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February 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I said this before but Ill just mention it again because I feel like it! Haha Bring Ash back soon if possible!
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February 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Needs more Asher. And more Asher x Matty!
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January 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thanxxxx 4da chap!! Bumer i luuuuved readin ur responsez... But ya ur ryt oviosly... Keep up da gud work!
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January 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
the end, ooh, spooky.
who was it?!! hmmm! i bet it was.... vincenzo? or ... couldnt be alrick.... hmm, maybe it was one of his friends, like that girl or the two guys he works with? hmmmm......
man, grody, matts been going to a prostitute? ergh.
i dunno, i dont think vin is play-flirting. i think hes actually really flirting.
who was it?!! hmmm! i bet it was.... vincenzo? or ... couldnt be alrick.... hmm, maybe it was one of his friends, like that girl or the two guys he works with? hmmmm......
man, grody, matts been going to a prostitute? ergh.
i dunno, i dont think vin is play-flirting. i think hes actually really flirting.
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January 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay, an update. As susual, this was amazing! You are an inspiring writer with your descriptions, dialog, and othas. You're DEF my fave author, and I LOVE this so far. Hmmm, I really dont know who texted hima t the end but it cant be Asher obviously. Gotta be Elena, Vincenzo, Alrick or one of Carter's men. Or even one of his budds. I CANNOT EXPRESS HOW MUCH I yearn for Ash. I AM SO HAPPY that Matthew seems like he CAN'T STOP THINKING about Ash when he's with other men. It makes me happy. I am GLAD he and Vincenzo didn't do much after last night but can't keep my hopes up since he is kinda attracted to mario where they can actually get together in the future (Please, God, no! It would be amusing but it would just be COMPLETELY wrong). He belongs with Asher obviouslyWell, I hope you can update ASAP! I miss Asher but you know that. 8D
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January 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Our poor Matt. He's so messed up. From having no knowledge of how to do it, to paying for it. The poor boy. And what a tantalising ending. I see you. Dun. Dun. Duuuuun.
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January 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
noooooooo! another huge cliffhanger that will eat at my soul until you update again :( poor matty, if i was him i think i would have peed myself a little from that text, haha. i wonder who it was, can't wait for the next chapter! happy that matty refused mario, can't wait for asher to join innnnn. i say that every time i review but damn i can't wait. <33333333
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January 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Muffin visiting a prostitute???? this makes me sad ): also (pleasantly) surprised that he topped, although I hope he won't top Asher..
Kinda reminds me of when Asher attacked Muffin in the early chapters of Muffin and then Muffin (how many times can I say Muffin in one sentence :D) saw him with a dude taking his shirt of... lol Asher and Muffin both, respectable and sane citizens. And also, that's how many times I've read Muffin. I could quote you some passages. Anyways, I wonder if Asher will ever find out :D and how he'll react to it, since he probably remembers Muffin as the innocent and naïve little kid (the pervert).
Also, the thing with Vincenzo and 'stop' was really interesting considering Asher never really stopped when Muffin told him to... and this whole Vincenzo protecting/Asher being a threat is the opposite of Muffin (the story).
I read the reviews every once in a while and get bothered whenever someone says Muffin should end up with Vincenzo :D nooo!!! I really wanted Vincenzo and Muffin to get it on in the first story, just to create a sort of jealousy thing but now it's just blaah :I especially since Asher isn't in the story yet.. maybe then. Or if Asher finds out. For some angst and drama :D But ultimately, Asher and Muffin belong together... I'll be super dissapointed if they don't because the ending of Muffin KILLED me.
Aaaand finally, could you give us a rough estimate of how long Matthew is going to be, in chapters? :)
I'm sorry you had a bad week and I hope you'll update soon!
Kinda reminds me of when Asher attacked Muffin in the early chapters of Muffin and then Muffin (how many times can I say Muffin in one sentence :D) saw him with a dude taking his shirt of... lol Asher and Muffin both, respectable and sane citizens. And also, that's how many times I've read Muffin. I could quote you some passages. Anyways, I wonder if Asher will ever find out :D and how he'll react to it, since he probably remembers Muffin as the innocent and naïve little kid (the pervert).
Also, the thing with Vincenzo and 'stop' was really interesting considering Asher never really stopped when Muffin told him to... and this whole Vincenzo protecting/Asher being a threat is the opposite of Muffin (the story).
I read the reviews every once in a while and get bothered whenever someone says Muffin should end up with Vincenzo :D nooo!!! I really wanted Vincenzo and Muffin to get it on in the first story, just to create a sort of jealousy thing but now it's just blaah :I especially since Asher isn't in the story yet.. maybe then. Or if Asher finds out. For some angst and drama :D But ultimately, Asher and Muffin belong together... I'll be super dissapointed if they don't because the ending of Muffin KILLED me.
Aaaand finally, could you give us a rough estimate of how long Matthew is going to be, in chapters? :)
I'm sorry you had a bad week and I hope you'll update soon!
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January 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yea!! I love the update. Thanks- It's getting exciting.
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January 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I think I thought I should mention something, and inform u who I think texted. When Mario spoke on his phone, he talked about a TRAIN. The name of the club where Matty had "train" in it. I hope this isn't a coincidence...if it is, then this is a HUGE coincidence LOL. I now think it's VERY likely it's Vincenzo who spotted him at the club but wonder why he's there. Also, Asher must know Elena n him are in France right or not. If he doesn't, it could mean they're both on break for work or something since as their boss, I think he's likely to know where they're at...it also seems like they're both in France doing some kind of BUSINESS I think other than visiting Matty. Anyway please update asap!