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Wow, I just finished reading Muffin and the start of Matthew. I was thinking the whole time "I'm going to get through this and then there will be a cliffhanger". Of course. I loved Muffin, and I am really looking forward to where you go with Matthew. Do you send update emails? If so, please include me on the list! Thank you!

geo.rutherford@gmail.com

Keep up the great work!

Geo

I feel so bad for Matthew. I really don't like Leah.....really don't. kinda wonder why he doesn't ignore her at all. "Can i be Princess Peach?" I wish he wasn't so easily put down by the thing she says...oh and i would have love if Matthew walked away about the Christmas thing....*pout* don't like El either.....tormenting poor Muffin on the low. I really do like the rude Matthew the best.

BRING ON THE MATTYxVINNY SMEX!!!
ITALIAN STALLION ALL THE WAY, WOOT WOOT!!! lol

Masha, thank you so much for your amazing stories.

Yay! Here's the mistake I FINALLY found xD WOO: "I pushed the comforter that had been tucked up over me to one aside, outstretching my feet out to the floor so I could steadily regain my balance." Word, "side" should be in place of "aside."

Whoops. Forgot to say that error in my last review was in chapter 6.

I Wannnnnnnnnnnntttttttttt Sommmmmmmmmmmmmmmeeee

Vincenzo %%% Matt/Muffin Action,,Fluff,,&& Etc.. ¢¾¢¾¢¾¢¾¢¾¢¾<3¢¾¢¾¢¾¢¾


&& Den You'll Have Asher gettinq Jealous && Matt Goinq To Have To Choose Between Them,,


But Watever Happens,,Happens,,But Let Vincenzo & Matt Have They Moment For Now..


But Like The Quote Say,,Never Leave The One You LOVE For The One You LIKE,,


So Yall All Know Asher && Matt Belonqs Toqether


But They Appart Now Soooooooooooooo....

I love this story so much I tell all my friends about it!! It's great. I want to become a director of gay films and turn people fanfiction real it's all so wonderful haha. So is there going to be some Mario and goomba action? That would be hot I'n a weird way(; lol keep up the good work!! I hope you update soon(:

Asher/Matthew/Vincenzo = Krwling- Linkin park. Make sure it's the remix. Crawling and Krwling are different songs.

Well, I just finished ch. 5 and I am anxiously awaiting the next installment! Poor Matty; he can't catch a break! He couldn't get up enough courage to talk about Asher, then his Italian didn't want him to think too much about Asher, and then he friggen KISSED HIM???????? Way to confuse Matty even more! I know most of your readers are hoping for a Matty/Vincenzo pairing, but I'm still rooting for Asher. Besides, I think if Asher found out what the Italian did, he'd flip a lid and be there faster than bees to honey. lol

I do love the way they decorated Matty's bare apartment.

Poor Matty; he's trying to stay away from his Italian b/c conjures up these feelings that have been dormant for so long, and now Vincenzo is bringing them all up to the forefront.

Aweseome chapter, as alwasy! Anxiously looking foward to the next one; as I mentioned above.

Oh, hey, one question: in a reader response, you mentioned the numbers 22. Were they the age Matthew is now? I thought he was 23, b/c during Muffin, he was 19, and four years later would put him at 23, right? Anyway, just wanted to check. Oh, and I was surprised Leah was so old. But I guess it makes sense; she must have been five when Matty saw her picture.

Anyway, terrific job Mahsa! :)

Omg! Vincenzo x Matthew sex? :O
if they do have hot steamy sex it would be interesting to see ashers reaction to finding out, teehe
but seriously matthew is ashers i'm rooting for asherxmatty all the way really don't want the vinnyxmatty to turn out more serious than a horny 1 time thing!.. or 2 ;)
PLEASE don't make vin and matt get together PLEASE.
OMG can't wait for asher to come back and hoping the next chapter is soon! ahhhhhhh xD