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January 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm sitting here hoping Matthew will resist Vincenzo's actions, since I can't really picture Matthew with anyone but Asher (even though their relationship ended badly). But a seven year old girl sleeping in the other room is probably a good excuse. ^^; Also, I guess I have my hopes up too high for Asher to come back.
Thanks for the update!
Thanks for the update!
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January 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Loved Muffin. Stayed up very late to finish it and was very excited to see you continued the story. I hope to see some updates soon! Definitely addicted. I registered just to review YOUR work. :D
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January 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
tooooooooo-too good! want more!!!!!
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January 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just discovered your stories and am amazed by them but am so sad to see no new chapters since 12/28.
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January 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hi, happy new year and best wishes. I've just got an idea for a title and I feel so stupid for not thinking about it in the first place. It's "Matthieu", the French name for Matthew. Well, that's it, have a nice day !
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January 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Haha, so I left a review on Muffin, not realising you'd actually started with the sequel. Well, wooooooo!!! I've read up to four and can't wait for an update!! Vincenzo >.>' <333 I like him more than Asher at the minute. I d'nno why, I just do :x
Update soon!! I think I'll melt if I don't get more 'Matthew' fix x_x
Update soon!! I think I'll melt if I don't get more 'Matthew' fix x_x
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January 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You have no idea how happy seeing you had posted a sequel made me. I ended up reading all the chapters with a huge, stupid grin on my face. Thank you for that. (^__^)
As always, your writing is amazing. Plus thank you for all the Vincenzo/Matthew fanservice. Vincenzo combing his fingers through Matthew's hair (God, I keep wanting to call him Muffin), Matthew stroking Vincenzo's scar, and that whole cuddle thing in chapter four. However, Vincenzo's nightmares have me worrying about him, but I am happy that his showing up has made Matthew act more like the Matthew we all know and love.
I like that he’s been able to get over some of his fears (water, cars, etc), but all this pill popping and denying himself who he really is has me concerned for poor Muf-...uh...I mean, Matthew.
Also I like the introduction of Alrick’s kid, and hope that the German himself is all right.
It’s going to be hard waiting for more chapters, waiting to see where this new story is heading. In the meantime, I’ll have my fingers crossed in the hopes for some more Matthew/Vincenzo stuff.
As always, your writing is amazing. Plus thank you for all the Vincenzo/Matthew fanservice. Vincenzo combing his fingers through Matthew's hair (God, I keep wanting to call him Muffin), Matthew stroking Vincenzo's scar, and that whole cuddle thing in chapter four. However, Vincenzo's nightmares have me worrying about him, but I am happy that his showing up has made Matthew act more like the Matthew we all know and love.
I like that he’s been able to get over some of his fears (water, cars, etc), but all this pill popping and denying himself who he really is has me concerned for poor Muf-...uh...I mean, Matthew.
Also I like the introduction of Alrick’s kid, and hope that the German himself is all right.
It’s going to be hard waiting for more chapters, waiting to see where this new story is heading. In the meantime, I’ll have my fingers crossed in the hopes for some more Matthew/Vincenzo stuff.
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January 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, and good luck with coming up with chapter titles for this story. I believe you’ll need it. If you don’t mind here are a few suggestions (some good, some terrible):
Matterless, Mattery, Matting, Mattress (I’m assuming this one could be used for a sex chapter, once again, assuming there is sex on a mattress), Materialize (okay, that one's kind of bad).
There’s also “Matter of” -- matter of fact, matter of course, matter of law, matter of opinion.
And here are some foreign words (I recommended re-looking up the meanings, because some of these could be wrong or used in the wrong way).
German:
Matsch (rotten or bad), Mattblau (pale blue), Mattheit (weakness, faintness), Mattigkeit (weariness, weakness), Mattlack (dull), Mattierte Gläser (frosted glass)
Italian:
Matta (joker), Mattina/Mattino/Mattutino (morning), Matto (mad, crazy)
Spanish:
Matutero (smuggler)
It's hard picking out words when I'm not sure where the story will go. I know a lot of these are not very good, but I at least wanted to try and help out. I used this site to find most of them -- http://dictionary.reverso.net/?word=matt
That may or may not be helpful to you.
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January 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
re-reading the whole Muffin story whilst I wait for the next chapter to Matthew (hope the next update is real soon i'm dying here) :D
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January 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hi, new reader here :)
I loved "Muffin" and I'm very glad that you decided to write a sequel because I was sad that he parted with Asher on such bad terms.
I love this tension you're buiding with Vincenzo, since it had already been hinted at in the first story. I wonder what will happen between the two of them. Of course I hope that Matthew and Asher will find their way back to each other but I'm sure that won't be easy.
Is there a notification tool on this site, or do you have a mailing list maybe?
Can't wait to read more! :)
I loved "Muffin" and I'm very glad that you decided to write a sequel because I was sad that he parted with Asher on such bad terms.
I love this tension you're buiding with Vincenzo, since it had already been hinted at in the first story. I wonder what will happen between the two of them. Of course I hope that Matthew and Asher will find their way back to each other but I'm sure that won't be easy.
Is there a notification tool on this site, or do you have a mailing list maybe?
Can't wait to read more! :)