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Just a final note: when it comes to pairing wars, I tend to shake my head and hide in a very deep hole. I'm perfectly fine with multi-pairings and if you'd like to pair Matthew with the keychain as well, more power to you. o/ As long as it is well-written I'm totally okay with whatever you throw at me. Cute pairings, angst pairings, doomed pairings, killing-each-other-pairings...They are all awesome as long as they are well written. Seriously. I think I will even pair Asher/Carter in my head because mortal cousenemies is always fun. XD

Where are the new chapters before you go back to school? Pretty please. It's been three whole days and I am really suffering here. I know I will have to be patient when you are back in school and the updates will be longer but you promised you would update faster until then. (SMILES, BEGS, CRAWLS.........) END MY SUFFERING AND BE KIND. This is pure torture.... the waiting.......the angst......the nasty cliffhangers you are sooooo gooooood at. (Kisses and Muffins)

Hey! 1 more thing! lol I know ANOTHER review? Sorry if you're annoyed but I noticed you enjoy looking for good fics to read.. at least I think so I'll give you some recommendations. Dextrousleftie is one of the most popular authors along with you dearest so check her out when you can b/c shes a good writer. And I like Darkness (her story, Moonlight Denial, used to be my fave on here but it got replaced with MUFFIN!) Yes, thats right Muffin remains my FAVE story on here, and it might be MY FAVE story of all time here on AFF and maybe the online writing community ingeneral. You're DEF MY FAVE AUTHOR and have been for some time. I love u and update asap.

OMG! Every time you update, I yell n scream a bunch of times. RealllllSERIOUSLY I am IN LOVE with this series (is it a series? you know, you can make more stories for this). Honestly, I LOVE ASHER lots. LOL. And holy crap, so ASHER REALLY was gonna kill him? I guess he's won't now since Matty would be dead, and we cant have main char die. I COULDN'T believe it...well, I can now since ASh is VERY pissed but its hard for me to picture him inflicting ANY type of physical or even emotional PAIN on Matthew (which you hinted he MAY) b/c in the first one, there was so much romance and affection and probably love. And like probably others n I can tell Asher loves him. But I must keep tellin/reminding me that he is pissed at Matthew. How much of this story is already planned out? Thanks for answering my question. The language thing was buggin me for AWHILE! I don't mind you won't fix the comma thing. Really, I was just trying to make sure you have the correct punctuation marks so your writing will have less mistakes. Its cool they all know other languages. Asher is probably my FAVE male/lead/love interest character online. YAY for checking out my recommendations later! I also read some of After Midnight, and I loved the characters too. BUT its YOUR STORY that beats them all! Also, I'm having a HARD time coming to terms that Matty may NOT end up with ASHER which is crazy to say the least. For me, it's like always been Asher. Matty's heart fluttered for him since the beginning of Muffin. Please PELASE HAVE THEM END UP TOGETHER. Anyway, I cant wait for more and for Asher to show up. PLEASE update ASAP XD

*fangirl spasm*
I've been checking up on this a couple of times a day, in the hopes of finding a new chappie. An update makes me happie =D

Scars are sexy~

Also, wee Matthew needs a good spanking, he's far too wound up and fussy. Drugs are baaad D:

YESSSS!!!!!!!! I've been waiting for this for the past three days instead of doing normal people things but I don't caaaare I love Muffin!

and as for who he ends up with being open, i think he should definitely go with Asher!!! or omg maybe the 'third party' is this carter dude :DD no seriously though, demented-ASHER ftw!!!

mario and goomba cuddling in bed, yummm<3 too bad muffin has serious issues ):

can't wait for your next update.. i'll be trollin AFF 'till then!

my review got cut off!!

can't wait for your next update, i'll be trolling AFF 'till then :D

Here's anotha review! Actually, these things are what I forgot to say in the otha one. Your writing never fails to impress me! Seriously, I love all ur descriptions and similes and such. I can tell you do take time to make it betta which is awesome. Wow, Leah impressed me when she did her own cooking. I wasn't cooking at that age! I'm not sure any kids usually do learn to cook for themselves at that age unless they're serious about it or enjoy it. Probably some are like her but not lotz. Did Alrick show her to cook that recipe? Also, when is Asher comin bacc? Like the actual chapter number? LOL, not sure if you planned that ahead yet. Just curious. I hope you explain sometime HOW Vincenzo n Elena found his location. I can see how Vincenzo's helpers probly told Matty's location away but then he left for FRANCE on his own. I think someone must have followed him or tracked him. I was thinking Asher stuck a tracking device in the keychain but you proved that to be untrue. Its more realistic that Asher NEVER found Matty. I'm kinda frightened as to see how this will end since the first ending was so HEARTBREAKING. Do these characters really deserve more heartbreak? Nah. Why has Alrick been in hiding? UPDATE asap. Oh yeah, was I right about how you made the name Mahsa from Ash/Matthew's names?

Hey! I just found a site that has a list of words with MATT in them. I hope this helps A LOT. I'm also doing this so you can pump out the chaps better when or probably when u get stuck on chapter titles. Here it is - http://www.morewords.com/contains/matt/. I'll be waiting for the next chappie

Wow id no idea elena waz trusworthy id bin sure twaz alrik but... U provd me rong! Im lovin vincenzo&matt cant wait 4 mor!!! But seriosly with vry chap i want mor and mor... Ur a rely great riter!! Thankz an ur kilin me with the clifhangrz "pout"!! But it iza gud way 2 keep the story interesting!! N the way cenzo iz with leah w itz cute " giglz"! I hope muffin stopz takin im kinda woried bout thatloll ya i no hez a charactor but i hapen 2 lyk him! Thanx n keep up the gud work!