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for Matthew

by kiyoai

person I love asher
schedule February 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Seriously hating the Matty/Vincenzo pairing. Bring Asher back asap! Update soon please :D
person Mandy
schedule February 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Update soon...great job so far!
person Mattyslover
schedule February 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love this again. Please update soon!
person mandymoore
schedule February 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ah GOD NO! Matty's supposed to resist Mario! Update pleeeaaazeeee!
person Maddy
schedule February 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ugh! The Mario/Matt romance is killing me! *cries* Bring Ash back next chappie if you can!
person Jules
schedule February 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey there again! I said it once and I'll say it again: ASHER/MATT4EVA!!!! The only real good thing out of the Vincenzo/Matty pairingif it actually happens is that it will most definitely bring out the possessive in Pickett, and the realization (for Matthew)that he still loves Asher! Update soon!!!!!!!!
person asdf
schedule February 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo I sure hope those storm clouds bring that rain we were hearing in that first chapter...

Can't wait to see what troubles he gets into without the other adults around!
person asdf
schedule February 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh and if i had to chose (i just some of your reviews), i'd rather that matthew hooked up with vinny!!!

by all accounts, Vin has always treated Mat with more consideration. I'd say Asher is the asshole in the love triangle...he's just more cool is all...

XD

lol

good luck choosing between them. i like it if Mat were confused. feelings and love are complicated and not so black and white. then there are the different trust issues people have with different people.

woo! can't wait for an update
person Mint
schedule February 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hope you didn't mind my lil rant there ;D
person 1likerice
schedule February 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm really glad you decided to continue Muffin/Matthew's story. It couldn't just end like that. I'm sorry about classes and homework. Please try to update when you can. We're all anxiously awaiting finding out what happens next. Like does Vincenzo really like Matthew or does he have alterior motives for hitting on him? And where does that prologue chapter come in? That was a great hook, but now I want to know what prompted Matthew to contact him, how did he get his private number, and what happened to Alrick? And what about Leah? Matthew seems to have bonded a bit with her. Does something happen to her or Alrick that triggers him to reach out to Asher? And what is Asher going to do? Will he kill Matthew/Muffin on sight? Also, in Muffin, did you ever explain about the scar on his neck? I can't remember. I know Asher asks about it but I thought Muffin avoided it. Fingers crossed that you'll get a break soon and be able to update.