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January 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I feel for Matthew... about the apartment-invaders I mean... I live alone and LOVE it, I would go effing crazy in a day if people would just decide to occupy my place like that... and especially a kid! ACK! ;)Poor guy...
ANd O_O KISS! I mena, I knew 'Mario' had a thing for him... wow... this could go either way, but I just have a feeling that "bottle in hte head" is an option here... my feelings are divided... I do like him, he has done quite a few great things for Matthew, but... but... I LOOOVE Asher... Matt belongs to him! -grin- Well, whatevere happens I'm sure it will be great!
ANd O_O KISS! I mena, I knew 'Mario' had a thing for him... wow... this could go either way, but I just have a feeling that "bottle in hte head" is an option here... my feelings are divided... I do like him, he has done quite a few great things for Matthew, but... but... I LOOOVE Asher... Matt belongs to him! -grin- Well, whatevere happens I'm sure it will be great!
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January 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well. If Mathew doesn't have a heart attack after that... He can survive anything :p And yeah, I agree that Asher's not good for him... for now. It's just Vincenzo is much less ambiguous about Matty than Asher was. And much less twisted. lol Poor thing really was in a viper's nest wasn't he? :p Did I mention I love this story? And that that was hot? :)
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January 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I don't want Asher back >.> I want my Italian. ._. And the end of this chapter really made me grin >.> Awesome chapter! Thanks for the update, hope the next one's soon, I REALLY REALLY wanna know what happens next D:
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January 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
huh. what.... uh....
Mario kissed Goomba? Man.... IT HAS BEGUN ALREADY! THE TRIANGLE OF DOOM!!! this is gonna be worse than that damn bermuda.
because, i SO SO SO cannot imagine either Asher or Vin wanting to share Muffin. So. Muffin's gotta choose. and what ever the decision, it's not gonna end in a pretty picture.
omg. KISS KISS.
but I know, they wont be sexing each other just yet.
if you somehow manage to DO make them do sex in the next chapter, I take my hat of to you. because no way i turn my head, i cannot imagine it now. I CANNOT.
and FOR GAWDS SAKE! LEAH IS JUST RIGHT THERE BEHIND THE WALL MAN!
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uhkay..... *is still in a daze*... maaaaaaan... feels so hazy man... like my head is in the mist.
anyway, what were you asking. about songs?
I think..... some parts of the lyrics in 'why' by Secondhand Serenade fits them.
and about getting an email from the aff staff.
well, review replies are technically not allowed to be done in the chapter update, because, the forum was created for that reason. they want you to use the forum to reply reviews.
but they will send you a warning e-mail 1st. so just wait for it.
if it DOES NOT come, it probably means 1) a staff is a fan of your stories and lets you off the hook ;). or 2) they just haven't found out that you broke the rules yet. :D
okay~ toodles for now! :3
- nekoii
Mario kissed Goomba? Man.... IT HAS BEGUN ALREADY! THE TRIANGLE OF DOOM!!! this is gonna be worse than that damn bermuda.
because, i SO SO SO cannot imagine either Asher or Vin wanting to share Muffin. So. Muffin's gotta choose. and what ever the decision, it's not gonna end in a pretty picture.
omg. KISS KISS.
but I know, they wont be sexing each other just yet.
if you somehow manage to DO make them do sex in the next chapter, I take my hat of to you. because no way i turn my head, i cannot imagine it now. I CANNOT.
and FOR GAWDS SAKE! LEAH IS JUST RIGHT THERE BEHIND THE WALL MAN!
,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,.........................
uhkay..... *is still in a daze*... maaaaaaan... feels so hazy man... like my head is in the mist.
anyway, what were you asking. about songs?
I think..... some parts of the lyrics in 'why' by Secondhand Serenade fits them.
and about getting an email from the aff staff.
well, review replies are technically not allowed to be done in the chapter update, because, the forum was created for that reason. they want you to use the forum to reply reviews.
but they will send you a warning e-mail 1st. so just wait for it.
if it DOES NOT come, it probably means 1) a staff is a fan of your stories and lets you off the hook ;). or 2) they just haven't found out that you broke the rules yet. :D
okay~ toodles for now! :3
- nekoii
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January 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Sparks FLy by Taylor Swift kinda reminds me of them, especially these lyrics - "I see sparks fly whenever you smile" relates to Matty LOVING ASh's boyish smile, and these - "Hit me with those green eyes, baby" ya kno, since ASh's fave color green n all.
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January 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was a good line to work backwards from. :)
We know Asher is both willing to kill, possessive of Matthew, and hates betrayal. Vincenzo has some balls, but I guess gangsters usually do. Matthew will probably reject him, considering how skittish he is. Asher just better not find out what Vinny was trying to do!
Elena is a badass. She knows how to deal with a little brat like Matthew. She's also quite motherly. I hope Leah's mom is ok (please!), but if she isn't, I vote for Alrick/Elena. Alrick is too nice for his own good, and Elena can watch out for him.
Let's get deep for a moment :: puts on black catsuit and beret, and begins speaking with french accent ::
Vincenzo wants to take care of Matthew (versus Asher, who's more in "controlling" mode usually). It's obvious that, despite the gruff exterior and questionable occupation, Vinny has a soft spot for Matthew. His drunken* come on in "Muffin" was lustful/threatening, but it was telling that he wanted to "hold him tight".
"It won’t heal well if you don’t take care of it".
Vinny wants to heal Matthew's scars (make him forget about Asher). He's seemed concerned (well, "concerned" translates to irritable for him) even starting back in "Muffin" that both Asher and Matthew himself are not good for Matthew.
However, I predict sadness for Vincenzo/Matthew fans and hope for Asher/Matthew. Matthew is obviously in love+obsession with Asher, whereas he has so far only seems to have lust+affection for Vincenzo.
