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by kiyoai

person Mint
schedule January 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG! thank god for an update! I seriously check every single day mutltiple times for 1! I love you! I love Ash! I am really curious if you're actually gonna have anything happen between Matt/Vincenzo. OF course, I believe that Matt and Ash truly belong together, and are soulmates. Can't wait for him to come bacc! I hope that you can write again SOON! Keep up the amazing work. Your writing is EXTREMELY good. Update asap dear!
person kale
schedule January 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I read the chapter all the way through, even the replies at the end. (because I feel the need to see if I can guess whats going to happen from your replies :)
So, a kiss, finally. I think a lot of people have been waiting for this since the beginning.
Poor Matthew he needs more therapy, he needs to feel safe. And pretty much everything is conspiring against that need.
I don't know how I feel about Asher's reappearance in the story. His involvment in Matthews life is not healthy.
Asher is too driven by what he wants, he hides too much. I just don't see him making Matthew 'better'.
I could see some serious issues if they started up again and things did not work out. Matthew is too fragile to handle that again.
person ~Roxy~
schedule January 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yes!!! Finaly here " dancing with joy" dont no how looooooong i bin waitin 4that!! Both da chap an mario actualy makin a mov... Mufin iz soooo clules..or not!! Loll.. Im glad u enjoy decodin my reviews "hapy grin" il try n ryt mor proply now... Can i pleaz ask a favor.. Mayk dat 2 1)pleaz giv mario a hapy endin no heartbreak caus hez 1 of me fav pleaaaaz... N 2)update faster pleaz itz selfish 2 say that i no but u seriosly drov me grazy waitin 4 this chap... Also wat the hek iz elena in al this... N poooor ashley... Iz alrik cumin bac? I mis him "sad face" ... Im not rely misin ashr yet marioz inof "grin" !! Loll not 2 say i dont like al da caractorz.. Thanx sooooo much n keep up the gud work.. Mayd my day "bliwin a kis haply"... Oh n dare i say it.... Mario iz jelos of the atention maty givz 2 ashr?!! But rely mario iz lotz beta 4 his helth n genral life.. Ryt im rambalin now...
person wizzy891
schedule January 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I Always Wanted Matty && Vincenzo To Get Toqether && It Finally Happened & You Stopped Riqht There..Why??

UpDate Soon..I Meen UpDate Tomorrow PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ

I Loved Your First Story Muffin && I Have A Feelinq Im Gonna Love This Story 2 If You Had More Matty && Vincenzo In It.

But I WiLL Always Be A Fan Of Mattew And Asher.


Pllzz Update More I Find Myself Cominq On Here Everyday To See If You Had Update && I Think I Loose My Mind Everytime I See NO Update..

Great Story By The Way

-Sesshy's Mate
person ms.persephone
schedule January 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm def liking Vincent and Matthew alot more than I did with Asher....
person Mint
schedule January 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Another thingy - I checked out the song you recommended, and omg, i LOVE IT! I like Katy Perry, and I might just download her album now lol! The lyrics are awesome. I googled them also online to know them all, and it reminds me of them, and their ROMANCE/LOVE. Update asap!


person AshersMinion
schedule January 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Heya, glad you are making a sequel. Just found out, hahah I was very disappointed at the ending of Muffin. But here you are! So anyways, I like where this story is going. Although I am an Asher fan, his character was my favourite of the story. Damn the attraction towards Vin, and the kiss makes my blood boil. I would hate Matthew to go to Vincenzo, even though I love his character. But Asher is just something else all together. I hope Matthew grows some backbone because I hate this whiny side of his. But thanks for not leaving us readers high and dry with Muffin!
person DarkSacrifice
schedule January 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You rock! man I swear you got me on the edge of my seat the whole time. I love this, I love that you are back finally a star writer back in the business man! It's so sad that Muffin isn't Muffin at all, he has become so emo :( I miss the bratty Muffin! the feisty one! and waaw Vincenzo is soo cool wauhahahah, and the first chapter man! you blew me away! I was searching for fics and then I saw Matthew, it sounded interesting to me and then I saw writer Mahsa and I was like nooo!! it's MUFFINNNNNN and then I read it and told my sister wuahahah you made my whole day seriously loved it thank you so much! hope you will update soon dammit! you rocck youuuu rock :D wawwawawaw finally a good story man, I'm glad you are back and it didn't take you that long to begin on the sequel wauhahah hope you still remember me the stalker who re-read Muffin 4-5 times uawhahhaha and I re-read ch1 one time uawhhahaha me is so obsessed...though I miss Asher man I miss him sooo much wuahhhah his cool semeness and Alrick so cute anyway thank you so muchand please update soon!
schedule January 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!! Yeah, I think I just screamed. Vincenzco kissed him.....yesh!!! XD Now please follow up with some hot smexing. Am I the only one who thinks Vincenzco should get some action with Matthew? There were so much potential since the first part, but then there will be consequences when Asher finds Matthew again. Muwhahaha
person reid
schedule January 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Vincenzo and Matthew...............Vincenzo and Matthew.........I think I'm having a brain meltdown because they are two people as............ I can't seem to wrap my mind around this. Mabey another chapter will help clear the fog. One with a heavy helping of Asher.
Vincenzo and Matthew well still have me hooked I just have to read where your mind is heading with this story path.
thanks for the........thoughts(I might have to re-read Muffin)
S.

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