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by kiyoai

person Anon
schedule June 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I was going to donate because great writers deserve support but i noticed your kind of slow with the updates which doesn't seem like a fair trade. Anyways love your stories.
schedule June 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Mahsa! Good luck on your job interview. Of course since you posted this in May you've probably had the interview. I hope you got the job! :) I hope you love the states!!!

Oh Muffin, Muffin, Muffin...you made the wrong move again. lol

What a fantastic chapter! I was riveted to every word!

I felt Matty's jealousy and pain every time he looked at Sabrina and Asher. Even though he knows it's all an act for Asher, for Sabrina it's not.

I hope at least that Nico tells him interesting things about his Italian. Unless that was just a ruse to get Matty in there alone with him. I think though that Asher will be trying to knock down the door pretty soon.

Ok, I'll be here patiently waiting the next update! Good luck again, Mahsa, on your job! :)
person Kiri
schedule June 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I just want to let you know, that I have been an avid reader of both Muffin and Mathew, and that I patiently wait all year round for the next chapter. I just wanted to let you know that even though the chapters take forever to come out, I am always ready and I hope to read another one soon. Good luck and good faith my friend, and thank you for these wonderful stories.
person chibikodo
schedule May 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
My only response to Matt's choice is 'noooooooo' haha Honestly though, I fear he chose a path from which he will never recover. Of course being in love with Asher has inexorably changed his life already.

Good luck with the job prospect!
schedule May 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Dear Mahsa,
I just wanted to say that you're awesome. ♥
I fell in love with you, Muffin and his story the second I started to read. And now I can't wait to see what he's going to do with Nico and how Asher's going to react and what Sabrina will be up to and oh my god, seriously, you have me so hooked on your story!
Keep up the good work!
person Ash
schedule May 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
S C R EAMS INTO THE DISTANCE. EVERY CHAPTER FEELS LIKE A CLIFFHANGER YOU'RE KILLING ME. I've been a fan of this series since the beginning and a r g h I love it a lot and your writing style physically pulls me into the story man. Fucking hell. It actually pains me to see Matt struggle so much within the circle. They continued to shut him out thinking he wasn't useful and I JUST REALLY WANT THINGS TO WORK OUT BETWEEN ASHER AND MATT BUT THAT'S GONNA TAKE SO MUCH WORK BECAUSE THEY ARE BOTH A MESS I SWEAR. But this chapter in particular the feels--Nico reminds me of a meticulous cat playing with a mouse. I just know Nico is going to do something to Matt be it physically or mentally man. BESIDES THAT GOOD LUCK ON YOUR JOB DUDE--AND CAN'T WAIT TO SEE HOW IT WORKS OUT FOR YOU. B) While you're gone I'll be re-reading all the things seriously. I swear if you ever publish Muffin & Matthew I'd buy them in a heartbeat.
person Avernion
schedule May 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
So sad. In just ended way ro sad T^T Poor poor Muffin. He just can't seem to catch a break.
person Rivers
schedule May 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I just can not get enough of this story...I do hope when you are up and writing again that you flood us more Matthew brilliance
person amothepirate
schedule May 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
oh man!! Until august or september?!! ARGH!! This story is definitely worth the wait though. *sighs happily* Oh, Matthew, what are you doing? Great chapter as always.
schedule May 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, I just saw this story due to the recent update, so I went back and read Muffin as the warning states, and then this one. OMG, this is a great story! But now I can't wait until the next updates for the rest of the story!!! Please be back soon!