“Can you make things disappear?”
“No,” he murmured. “But I’m good at distracting the eye.”
Vincenzo is just a momentary distraction to Matthew, who keeps clinging to Asher's memory. He can't make their connection disappear.
Whew, all that over analyzing took me back to 8th grade book essays.
* Speaking of drunkenness, now that I notice it, Vincenzo has his own issues. Every time he's made a move on Matthew he's been drunk or sleep-addled. Poor guy's probably pretty messed up I suppose, what with being a killer and scarred and all, but we're always caught up in Matthew's self-absorbed angst.
I would feel guilty if I were to bug/harass/beg for a new chapter, when I'm getting this lovely story for FREE. Luckily, I'm sure my fellow reviewers will do my dirty work for me, yay!
Oh and "Mr. Pickles"... killed me. lol.
We know Asher is both willing to kill, possessive of Matthew, and hates betrayal. Vincenzo has some balls, but I guess gangsters usually do. Matthew will probably reject him, considering how skittish he is. Asher just better not find out what Vinny was trying to do!
Elena is a badass. She knows how to deal with a little brat like Matthew. She's also quite motherly. I hope Leah's mom is ok (please!), but if she isn't, I vote for Alrick/Elena. Alrick is too nice for his own good, and Elena can watch out for him.
Let's get deep for a moment :: puts on black catsuit and beret, and begins speaking with french accent ::
Vincenzo wants to take care of Matthew (versus Asher, who's more in "controlling" mode usually). It's obvious that, despite the gruff exterior and questionable occupation, Vinny has a soft spot for Matthew. His drunken* come on in "Muffin" was lustful/threatening, but it was telling that he wanted to "hold him tight".
"It won’t heal well if you don’t take care of it".
Vinny wants to heal Matthew's scars (make him forget about Asher). He's seemed concerned (well, "concerned" translates to irritable for him) even starting back in "Muffin" that both Asher and Matthew himself are not good for Matthew.
However, I predict sadness for Vincenzo/Matthew fans and hope for Asher/Matthew. Matthew is obviously in love+obsession with Asher, whereas he has so far only seems to have lust+affection for Vincenzo.
“Can you make things disappear?”
“No,” he murmured. “But I’m good at distracting the eye.”
Vincenzo is just a momentary distraction to Matthew, who keeps clinging to Asher's memory. He can't make their connection disappear.
Whew, all that over analyzing took me back to 8th grade book essays.
* Speaking of drunkenness, now that I notice it, Vincenzo has his own issues. Every time he's made a move on Matthew he's been drunk or sleep-addled. Poor guy's probably pretty messed up I suppose, what with being a killer and scarred and all, but we're always caught up in Matthew's self-absorbed angst.
I would feel guilty if I were to bug/harass/beg for a new chapter, when I'm getting this lovely story for FREE. Luckily, I'm sure my fellow reviewers will do my dirty work for me, yay!
Oh and "Mr. Pickles"... killed me. lol.
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January 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oo no..Not a huge fan of VincenzoxMatthew..I love me some AsherxMatthew
Really love this story, was so excited when I saw this sequal up!
I thought really hard and I found a couple songs that would fit for MatthewxAsher..
Friend or Foe by t.A.T.U, Gomenasai by t.A.T.u
and i think for a reunion between AsherxMatthew--Show Me Love by t.A.T.u would wit
Can't wait til you update!!
Really love this story, was so excited when I saw this sequal up!
I thought really hard and I found a couple songs that would fit for MatthewxAsher..
Friend or Foe by t.A.T.U, Gomenasai by t.A.T.u
and i think for a reunion between AsherxMatthew--Show Me Love by t.A.T.u would wit
Can't wait til you update!!
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January 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
florence and machine - cosmic love
it could remind you of asher and matthew. gosh wanted to call him muffin. XD
"the stars, the moon, they have all been blown out
you left me in the dark
no dawn, no day, i'm always in this twilight
in the shadow of your heart"
it could remind you of asher and matthew. gosh wanted to call him muffin. XD
"the stars, the moon, they have all been blown out
you left me in the dark
no dawn, no day, i'm always in this twilight
in the shadow of your heart"
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January 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
woohoo! it finally happens.
listened to the song. nice, i was guessing something more with a darker tone though. shes poppy. this storys themes are pretty dark. it has its moments of lightness though. like this chapter was pretty light hearted.
the butterfly effect sentence was beautiful. mathew has a lot of guilt. i always figured if matty hadnt gotten out of the boat and tried to let asher and troupe know what was about to happen, theyd all be dead. right? or am i wrong and did mathew make it worse instead of saving their lives?
do you have people pictured in mind for your characters? if so, why not point out who you think they look like or are similar too?
hot damn! look at all those reviews you have!
i hope they have sex, seriously, i do.
listened to the song. nice, i was guessing something more with a darker tone though. shes poppy. this storys themes are pretty dark. it has its moments of lightness though. like this chapter was pretty light hearted.
the butterfly effect sentence was beautiful. mathew has a lot of guilt. i always figured if matty hadnt gotten out of the boat and tried to let asher and troupe know what was about to happen, theyd all be dead. right? or am i wrong and did mathew make it worse instead of saving their lives?
do you have people pictured in mind for your characters? if so, why not point out who you think they look like or are similar too?
hot damn! look at all those reviews you have!
i hope they have sex, seriously, i do.
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January 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm so excited!! I didn't realize this was the sequel to muffin until today. I've really missed Matthew and the gang. I love meeting Leah. I also love how you've continued Matt's neuroses. It's brilliant how he pushes away everything that reminds him of the past. I Look forward to reading more!!!!!!!!!! Kudos