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January 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
He...he..you...they...*promptly faints of glee*
Well, I'm glad that happens, the tension was killing me >_>. Now it's just anxiety. *holds on to pitchfork* I hope they go through with it,even though I'm hoping for Asher/Matty in the end. A little distraction won't hurt though... alcohol and sexually deprived Matty ftw! I wonder what Asher will do when he finds out..hmm..
and where the hell does Elena go?
p.s Thanks for updating. I secretly stalk this story every 1-2 days looking for updates , can't remember being this loyal of a stalker in a very long time. <3
Well, I'm glad that happens, the tension was killing me >_>. Now it's just anxiety. *holds on to pitchfork* I hope they go through with it,even though I'm hoping for Asher/Matty in the end. A little distraction won't hurt though... alcohol and sexually deprived Matty ftw! I wonder what Asher will do when he finds out..hmm..
and where the hell does Elena go?
p.s Thanks for updating. I secretly stalk this story every 1-2 days looking for updates , can't remember being this loyal of a stalker in a very long time. <3
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January 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
cant wait to see what happen next :D
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January 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh! Oh! I want to play casting too!
How I picture Asher: http://tinyurl.com/63bpdsa
Matthew: http://tinyurl.com/5tbby34
Vincenzo: http://tinyurl.com/6f58dc5
Alrick?: http://tinyurl.com/6egyl9t
How I picture Asher: http://tinyurl.com/63bpdsa
Matthew: http://tinyurl.com/5tbby34
Vincenzo: http://tinyurl.com/6f58dc5
Alrick?: http://tinyurl.com/6egyl9t
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January 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That last sentence made me squeal in delight :3 *squeals some more*
And yes, spanking can be very good. But then again, everything that is sexy can be very good. Just today, I walked past a guy that smelled sooo good. Not in a perfumy way, but in a natural scent way. Almost made me spontanely orgasm on spot. And that might have been a bit of an overshare, sorry about that.
Oh, and you're one heck of an author. Not only am I commenting on every chapter, I'm even checking up on the story a couple of times a week in the hopes of an update. In my ten years of readin online, that has happened twice before. You're awesome <3
And yes, spanking can be very good. But then again, everything that is sexy can be very good. Just today, I walked past a guy that smelled sooo good. Not in a perfumy way, but in a natural scent way. Almost made me spontanely orgasm on spot. And that might have been a bit of an overshare, sorry about that.
Oh, and you're one heck of an author. Not only am I commenting on every chapter, I'm even checking up on the story a couple of times a week in the hopes of an update. In my ten years of readin online, that has happened twice before. You're awesome <3
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January 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
We need Asher to come back so there will be serious sexy times! I miss Asher's aggressiveness damn it. I might cry if Mario really hooks up with Muffin! But since Asher is comin back, the attraction to Mario will die down. I just know it. I'm prayin for Asher/Matty in the very end of the story.
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January 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Me again xD I found another mistake because I was rereading "Muffin" again. LOL. “The hell I’m not. Sitting in the back seat while you drive us all off a bridge puts me a position to say what ever the fuck I want!” You're missing "in" before the word "a" in that sentence.
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January 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh "Some Kind of Home' by Thriving Ivory reminds me of Asher/Matty since they lyrics talk about how a person can't tell what the other is thinkin, and wants to know what he/she thinks about and dreams about.
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January 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Mahsa, Mahsa, Mahsa, I am finally able to read this hella awesome (sorry, I stole that from another hella awesome writer!), sequel! I meant to start this way back during Xmas, but never had a chance.
So now I finished chapter three and can't wait to read more. Wtf is Vincenzo doing there? How did he find Muffin, err, Matthew/Matty? And if Leah is Alrick's kid, she's gotta be older than four, right? The way Muffin (sorry, he'll ALWAYS be Muffin to me) described her, she was really little, like two or three years old little. But that couldn't be if he knew all about her and knew her name. Since he's been gone four years, she's gotta be at least that. (If she was born right before that whole big debacle took place) And I can't believe that four years has passed!
And it's so sad how Muffin's living. Ok, I'll call him Matthew. (that's my kid's name anyway) So sad; he stopped doing the things he used to enjoy, drinking coffee, making muffins, cooking anything; that's one of the signs of depression. But he's already on depression meds, so it's gonna take him a lot more than meds and therapy to get him back to the way he was. Maybe this visit from his Italian (and whomever else stopped by for a visit, lol), to get him back on track.
Anway.....I'm gonna read more now! I just wanted to let you know how much I'm enjoying the sequel. :)
So now I finished chapter three and can't wait to read more. Wtf is Vincenzo doing there? How did he find Muffin, err, Matthew/Matty? And if Leah is Alrick's kid, she's gotta be older than four, right? The way Muffin (sorry, he'll ALWAYS be Muffin to me) described her, she was really little, like two or three years old little. But that couldn't be if he knew all about her and knew her name. Since he's been gone four years, she's gotta be at least that. (If she was born right before that whole big debacle took place) And I can't believe that four years has passed!
And it's so sad how Muffin's living. Ok, I'll call him Matthew. (that's my kid's name anyway) So sad; he stopped doing the things he used to enjoy, drinking coffee, making muffins, cooking anything; that's one of the signs of depression. But he's already on depression meds, so it's gonna take him a lot more than meds and therapy to get him back to the way he was. Maybe this visit from his Italian (and whomever else stopped by for a visit, lol), to get him back on track.
