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YAY for Matty resisting Vincenzo! Update soon!

Ohhh, so Matthew has been going places to *y'know*. Wouldn't have expected that, but I guess he knows his way around.

Do they still carry cereal with toys inside the box? I haven't seen them around anymore, and it makes me a little sad. ;__; Nowadays they just give you a silly code on the inside of the box that you have to enter on some website for a chance to win a prize. Really disappointing.

Nice cliffie to end us off with, although a bit creepy. Whenever I get texts from a random number I ignore them thinking they've got the wrong number, especially when they make no sense!

Anyway... Thanks for the update! (Wasn't really too sure what to write.) ^^;

*raises pitchfork* You said you wouldn't take a month! >: <

I TOTALLY like to imagine your characters in my head but when I saw this guy, I thought, "He can be my ASHER PICKETT" :D Just change the hair and eye colors, and he can be him for me since he is DELICIOUS! Anyway, here's the link:

http://pics.livejournal.com/mafia_runner/pic/00002f47/g1

O_O I hope you don't leave us hanging here for too long! I'm dying to know how Matty reacts! x3 For starting with the last sentence(which was brilliant, by the way) and working your way backward I think you did a great job~! I so can't wait for the next chapter!

Oh. Oh wow. I didn't see that comming. Well, The Vin/Matt I saw coming but not the kiss at that point, and I scrolled down from the beginning to read the last sentence because of what you said! Just. Wow. I can't wait for an update. It seems this time around the characters are easier to enjoy. There's definitely been some maturation.

One small issue though, the review answers at the bottom is getting a tiny bit too long, don't you think? Maybe you could incorporate those reviews that you only want to simply thank for in a sentence after the ones that actually need elaboration.

Since this isn't complete yet (for shame, what do I read now?! *sulk*), have you got a mailing list running? Or any update schedule? Anything other than checking the site every day to see if there's an update would be nice (AFF.Net is severely lacking in the notification department. Sheesh.), I'm sure everyone would appreciate it.

So, I'm just here to tell you that I LOVE this story. Seriously, I check for updates like EVERY DAY!!!! I'm addicted. Also, I'm VinnyXMatty all the way. I like Asher, sure, but he's an asshole and I don't think their relationship is healthy. Am I gonna hate you forever and never read anything you write if Matt winds up with Asher? No. Because you're writing is freaking amazing. But I would be much rather Matty get with Vinny, who seems to actually care about him. Even back in Muffin, I about squealed that one time Vinny seemed to sniff his hair. I just like Vinny so much more as a character and they seem so much better for each other. In all honestly, I feel like getting back with Asher would just put Matty on MORE medication. Mess him up worse.
Either way, I can't wait for the next installment :)
MattyXVinny!!!!!

i looove you so much i will name my first baby after you but please update soon i`m going crazy here >_<

Update, update pretty pleaaaaaz with a cherry on top! Goin toooootaaaallly nuuuttttzzzz waitin....

(>^3^)> *hugs* <(^.^<)


Maybe its the fact that I've listened to this song a gazilion times in a row, but Complicated by Rihanna, seems rather fitting at times lol.