!fic anyway? >;D

'Ren was so kawaii! Taichi was in love, and he had to have him right now, plot development, character growth, and logic be damned!'

You slayed me with this. I was nearly on the floor with laughter So many brilliant quotes and astute observations. And can I just say how much I love the title?

*lol-* this was so much fun! -glances at my Yaoi bookshelf- and sadly mostly true... ;) here's to more and better yaoi in our lives!

lol! I thought this was funny as hell! Good job! XD;

Oh, my goodness, that was wonderfully funny! You've captured all the tortured lack of logic, vacuous plot development and total disregard for reason that yaoi can fall prey to, and poked it perfectly. Well done! :D