Anway.....I'm gonna read more now! I just wanted to let you know how much I'm enjoying the sequel. :)
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January 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Everybody pictures characters differently, and these aren’t perfect, but I bring you a first attempt at casting. It was tortuous work, poring through pictures of models! You did pick some really rare hair and eye color combos.
Matthew:
Descriptions in the story: brilliant green eyes, thick black lashes, plump lips, black hair
Boy this was tough. I mean I can picture him, but all I could find with black hair and green eyes and the skinny former street kid look were teen emos, and I would feel like a creeper linking to them. So Shirota Yuu will have to do for now. He’s got the black hair and plump lips. Yes, I know Matthew is not Japanese and Spanish and the eyes aren’t green, but this guy looks pretty ambiguous in most photos.
http://tinypic.com/r/29gcwi8/7
http://i52.tinypic.com/2woakx5.jpg
Asher:
Descriptions in the story: washed out brown, almost sandy hair, grey eyes
I dunno, this guy's younger than I pictured, but it's hard to find older models. He at least does it for the grey eyes/sandy hair and brooding boss look. I can picture him in the 1st part of the story sitting in his office, petting a white cat (oh that never happened you say?) and smirking evilly. And Hugo Sauzay is hot, which is the main requirement for Asher of course.
http://models.com/work/loptimum-hugo-in-loptimum/viewAll
http://thefashionisto.com/hugo-sauzay-by-toni-thorimbert-for-peuterey-aigulle-noire-fall-2010-campaign/
Vincenzo:
Descriptions in the story: heavy, hairy, pale-skinned, "rich black facial hair", caramel eyes.
This was another hard one. All the models and actors I looked at were too ‘pretty boy’. I knew I wasn't going to find a hot, scarred Italian gangster, but dang it. Also, word to the wise, don't ever google "hairy italian". Barf. Gattuso the footballer sort of fits most of the description.
http://i54.tinypic.com/1zdulfm.jpg
http://i56.tinypic.com/29xt7qo.jpg
http://i52.tinypic.com/t8awt4.jpg (slightly nsfw)
Matthew:
Descriptions in the story: brilliant green eyes, thick black lashes, plump lips, black hair
Boy this was tough. I mean I can picture him, but all I could find with black hair and green eyes and the skinny former street kid look were teen emos, and I would feel like a creeper linking to them. So Shirota Yuu will have to do for now. He’s got the black hair and plump lips. Yes, I know Matthew is not Japanese and Spanish and the eyes aren’t green, but this guy looks pretty ambiguous in most photos.
http://tinypic.com/r/29gcwi8/7
http://i52.tinypic.com/2woakx5.jpg
Asher:
Descriptions in the story: washed out brown, almost sandy hair, grey eyes
I dunno, this guy's younger than I pictured, but it's hard to find older models. He at least does it for the grey eyes/sandy hair and brooding boss look. I can picture him in the 1st part of the story sitting in his office, petting a white cat (oh that never happened you say?) and smirking evilly. And Hugo Sauzay is hot, which is the main requirement for Asher of course.
http://models.com/work/loptimum-hugo-in-loptimum/viewAll
http://thefashionisto.com/hugo-sauzay-by-toni-thorimbert-for-peuterey-aigulle-noire-fall-2010-campaign/
Vincenzo:
Descriptions in the story: heavy, hairy, pale-skinned, "rich black facial hair", caramel eyes.
This was another hard one. All the models and actors I looked at were too ‘pretty boy’. I knew I wasn't going to find a hot, scarred Italian gangster, but dang it. Also, word to the wise, don't ever google "hairy italian". Barf. Gattuso the footballer sort of fits most of the description.
http://i54.tinypic.com/1zdulfm.jpg
http://i56.tinypic.com/29xt7qo.jpg
http://i52.tinypic.com/t8awt4.jpg (slightly nsfw)
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January 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'd thought Vicenzo had a thing for Muffin, but now I'm sure he has a thing for Matthew =). I wonder how he began to have a crush on him? Actually, I'm not quite sure how and when Matt started developing a crush on Vicenzo. Maybe they're just both lonely...and lusting.
Anyhow, I liked the chapter, I like how they avoid talking about Asher. Now, I'm not sure if I want to see Asher in the story anymore, since it's apparently he's bitter and resentful... Oh, who am I kidding? I can't wait to see that happen =P.
About the songs...I know I have a few that reminds me of the characters. Unfortunately I can only think about one right now...my lousy memory. The band is candlebox and the song is far behind, it reminds me of Asher/Matt. Mmmm...there's also this song I heard while I was reading the last chapter of Muffin and it made me cry. I'm not sure if the lyrics really describe Matt/Asher but it's called Way to be by Seven Summers. Oh, and there's Hush by Tool, that makes me think of Muffin/Matt and his insolence haha.
Anyways, see you soon!
Anyhow, I liked the chapter, I like how they avoid talking about Asher. Now, I'm not sure if I want to see Asher in the story anymore, since it's apparently he's bitter and resentful... Oh, who am I kidding? I can't wait to see that happen =P.
About the songs...I know I have a few that reminds me of the characters. Unfortunately I can only think about one right now...my lousy memory. The band is candlebox and the song is far behind, it reminds me of Asher/Matt. Mmmm...there's also this song I heard while I was reading the last chapter of Muffin and it made me cry. I'm not sure if the lyrics really describe Matt/Asher but it's called Way to be by Seven Summers. Oh, and there's Hush by Tool, that makes me think of Muffin/Matt and his insolence haha.
Anyways, see you soon!