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for Matthew

by kiyoai

schedule December 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
omggg i've been dreaming of a sequel (not white christmas hahaha)!!!!!!!!
this is the best present ever, seriously ;-; i almost had a coronary when i saw 'matthew' on the front page!!!

asdkjsfd i'm going to read the three chapters over and over until you update ;-;!!

oh oh and i bet it's alrick in muffin's (he will forever be muffin to me) apartment!! but when is muffin gonna see asher?? and have sexy times?? and make asher jealous with vincenzo hehehehe

i've really missed your writing mahsa!! i hope you update soon!
schedule December 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh and btw, i love how in the first chapter asher is perving on the mental image of muffin CRYING! the dirty, sadistic (or, according to him, controlling) bastard >:)
person Lucie
schedule December 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh how I've missed you and your cliff hangers XD I love muffin, I regularly go back and read it especially the last chapter and when I saw the title Matthew, I was like is it *the* Matthew? and I was incredibly happy to find out that it was your sequel to muffin and in the coming time how ever long it may be I look forward to reading Matthew's life once more twist and turn before my very eye's XD
merry Christmas x
person Toni
schedule December 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YOU MADE MY CHRISTMAS AS WELL
I love you. xD
person kale
schedule December 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Poor Muffin eh Matthew. He's punishing himself for things he really wasn't responsible for. He's denied himself pretty much everything that he enjoys. He's doped to the gills. He's worse off than he was before.
And am I the only one that kinda wants him and Vincent to get together?
schedule December 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YES!YESYESYESYESYES!!!!!!!!!!
i'm soooooooo happy that i checked your page today, you just made my day a million times better.
can't wait until the next chapter! i'm buzzing with happiness that you're really writing more :D
shall stalk you every day for the next chapter!
person Mint
schedule December 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG! AN UPDATE and so soon. I LOVE THIS STORY, and you XD AH! It was nicee seein vincenzo back so soon. Alrick is obviously probly the other person at his apartment. Or ELena or Daniel. CANT WAIT UNTIL THE reunion w/Asher. I miss him. It's blatantly obvious they love each other. I hope they tell each other in this story. I hope Asher doesn't torture him or something. even hittin him is bad. but he's pissed... and you said he may haveta pay w/blood. Which is surprising. So ASher knows WHY Matt betrayed/ratted him out, and he's still pissed? I sorta find that difficult to believe b/c like HE THOUGHT ASH was FUCKIN TRYIN TO KILL HIM. I'm sure any other normal person might may have DONE THE SAME. ANyway, please bring Asher bacc soon. I hope you can make a happy ending. AND PLEASE UPDATE ASAP! EVen tonight again if possible. HA
person Will Treaty
schedule December 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi and Merry Christmas!

Thank you Santa for another new chapter to my favorite story. You're the best.

I loved the scene at the pub when Vincenzio meets Matty's friends,

“Ashley… Rick and Vincent?” Asher/Alrick/Vincenzio

You are too funny!

I am confused though by chapter 1 when Matthew/Muffin calls Asher and says he's in trouble and needs help.
Vincenzio is with Matthew now and I think Alrick will be next so why would he need Asher's help when I know he would be protected by them. Asher was thinking about Alrick and his security setup with phones and stuff. I dunno, I am a little slow and don't understand it. He couldn't have called Asher after they were with him, could he have? Did he call before, maybe doesn't remember cause of his meds or something?

Oh, well, I know it will probably make sense later so I will wait and see what led up to that phone call to Asher.

Still can't wait until Asher sees Matthew again after four long years.



person Avernion
schedule December 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love you for writing this and being so awesome. My heart wasn't ready to let these people go. My hug will arive in your mailbox tomorrow.
person Will Treaty
schedule December 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, it's me again, I just re-read chapter one and I should have said that Asher thought it was Alrick's phone with static and he thought of last time he had talked with Alrick (not a security system) don't know where I got that from. Just wanted to mention that and I am sorry for messing up my review.