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January 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What? What?! WHAT?! NOOOOOOO! Do NOT like! How could you end that way? Ok nevermind, you always end like that. But no Asher and Matthew are supposed to live happily ever after! Ok well at least in my mind I think they should. They're both so stupid around the other. I love it. And please please please tell me there will be no Asher/Matthew/Vin because... just because XD I can't wait to read the rest!
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January 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
"Mr. Pickles?"
lol
Hearing Vincenzo referred to as "Uncle Vinny" also made me laugh. Not sure why, it just did. And Matthew wanting to be Batman when he was a kid is just adorable. Also thanks for the Vincenzo/Muffin kiss. I can barely wait to see how that plays out in the next chapter.
I'm keeping my eye on this mysterious new boyfriend Ashley keeps bringing up. Is it the same guy with the limp she talked about in a different chapter? I guess I'll just have to wait and see if this little tidbit turns into anything more.
"But thank you for the suggestions! I really appreciate that you looked all those up for me! Also… what does ‘mattery’ mean?"
You're welcome. I just had some free time on my hands and was still very much excited to find that you had started a sequel. (^_^)
'Mattery' is a medical term. It means to discharge or produce pus or pus-like fluid. ...Yeah, sorry, like I said in my other post, some of my suggestions were kind of bad. But if it still works for your story then by all means use it (or any of the others).
A quick question. Are you planning to only use words with 'Matt' in them or are you going to use 'Mat' words as well? Because the word 'Maternal' keeps popping into my head whenever I read about Vincenzo around Leah. So I just wanted to toss that out there.
"If anyone knows if I’m not allowed to do review responses anymore, please let me know so I don’t keep pushing my luck!"
You can have an Author's Note (review response) before or after a chapter. However, I believe the site administrators would prefer it if people kept their ANs to only a paragraph or so maximum. You might want to limit your responses to answering only important reviewer questions and then just leaving a simple 'thanks for reading' to all the rest. I wouldn't want you to get in trouble for being too chatty/friendly. (^_~)
lol
Hearing Vincenzo referred to as "Uncle Vinny" also made me laugh. Not sure why, it just did. And Matthew wanting to be Batman when he was a kid is just adorable. Also thanks for the Vincenzo/Muffin kiss. I can barely wait to see how that plays out in the next chapter.
I'm keeping my eye on this mysterious new boyfriend Ashley keeps bringing up. Is it the same guy with the limp she talked about in a different chapter? I guess I'll just have to wait and see if this little tidbit turns into anything more.
"But thank you for the suggestions! I really appreciate that you looked all those up for me! Also… what does ‘mattery’ mean?"
You're welcome. I just had some free time on my hands and was still very much excited to find that you had started a sequel. (^_^)
'Mattery' is a medical term. It means to discharge or produce pus or pus-like fluid. ...Yeah, sorry, like I said in my other post, some of my suggestions were kind of bad. But if it still works for your story then by all means use it (or any of the others).
A quick question. Are you planning to only use words with 'Matt' in them or are you going to use 'Mat' words as well? Because the word 'Maternal' keeps popping into my head whenever I read about Vincenzo around Leah. So I just wanted to toss that out there.
"If anyone knows if I’m not allowed to do review responses anymore, please let me know so I don’t keep pushing my luck!"
You can have an Author's Note (review response) before or after a chapter. However, I believe the site administrators would prefer it if people kept their ANs to only a paragraph or so maximum. You might want to limit your responses to answering only important reviewer questions and then just leaving a simple 'thanks for reading' to all the rest. I wouldn't want you to get in trouble for being too chatty/friendly. (^_~)
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January 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
just wanted to let you know i put 'muffin' on my Ereader.
yea, i love it that much.
yea, i love it that much.
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January 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Arghhh! I feel so STUPID!! So here I am a coupla weeks ago lookin for any updates from the authors I'm following, and I see a story called mathew which I ignore coz the name doesn't grab me much. Last night, I was doin the same thing, n again see Mathew pop up. This time though I see the name of the author, n I'm like NO FUCKIN WAY!!! I can't believe you've done a sequel, you sorta hinted that a sequel would be unlikely.
So anyway, I read all 5 chapters yesterday, ended up sleeping late n hence waking up late n hence going to work late, all your fault ofcourse :P
as usual, you've got me utterly hooked, can't wait for the next update. Really curious as to who ashleys new man going to turn out to be coz it sounds sinister. I initially thought it was vini aka mario; whoever he is, he sounds like bad news. I'm quite intrigued as to how they found mathew so easily of Ash supposedly looked for him for 4 years?
I always though mario bad a thing for mathew, was quite suprized however that mathew (I keep wantin to type muffin!!) is sorta getting affected by him... It feels like he's cheating on Asher!
The part about how he doesn't like muffins anymore upset me, and the gomba part slayed me.
Awsome writing, awsome author, u get a virtual cookie :)
So anyway, I read all 5 chapters yesterday, ended up sleeping late n hence waking up late n hence going to work late, all your fault ofcourse :P
as usual, you've got me utterly hooked, can't wait for the next update. Really curious as to who ashleys new man going to turn out to be coz it sounds sinister. I initially thought it was vini aka mario; whoever he is, he sounds like bad news. I'm quite intrigued as to how they found mathew so easily of Ash supposedly looked for him for 4 years?
I always though mario bad a thing for mathew, was quite suprized however that mathew (I keep wantin to type muffin!!) is sorta getting affected by him... It feels like he's cheating on Asher!
The part about how he doesn't like muffins anymore upset me, and the gomba part slayed me.
Awsome writing, awsome author, u get a virtual cookie :)
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January 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I feel a habit forming...*lowers pitchfolk sadly*
But I am glad you updated right before my exams. I enjoy having a reason to procrastinate more than usual :D
On that note, I'm sure I'm not the only one in the masses wanting Vinthew sex right about now. but I do know I'm one of the many few (of the legion) reviewing about it *hint hint ;D*
But I am glad you updated right before my exams. I enjoy having a reason to procrastinate more than usual :D
On that note, I'm sure I'm not the only one in the masses wanting Vinthew sex right about now. but I do know I'm one of the many few (of the legion) reviewing about it *hint hint ;D*
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January 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
One thing. One thing ya said in a reply FREAKED ME THE HELL OUT...you said Asher's not really healthy for Matty. Well, just because he may not be exactly healthy for him DOES NOT mean at all that he doesn't belong with him. Your true love is ur true luv, and I feel Asher and Matty are each otha's TRUE LOVE. There, I've said my peace! lol
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January 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well it's way past my bedtime so all I'll say is that this is love. Truly. And I shall now go off with lovely slashy dreams involving Asher, Matty and I can't remember how to spell his name so Mario I shall use instead xD
It's gonna be a gooooood sleep.
It's gonna be a gooooood sleep.
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January 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You are an awesome author, the best in the adultfanfiction site that's for sure! I absolubtly adore your story, the universe you create is brillant and the characters are so charismatic....its scary!!!
If you need help with french sentences I am french so it will be my pleasure to translate!!!
Keep the excellent work, you are really really impressive!!!!!!!!!!
If you need help with french sentences I am french so it will be my pleasure to translate!!!
Keep the excellent work, you are really really impressive!!!!!!!!!!
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January 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
you continue to rock my world by writting.
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January 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
YAY! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE don't have Matt run away again! So excited about the beginning of the next chapter. And so happy you updated, been checking morning and night because I have nothing better to do and this is my favourite story. How old is Vincenzo? I've been wondering.
Woooooo. More more more VinnyxMatt!!!
Woooooo. More more more VinnyxMatt!!!