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oh. my. god.
wasnt expecting that!

Agh!!! Carter is completely pissing me off! My God, I wish I could just jump into that scene with a machine gun or something and shoot him right in the crotch! How dare he hurt our poor little Matthew? And threating innocent Leah?! That's just going too far! Asher, you better get your ass there and defend the two cuties! I expect horrible, horrible things to happen to Carter and Roger, and I expect it NOW!

P.S. As you can see, I definitely want Matthew to end up with Asher ;) Of course, a little jealousy via Vincenzo wouldn't hurt, not at all ;)

I read this the other night on my phone but can't review from there. So, review! I'm not sure yet where I fall on the Matthew/Asher or Matthew/Vincenzo argument, so I'm totally okay with what's going on here. Matthew needs someone to take care of him! Or to push him into taking care of himself, because it's sad the way he's not actually *living* his life. I don't quite approve of the way Vincenzo and Elena seem to have just come in and taken over his life, because I'm worried that it'll stir up trouble for him. I'm glad to see him getting along a little better when it comes to Leah, but also worried that something's going to happen involving her. And the last line - I have a feeling that's not referring to just the weather. I am excited that you updated (I was all "oh, yay!" when I saw the update on twitter) and look forward to more, and I hope RL is treating you well!

O_O OF COURSE HE'LL SHOW UP! Or...he better! If not him then Vincenzo to the rescue? Ahhhh the suspense is going to kill me! D: I can't wait to read more!

I’m too tired to go into detail, but it needs to be said. I love this story. I love these characters. I love how grounded they are to reality emotionally wise. I love our messed up Matt and our innocent heartbroken Sweetheart. Normally overly innocent sweet cute characters make me puke, but she really makes it work. Or you make it work. Same thing :3

Ohhh please dont leave it too long to update! I love this story and cant wait to see what happens next!!
Asher love :)

ah! fucking shit, that was FAST! LOL, the update. YAY ASHER IS COMING BACK THE NEXT CHAPPIE I THINK! *grins* Thank you for this amazin chapter and fast update! Holy hell! But Asher's gonna be here FINALLY! I was starting to get more and more depressed and slightly pissed that Asher still hasn't showed up but yay! He'll be here! We finally meet Carter!HAHA so I was right about Oliver being ROGER? That was kinda unexpected since we thought the other brunette was Oliver int he last chapter! Anyway, I cant wait to read next one! PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!!!!!

i seriously love both asher and vincenzo, and whoever matt ends up with, it's inevitable that there will be a loser.... unless one of them dies, but that'd just suck ass... or if matt doesn't end up with anyone after all... but anyway, good job once again... i really enjoy reading your work!

I'm totally 'team Switzerland' at this point anyway! ;D It's no surprise that the sequel is just as suspenseful as the Muffin was! This is some great stuff, and I hope you can update soon >:P!

I. LOVE. YOU.
That is all :)