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I totally just read all of Muffin and the six chapters of Matthew in 48 hours. I'm in love!! Amazing work! Can't wait for the next update!

This story is seriously so good. I can't even fully express how much I've enjoyed it thus far. I read Muffin in about two days and I was so sad when I saw that it was over! Then I saw that there was a sequel. My reaction: OMG. OMG. A SEQUEL?!! You have no idea how extremely happy I became when I saw that there was a continuation!!

I'm loving the story so so so much. Can't wait until the next update!

Heya! I've been thinking something regarding the dude Ashley is seeing. This guy has an awkward limp...could it be ROGER?!! He was shot in his thigh since Matty shot him in Muffin, and this could've gave him a limp. OMG! At first, I denied this idea to hold any amount of truth because in chapter 25 of Muffin, I thought you hinted that he may be dead actually since Elena or Vincenzo said something like this: "Just be glad I got to him first." I thought that line meant he was probably dead but wait, that cant be right. It actually DOESN'T mean he's dead, right? You never said what happened to him exactly. So I think there's a damn great possibility it could be dear ROGER! If my speculation holds any truth, why would he be seeing Ashley? To get closer to Matt for some type of revenge (which is kinda weird in the first place since he stabbed Matty TWICE ALREADY! Ah!)or to kidnap Leah. I think he could be waitin for the right opportunity to kidnap Leah for Carter, and who knows maybe Matty as well! I wonder if Carter still wants to kill him, and if he knows it was Matty who betrayed Asher! AH! So many possibilities, and PLEASE UPDATE ASAP! :D

Ah! Hey, guess what? I caught another mistake LOL! I was actually surprised since I thought I caught most of them but I guess not :P This one is in Chapter 4 of this story, and it's this sentence: "But when I set the plastic container down in from of Leah,..." "From" should be "front!" Yay! Go me again!

You know, I started wondering since Muffin hasn't exactly been abstinent, and Asher definitely probably hasn't, either... would it be possible that Asher is... MARRIED???? Oooohh draamaaa~~

Dragonrose, Asher never blew Muffin and vice versa :I

don't know why you would think that...

I was so excited to find this sequel! I'm glad I looked at your profile page, lol. Its interesting to see the difference in Matt. He went from a troubled brat to a troubled young adult, lol. Its strange but cool at the same time. I like that we seem glimpes of how he used to be. I know how the homework thing goes. I'm swamped in it but I needed a break so I did a marathon read of Matthew, lol. Keep up the good work and good luck with the homework. :)

PS: The only thing I can think for updates without a mailing list is making a facebook page or making a site with a bot. I think it sucks with aff's new rule for review replies but what can you do right? :(

Iih! New chappoe! With smut! I'm in heaven~

As always, your writing is gold. Keep it up =D

I know its only been like ONE wk, but holy hell the anticipation is killing me! hahahah I cant stop myself from goin back and rereading the chapters in this story and also some of Muffin 2! Anyway, update asap 8D!

I really hope that Matthew and Asher work out in the end. I can't wait to read your next installment.