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by kiyoai

schedule December 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh~~ I love your fast updates. Makes me so happy.
See..I did NOT see that coming. I mean Asher being related to Carter ._. , that ..was good.Nor did I expect their war to be still happening.>_>
Is it bad a tiny part of me wanted Matthew to ...sleep with Vincenzo? and then the other part of me is slapping that part and screaming that Matthew belongs with Asher. ;_; You're making a war rage here, I can't wait until Matthew gets reunited with Asher...
person Windy
schedule December 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thank you Santa Mahsa for this great xmas gift even if i've been naughty having unpure thoughts about dear Asher and Vincenzo (and a bit Daniel too). A great chapters usual, although I didn't see Elena being the mystery person. I thought for sure it was a guy. Well i like to be surprised.

Bug me all you want for anything French but so you know, there's only one word (thank you Mr dictionary) with "matt-" and it's about some mineral, unpurity and fusion (didn't really understand). Are there many words with "matt-" in English ? (I'll go say hello to Mr Webster). If not, you know, we wouldn't begrudge you if you shortened it to "mat-". Or you could ask all your fans to give you a list of words from which you can choose. (Mattress mattress). Well, a late merry xùas and an early happy new year. Big kisses !

person Mint
schedule December 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Guess what?! I just googled 'words beginning with matt', and I think this was the first search result : http://www.morewords.com/starts-with/mat/. This list ONLY HAS WORDS THAT START WITH 'MAT' and not "MATT." I actually think you should go with words startin with 'mat' because there are SO MANY WORDS that start with 'mat' and not 'matt.' So I hope this helps A LOT TOO. Whatever you do is ur choice, and we don't mind. Chaoter titles aren't as important as content. Update asap please
schedule December 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Another chapter! yay! :D
everytime i see a new update i get butterflies & feel giddy with joy, and ditch everything i'm currently doing to run to a quiet room and sit and read it as slowly as possible to make the chapter seem longer xD
I can't wait until Matty finally meets up with Asher soon, i can't imagine how Asher will act when he meets with him again :S
MOARR!
<3
schedule December 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Someone PLEASE explain to me HOW THE HECK did I MISS FOUR ENTIER UPDATES ON THIS NEW STORY!!!???

*looks to the side frowning* nevermind that for a moment.

I HAVE FOUR CHAPTERS TO READ!

- nekoii
person Naomi
schedule December 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Is it bad that I only wanted Vincenzo to go as soon as possible cause I want matthew to be with Asher? Pleaaaaaaase do tell me. I am a sucker for one true pairing only and can't bear the thought of changing it just now. Help me dear, just say ashermatthew!
person oo
schedule December 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
maybe you can do just m word chapters. like math, made, or mate! lol, mate, yeah. mate with vincenzo. gotta tell ya, i always though vin was sorta like a unattractive man, but you totally made him seem dreamy, im like totally falling for him. dreeeeamy.
so noone knows where alricks at? does vin know? why is vin in france with the kid? are they looking for alrick there?
did vin have anything to do with why all the cops came out that day mat spilled coffee all over his arm?
vins bound to know that matthew is druging himself, i wonder when that arguments gonna happen.
im surprised vin also said that he liked mathew better this way. its obvious the kid is punishing himself.... more like torturing himself.
i like elena.
i love vincenzo now.
i like the little girl alot to...
this is turning out pretty well.
wah, mathews going clubing?
person Touli
schedule December 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Keeping us on our toes, as usual. Very happy that you're updating often!! And I did indeed love this chapter :P I am very curious as to how Matthew and Vincenzo will act around each other tomorrow, and hoping that Vincenzo will make a move and Matt will be less...self-restricting about it. Oo, maybe I'm biased because I want VincenzoxMatthew but it would be great if Vincenzo's issues with Asher are to do with Matthew :P Was surprised at Elena's appearance. Do really want to know what it is Vincenzo goes out to do all day if they're in France. And, what else... I'm not really fond of Matthew's work colleagues. I'd much rather read about Vincenzo.... ahem. Update soon my dear!!! :)
person Touli...again
schedule December 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Just glanced over the other reviews and I'd just like to say that 1. DON'T LISTEN TO THEM, IT CAN'T JUST BE MATTXASHER (certainly I'm terrified that you will be influenced by these ignorant reviewers..is it not clear to them that Matthew needs Vincenzo and vice versa??) And 2. I've been thinking this for quite a while now - maybe I'm more obsessed with the VincenzoxMatthew idea because they have chemistry (ie the fact that they're often arguing and had such an explosive relationship to begin with) whereas I always found that Asher was very hard to read and couldn't get much on his personality or detect much/any emotion he had for Muffin. I guess I always expected he would become less cold (despite the very infrequent affectionate actions) and mysterious but he didn't - and of course, as far as we're aware he now wants to kill Muffin, which isn't all that romantic. All that with the fact that Vincenzo appears intent on protecting Matthew - and flirting with him and needing him after that nightmare - all indicates to me that they are a WAY more intriguing couple. I am excited about Asher and Matthew's reunion, and it would bother me a bit if Asher displayed no feelings for Matthew at ALL, but I have to say I'd get over it in a few seconds. One more thing - I love the fact that I have no idea where you're taking this. But don't make us wait hundreds of chapters before another MatthewxVincenzo moment!
person realms
schedule December 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nice background on Asher and nice tying up with the Carter person you mentioned at the end of "Muffin". This time around I really liked Vincenzo's reaction when Matthew brought up Asher. It was very intriguing and it will be interesting to find out the reasoning behind it. Matthew mostly failing at being a responsible adult was reassuring in a strange way. Hopefully Vincenzo won't traumatize any of the kids too much. Also, feel free to gloat at your heart's content.