rate_review Reviews

This truly is a beautiful work of art. I love how broken Matthew is - mostly in these kinds of stories, some shit happens and bam! The gangster the kid betrayed and the ganster are all well and happy again. I love how this is different, it takes a different, more realistic stand point on the whole concept.
Besides, the whole homeless thing in Muffin was just awesome - I love how you have developed Matthew. I really do and I can;t wait for Asher to get back into the picture. This is going to be a bumpy ride, but I'm gonna love it :)

;A; Oh, the drama. I'm waiting for Asher to come back into the story, just because I really, really, want to see how things will turn out once that bomb is dropped into the plot. Matthew really needs to chill out a bit, lol. Poor boy doesn't realize that he's protected by fangirls and a plot shield. having just finished Muffin I got to say that I'm going strong for the VincenzoxMatthew action. It needs a name, did you snag one already? Vincenthew? Vinew? Vinma? <- That sounded strangely Russian. We need something for the fanbase's battle cry, "VincentxMatthew! Aroo!" Is a bit long lol.

Anyways, keep up your writing. if you made this into a trilogy or anything in print format I'd buy it. All of it. And I don't even know where this is going. I've even bookmarked you so I can continue stalking you. >.>

haha that little sexy scene between Vincenzo and Matt got me excited. O_O; There was definitely some sexual tension between them even from part 1 so I'm waiting for it to continue here. I'm sure Vincenzo likes Matt or else he wouldn't care for him as much. Lolz It seems like I'm pushing for a little Matt/Vincenzo since Asher is missing. XD

Wow, you're quick at updating. I'm very non-committal when I attempt to write stories, because I'm bombarded with several ideas at once and when I start to write I lose the faith. So I stick to reading instead.

Well, I think it was the learning that made French boring for me. I just wish Foreign languages were easier to learn. ;__;

Leah is older than I thought she would be! Like Matthew, I thought she'd be something like seven.

How could you ever last a four-year abstinence with someone like Vincenzo walking around your house half-naked? Gosh, if I was Matthew, I wouldn't be able to...

I have a good feeling that the climatic scene (in the prologue) is coming up next! Or so I hope! The rain is a sign, right?

Argh, can't wait~ :D
Thanks for the chapter, and update when you can!

Thank you for updating, and yay for questions answered. So Vincenzo *is* still working for Asher, I guess that makes sense. But he's burning up with jealousy of Asher and lust for our hero (I shall choose to assume... evidence, schmevidence, who needs that).

Aww, Leah reminds me of a little girl I used to babysit. So presh. Eww tuna melt. Matthew is a crappy babysitter, I must say. I hope Vincenzo finds out about the meds and gives Matthew a grumpy talking to (or gives him a little cuddling, if that works). Otherwise, I'm really not looking forward to what else Matthew's going to screw up while under the influence. Especially if it's so bad it requires calling Asher for help - that's a bad sign. Please, please don't do anything to Alrick. I swear the dog part was painful enough, I think I'll be bawling if you kill him off. At least Matthew's showing signs of maturing. He's capable of thinking of others and at least attempting (though failing, lol) to be polite to women.

And aren't you clever with your explanation of the whole Pickett and Carter mess! The whole kind of good guy/ kind of bad guy / sort of mobster and events in Muffin are easier for my feeble brain to understand now.

To the reviewer looking for a name, I nominate Muffvin. Sigh. I can't make up my mind - I want Asher and Matthew to reconcile, but those scenes with Vincenzo are so hot. Why can't they have a little hippie-freelove-mobster commune and share Muffin? What's unrealistic about that? ::pouting::

As I reread it (I always reread most of ur chappies after u post!), I realize Alrick may possibly be hiding from Carter. Am I right? Am I? And update

Matty, Mattie, Mathias, Matthias, Matt-matt. Matt-baby.

Cuz i wanted to, and it was fun. :D
And the suspense starts all over again!

Poor boy. Dealing with Asher and his own issues 4 years ago have left him even more confused than he started out.
Reading Muffin I just wanted him happy. Now that I think about it, it was selfish and unhealthy for Asher to get involved with someone as emotionally unstable as Matthew.
As an adult he should have known better. He may have grown to care for him later on, but the intial decision to have a physical relationship was selfish. He wanted Muffin, so he took what he wanted.

I don’t know why I feel lonely that Vincenzo has become so much sweeter, but I do. Maybe it’s because he’s so much nicer to the girl than he ever was to Matthew (who I still call Muffin in my heart). Maybe it’s because it means everyone has changed so much and Matt wasn’t there to be a part of it. It’s like they’re no longer the people we know :´( It’s like they are shadows of their past with an all new wrapping.

I am also dying of curiosity about what’s going to crash and burn so bright that Asher is called into the mix. Asher. I miss his insanity.

OH MY GOD I AM SO GLAD THAT MATTHEW/MUFFIN IS BACK. (Yes, that deserves all caps.) I was an avid reader of Muffin almost from the start and I've never reviewed or anything, but I feel as though I have to now, because I AM SO FLIPPING STOKED THAT YOU ARE WRITING MORE. You are an amazing writer and I love your stories. I love the characterization of Matthew and how much he has changed so far in the story. It's honestly the best Christmas/holiday gift ever. I longingly look forward to reading more of this story. I have missed that boy so much. AND I LOVE YOU. In a totally non creepy way of course. ;)