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Oh, how I hope you are going to continue this story! Loved Muffin and can't wait to read more of Matthew and Asher!

It's time to update again
I think Mathew needs his meds

I so loved yoour story Muffin and I am now deep into this sequel! It is a great story and you should try to publish it also!
I am eagerly awaiting how it goes on. I am sooooo curious, please update as soon as possible! I am dying to read more :-).
You have a great way of describing emotions that draw the reader into the mind of the character. when I read the last chapter I wanted to shake Matthew so bad for screwing this all up out of his jealousy lol. But I hope he will get out of there again. Please go on with this!
Thank you!

I loved the story Muffin, and this story too. It just drives me bonkers every time there is a long wait. So many authors here have had good stories and they just quit. (cries) I really hope you're going to continue this story.

I want Matthew and Asher to be together, sure it might not be perfect but those two. This story tugged on my emotions. I still didn't like the Matthew/Vincenzo thing. They don't make a great couple like Matthew and Asher. And they love each other.

It's just so sad, and it made me so angry when Alric said to 'give him up' If I had to choose to be happy just for a little while with someone I love. Just those moments I'd choose it. It's far better to find happiness in your life with someone you care about, then to spend life wondering what might have been.

Maybe I'm just a sucker for the couple but I really want to see them happy. :) You are a really good story teller and as much as it sucks to wait for more updates I'm stuck.

However after waiting for your story I no longer read other works in progress. It still seems like your sticking to the story so that is great. I'll still stick with it because I love the story.

You torture your readers so ............whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy! LOL

Where are you Mahsa? I'm dying for an update T.T
plz

Hi there,
On a rec, I just read "Muffin" (great title, btw). And now am reading, "Mathew". Thank you for the intriguing story. You have all the marks of a great author. You love to torture your readers.
And although Muffin sometimes makes me want to scream, "Don't do it!". And Asher makes me want to bash him over the head, light a fire under his tush, and just generally shake him. I've grown to love the characters. In "Muffin", you've given me an glimpse into the mind of someone who chose to live on the streets. And on someone with a mental illness. You opened my mind... just a bit.
Looking forward to more. Take care & good luck.

Oh gawd, I have so many things to say about this story that it’s all jumbled up in my mind right now. I’m typing this review in a word document so I can try to organize it and get everything down.

I could not stop reading this story after I found it a few days ago. Heck, I stayed up for about 26 hours one day to read it. (lol thank god I don't have any responsibilities until next week) I managed to finish both Muffin and Matthew in 3 days. I'm so attached to the characters that after this story is finished, I know I'll get that sad, empty feeling because I won't be able to read about them anymore. Haha, I actually feel that right now after I finished the 19th chapter but I at least know there's a couple more chapters to read in the future :)

I love this story so much but I can’t exactly pinpoint why. I think one reason is the way you expressed how Matthew was feeling in every situation that I understood and empathized what he was going through. This is probably my favorite story so far. :D I never got bored of reading it! There was always something happening that kept me hooked! There were a lot of parts that made me laugh. I got so embarrassed for Matty when he was looking up how to have gay sex that I had to take a 20 minute break before reading again. Speaking of gay sex, I love the sex scenes you write. They're long but it's so hot and fun to read that I don't even care about the length.

I really love Matthew and Asher together. They are my OTP and I’ve never do OTPs. ;D The way you described their interactions together really shows how much they love each other. So many of their scenes together, especially in Muffin #2, tugged on my heartstrings. :) In most stories I’ve read, I can’t really feel the love between the lead pairings. They’re just together, you know? With Matthew’s and Asher’s romantic scenes, they were so sweet and heartwarming. :) I think my favorite one is the train scene where Asher covered Matthew’s eyes and ears.

I have to say though...Vincenzo is the reason why I have a strong dislike of love triangles... :/ Because I love Vincenzo so much! ;D I always get conflicting feelings and feel bad for the ”other guy” in love triangles. I want him to end up with his Goomba but I also want Matthew to end up with Asher even more. :(

I love how you include references from the past like the post-it note that says “RUN” on it. There were a few other instances where you did that too but that’s the only one I could think of since it was the most recent. I feel that most authors don’t do that. It makes it more realistic and like the readers are there with them the entire time.

I read some reviews for and I don’t know why people are complaining about you writing too much detail. I actually love all the details because I can paint a better picture in my head. I think that’s one of the reasons why I love your writing so much. You’re very descriptive. :) I’d rather have too many details than too little, you know? If there’s too much details, people can easily just skim over it.

I think you answered most of the questions people would have. It’s probably no big deal but who wrote “Cute” on Matt’s paper when he was in the library on that rainy day (in Muffin)? I thought it may have been Asher at first but it doesn’t seem like he was there to do it. And does Asher know why Matthew turned him into the police? That’s all the questions I can think of now. :) I’ll be rereading both Muffin and Matthew again (but at a slower pace this time) so I’ll let you know if there’s some unanswered questions.

Ok, I think that's all I have to say for now. Well, it’s almost the beginning of September so I hope that we’ll be hearing from you soon! Good luck on the job opportunity! I don’t know what you’ll be doing but I’ll support you either way, and I hope you’ll be able to finish Matthew in the future. :) I can’t wait to see what will happen in chapter 20! Sorry I wrote so much. I just really love this story!

I love you and I love your stories! I spent my whole Saturday reading Muffins and Matthew. You're the goat. ♡♡. Looking forward to see where this one goes.

Good luck with the job! ^_____^

Cannot wait to hear what happens next! Hope things in RL are going well too :)

You have 79000 hit and you dont update the story!what more do you need to update?! :/