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I am having a Matthew/Muffin hangover, seriously addicted to your stories, please give me my next dose of pick-me-up to help me out.

It's been FOUR whole days! Please update soon! We're dying here!

I really like Matthew and all his friends. They are very interesting characters. I can't wait until we find out why Matthew makes that phone call to Asher. I am really steaming to finally get to see these two get back together. I also like Vincenzo and Matthew together but not like a relationship he would share with Asher maybe more on the line of a big brother or something. I've been reading all the awesome reviews you have gotten too. I bet they make you really happy knowing how many of us are enjoying your stories. If this was a movie, what actors would you want in the leading roles? It would definitely be a blockbuster and I would go see it. Update soon, please, I am getting worried about how much I will miss it after you stop updating because you are going back to school.

oh please don't keep us waiting for new chapter much longer thank you

AAAAAAAHHH!!! I MISSED YOU SO MUCH!

I already love the story. it's going splendidly. And I must say, I'm loving the sexual tension between Vincenzo and... ahem, Matthew. Tee hee, I almost called him Muffin. I need to draw him, now that I think about it. And it seems like you're updating a lot faster than you said you were going to :p Good for you! *sigh* now I can stop pining for my favorite story to come back. Yay!

It has BEGAN!

the oh-my-god-for-real relationship between MARIO and GOOMBA~!!!
eh wait.... taking into consideration the fact that Goomba is a mushroom...... XD who's gonna top? (is this a stupid question? since it should be obvious? but this chapter, with mario all weak and emotional from a nightmare....... WHO KNOWS WHAT's POSSIBLE EH? XD )

Gyah gyah gyah!!! That would be heck funny~

and if it's gonna be a triangle, I can guess that it can never be a threesome. seeing as how the two big males are having a little disagreement about something xD

Wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee~!!!! Now I'm gonna wonder, when that phonecall will take place.
Why's Maffin looking for Ashers help? something bad had to happen yeah?

How bad is bad? I hope Leah will stay safe thou~

Hope to hear from you soon! But well, seeing as today's date is as such, I'll only probably hear from you again NEXT YEAR *sighs*
what a loooooooooooooong wait~

xD

- nekoii

And here comes the review. Such tension in there between all the characters. But it might be good for little Mattew to have a big strong Italian with a brand new confidence and capacity for a little tenderness. If he doesn't burry himself under pills that is. But I don't think Vincenzo will let him once he finds out. Also I like Leah, she is a strong willed kid, that's for sure but she is cute and obviously needs protection. Might be good for Matty as well.

LOVE. The one word that summarizes everything I feel for this story and your writing in general. Guh. And I was so against a Vincenzo/Mathew pairing - I mean Asher is just... ASHER lol - but now, I starting to wonder. Don't get me wrong, I'm still not convinced. I really do have too much of a soft spot for Asher, but maybe... :p I'm really amazed because I have this unfortunate habit of dropping stories that don't go my way, even when it's good and this sequel hasn't even gone anywhere romantically yet, but it's opening doors and I feel like I'll go wherever you take us, even if it isn't the Asher/Mathew road I favour. I honestly can't wait for more and your characterization is as extraordinary as always. Thank you so much for posting :)

Happy New Year!

Thanks for updating so fast and I am really hooked on this sequel and I mean that. I love the interaction between Vincenzo and Matt so much. The playful banter (more on Vincenzo's side) is really cute. I like how you are bringing everything together. I really will start to squeal with joy when Asher enters Matt's appartment, if he does that is.
I am looking forward to seeing Alrick again too and hope he is safe. I kind of even like Elena now too. Missing seeing Daniel and wonder what he's up to. Matthew can even have a celebration party once everyone does show up at his small apartment maybe everyone can bring his favorite muffins as a gift.

How old is Vincenzo? I'm kind of hoping/guessing early thirties. He has to be a lot older than Muffin if he was a hitman before Muffin was 18 (before he worked for Asher). Plus four years since then...