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for Ancient legacy

by nekochannya

person Tahn
schedule December 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for more, good job!
person Bunny
schedule June 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
ah the story has such a wonderful beginning and characters. hope to see it picked up and continued someday
person dekorx
schedule January 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was very excited, I loved the chase! Ahaha, but I think the next chapter is going to be even better, if I think what will happen, happens! Please, update as soon as you can! >_
person jyanx
schedule January 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is a really wonderful story so far. Your plot is compelling, and the more I read the more I want to keep reading. I love how your developing the world and characters slowly letting us find out more about them and how everything works together. Your language is practically poetry, and build such a clear picture in my mind. It truly is beautiful, thank you so much for sharing.
person addiena_saffir
schedule January 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying the story so far, but i have a lot of questions. Shouldn't the other brothers be told their 'mate' has been found? Why is cinead the only one on the otherside trying to convince him, shouldn't all the brothers be charged with this task? I'm looking forward to reading the answers. Happy writing.
schedule January 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What ever you do, don't stop. This story is incredible so far.
person Hi!!!!
schedule January 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Can I just say I love this and can't wait for more? Because I love it and can't wait for more. That makes me feel better.
person Itrasheditgood
schedule January 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Way to a really good start, keep going.
person Ovelkara
schedule December 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
love the story made me said to get to the end of chapter 2 i wanted more! update soon it looks like an awesome story ^_^
person Bluefishie
schedule December 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Liking this so far! Hope that you continue!