rate_review Reviews

Squeee :) You is awesome. I love it as per usual. the wait makes it better.
:D
Look forward to more of our favourite kid :)

Matthew! What are you doing?!!?!? Hopefully Asher returning will kill the whole mattxvin thing cause i'm definatly not a fan of it :(
It makes me want to castrate Vincenzo with a pair of garden sheers :(
Won't Asher be extremely pissed about the mattxvin thing going on? And won't it totally kill Vincenzo when Matthew choses Asher over him? (CAUSE HE WILL WON'T HE?????? HUHHHHHHHHHHHHH? PLEASE??) & oooooooh there's a storm coming, hmmmm? hmmmmm???!! ASHER TIME is near :) yay! excited for the next update
Yeah, love this story, love you for writing it and giving me something to look forward to
UPDATE SOON! x

I have so many questions... but hopefully the answers will be provided. I love ash-matt-vincent... very much... I just dont see either men sharing Matt... both are extremely territorial it seems... but I want matt to finally be happy!

well you can't won us all ... but that's ok trying to please everyone would make your stories.... boring.
Part of the joy I find in reading is not knowing what's going to happen next.
Part of the joy I find in writing is leaving your readers wondering and loving you for it.
I am an Asher fan. reason being Asher has a hidden depth he's dangerous, and cruel yet he has an heir of sadness and longing. He leaves you with questions to why someone so... Asher could have so much unadressed...underlineing(borderline)emotion that some how makes you love to hate him and hate to love him.
In doing this I know you can creat a more then simply likeable depth to Vinny so who knows you may change me into a M and V fan yet.
In the mean time where's my ASHER!!!!
Thanks for the update
and I'm sorry your finding the new uploading chapters unpleasent
and I like that you worried of your readers it's the mark of a good writer it shows you care for not only your work but people you let read it.
Remember you are not writing for us. You are writing for you, and if you don't like it no one else will.
your loyal reader
S.

Ahem, it's 4 AM and I'm finishing my shift in an hour, so it won't be coherent.
Oh, don't worry about a fan-killing spree - after all they say a story stays with you longer if it doesn't end the way you want :P . It's a part of the charm of reading.

I'm Team Matthew myself :P - yup, I made that one up - the best ending for me would be if he found his peace and hapiness no matter with whom he ends up with. As I sad I'm not a fan of Asher and the whole sex scene with Frederic (no accents, sorry) is an example of it - as Matt said himself he's unable to have a normal ralationship (or even casual sex - when paying an for an escort you don't have to interact with someone beyond sex). Anyhow, moving on from the romance part (and don't worry about your fluff - you're doing good ;) ).

I like Leah's character and how she makes Matthew warm up to her and try to act more stable - she seems to have a similar effect on Vincenzo and Elena as well. Also, she's really mature - if it was me when I was her age I would make everyone's life a living hell. She must be used to her parents expecting her to act more grown up in certain situations.

Generally, you're quite great at creating back stories ... it makes me wonder how all these people ended up together in the same gang. Vincenzo is Italian and I'm guessing he got involved with mafia back home and somehow they delegated him to US. Then there is Elena, who I'm assuming is from a Spanish speaking country (if he origins were mentioned, I forgot them, sorry :( ) and used to be a dancer. Not to mention Alrick who is German and seems like one of those civil servants who were forced to co-operate with the bad guys. It's quite fascinating, because most gangs are pretty much local. Yup, I think too much :P .

I wonder what will be the role of Matt's friends - they seem like a fun bunch and I'm thinking Matt's going to need their help since he was left with Leah by himself (which was probably not wise...).

Okay enough from me, you carry on since I want to have your novels on my bookshelf one day ;) .

I feel awfully one-track minded with my OTP-ness. I don't really understand myself why I'm so afraid of this Vincenzo thing, when I really need to drill it into my head that life isn't a happy fairy tale. I try not to be a hardcore shipper. ;__;

... And after a storm comes a calm?

You know, I like both Asher and Vincenzo and won't ever pick at you about what Matthew is doing with whichever xD I find them both equally appealing for him to end up with, depending on where you take the story x3 I can't wait to see what happens next!

Yesterday, I decided to check this site, since I haven't done that for a long time (my university is keeping me busy).
And I saw that you have decided to write a sequel to Muffin. My heart skipped a beat, literally.
I love your style of writing. Honestly, I think it's the best I've seen here so far.
You have a talent to describe really vivid pictures; you take your time to develop your personages and I love the way your plot is evolving.
I think that the love triangle which is forming now is very interesting. I find stories in which the character is attracted to THE-ONE-AND-THE-ONLY-GUY a little bit naive.
I also like the mature Matthew!
I hope you will find time to update, if not regularly, at least from time to time.

This is the same 'Mint' as before, just felt like using my username. I take bacc what I told you about how if you have Matty end up with Mario in the end, I'll hate you forever. I realized I can NEVER HATE YOU NO MATTER WHAT YOU DO because you're my fave author and I do heart/luv ya for creating AMAZING STORIES and chars! :D Update asap!

-grin- yeah you MIGHT get killes by one of the teams.... wonder what? I like Vincenzo but I think I'm on Team Asher... at least I WAS, I have no idea how he will act now, if he has changed and stuff... I wanna see him SOOOOON....
THe scary part here wasen't the fluff, it was the prospect of baby-sitting -shivers- ;)