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Oh my word, I know you said you find it hard to write sweet mushy moments this chapter felt flawless to me. Matthew is.... lovely, broken, needy and I can't wait to see what happens to him. In my heart I would love him to end up with Asher because when I read Muffin I fell in love with them as a couple, however I will not be sad if he ends up with 'Mario' ;-) because they are adorable together too. I just feel sorry for whoever ends up alone actually lol.

I hope that they find Alrick soon. I miss him.

Damn, I think it's been an year for me since I last visited your story. I got really hooked up on Muffin but as it was WIP at one point I got frustrated with waiting and later forgot about it. Now when I come back I find out that not only had you finished it but you're also writing a sequel. I'm really not too much into angst. It makes the "lonely organ in my chest" way too heavy (I'm quoting you if you didn't notice ~.^). But when a story is that good even I am willing to overlook some of the misery of the characters. I'll be coming back to check up on you more often from now on. You also managed to inspire me to soon sit on my ass and write a new chapter of my own story. And that's a miracle on it's own.

I like Vincenso but he's not Asher. You wrote 26 chapters to hook us onto this guy. I'm not easily giving him up for an Italian who just discovered what playing charming means. So I'm still rooting up for Asher/ Matt. I think being jealous will help Asher sober up a bit and sort out his preordains.

Good luck to you with life and I wish you to find something you thought lost from a very long time. It's always such a wonderful experience!

Hey there! Great sequel ya got goin :D I was wondering if you're gonna have Vincenzo finally explain to Matty just who the Grandpa, Veronica and that other young man was to him from the last chapter of MUFFIN? These people who gave Matt new identity... like were they related to him or just old friends? I think it'd be interesting for him to explain to Matty. Also, wonder if Asher found a different lover, and if he did, just how Matty will react! hehehe. ASHER/MATT4EVA!!!!

*waves her Vincenzo/Matthew's fanclub flag" O_O; Yeah.....Asher is missing right now so I'm on Vincenzo's side. Lolz To be honest, I just want Matthew to be happy so either Vincenzo or Asher is fine with me. ^_^

P.S: If you want, I'll start to build up a wall of defense for you

Part of me had been hoping for a confrontation at the club, between Matthew and Vince.
Another part of me now realizes what that actually was. Matthew was trying desperately to distance himself. But anonymous sex just does not compare to real feeling and attraction.
Thanks for the update.

Oh DUDE! First, I was surprised when it was ASHLEY at the club and not Mario. Guess that was a rather big coincidence since he spoke about a train lol! I'm not gonna lie, I still feel rather heartbroken, down, sad, and fearful about the POSSIBILITY that Matty and Vincenzo might end up together in the end. Honestly, if you actually make them the couple that survives in the end (I doubt you will since you're smart! Come on, Asher and Matty have always been the main couple, and MARIO was NEVER truly looked upon as a true love interest in the 1st story, MUFFIN), I'll probably hate you forever. I'll still love you as an author but dear lord, if you make the Matty/Mario thingy last, I'll be so horribly SHOCKED, HEARTBROKEN, ANGRY, and just in a state of very real disbelief since (I'LL SAY IT AGAIN HERE) it is BLATANTLY OBVIOUSLY Ash/Matty were in love (you wrote SO MANY SIGNS IN MUFFIN AND ALSO IN THIS STORY THAT MATTY PROBABLY STILL LOVES HIM...1 reason being why else would he NOT be able to get Pickett out of his head when he's with other guys?! LOL...even when he was getting blown in chapter 6.. that shouldnt have reminded him of Asher but he just came up in his head) and probably still are. Why else would Ash;s chest immediately tightend upon hearing his words on the phone, and think about him crying? It's highly likely they're still OBSESSED, and OH GOD I ALMOST wanted to start crying in misery when Matty THOUGHT about having Vincenzo make him forget, heal, etc... But alas, I HAVE TOTAL FAITH that once ASH is back in the picture, he's gonna be reminded that he loved him and REALIZES he still does damn it... I am feeling most optimistic that ASHER/MATT will make it in the end just because there was so much chemistry from the moment they looked upon each otha. It was practically Luv at 1st sight for Ash since he fucking kisses him when he saw Matty without all the dirt on his face, and Matty was attracted to him from the beginning as well. Vincenzo never attracted Matty the way Asher did. I think it is LOGICAL and makes sense to not have him end up with Mario. Asher and Matty are true soulmates god damnnit! If Matty ends up with Vincenzo, it would be almost exacty like having Bella end up with Jacob in Twilight (Don't know if you read Twilight hehe). Anyway, I'm staying optimistic about Asher/Matty and please please update asap! Waiting three weeks was torture! Your writing is impeccable like usual. One more thing, I hope Asher shows up SOON! You know how much I miss the guy :D

hello!

I've just recently discovered your stories, and they are amazing! Your characters come across so vivid its hard to believe/sad that they're not real! I agree with your prediction of Asher vs. Vincenzo, I'm already biting my nails with indecision. Nevertheless I will patiently wait for the next chapter (okay maybe not too patiently :-P). Either way I admire your writing skills. And the world you've built for Matthew is truly addictive.

nice forboding at the end.
im guessing the next chapter is when all hell breaks loose.
its a trap damnit! im bettin mat gets a phone call, and its not from his 'italian' but the bad guy... i forgot his name.
sheesh.
was vin dressed like a disco dude or what? lol. seriously, the image i got was 'boogie nights'.
i gots a baaaaaaad feeling that youre going to kill vin off. please dont.
i wonder if vin had been in a relationship with asher or something? maybe....
and, i thought the gooey fluff parts were sweet.
update soon................

Man I dont know who to root for Vincenzo or Asher. In muffin i was going for asher but in this Im kinda rooting for Vin and I was listening to the song Disgusting and it kinda reminded me of Mathew and Vincenzo

Finally You See It My Way.



Yayyy , Matt / Vinny All DA Way!


UpDate More Sooner Plllzzz.. Like Evry Other Day Would Help!


I Hate Waitinq To Watch U Update And Forot About The Story.