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Ah He's coming!! Update pleeeaaazeeee!

Bring him back soon. As in, update as soon as possible! UPDATE NOW if possible!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D

Hey there again! ASHER/MATT4EVA!!!! Update soon!!!!!!!!

This story is moving along. We have reached the prologue point already. As much as I loved Muffin there were times I did want a faster story.
I feel bad for Matthew it is just more and more pain for him at this point. Poor kid he needs a break. He needs therapy, and a vacation.

I wasn't sure who Roger was at first and then I remembered....sort of =P, damn! that Ashley girl really doesn't know how to pick guys.
Sooo...I think ASHER IS BETTAH ha! nah, but yeah, I'm more of an Asher fan, I'll always be, but at the same time I like Vicenzo too, so, like you said I'm going to enjoy whatever happens.

Ahhhh! I can't wait to see Asher fight Vicenzo, I mean Carter, I mean both =P

Anyways, hope you feel better...Really, I'm not hoping you get a 10 hour sickness just to write a chapter ;). Nah, seriously now I wish you are well, cause there's nothing like being healthy =).

See you!

Hey! I just thought of something hehe! I'm kinda scared for Vincenzo actually once Asher finds out about how he's already made a move on Matt. I can just picture Mario making some comment about how he kissed Matty to Ash or something to that effect just to piss Pickett off! Cant wait for the drama involving the possible love triangle to be hea ;D But my MAIN point is I'm a lil frightened for Mario/Elena since they obviously went behing Asher's back in staying with and involving Matt. Also, I can imagine the type of anger asher will have once he realizes what EXACTLY happened the day he got arrested... I always kind of wondered like what exactly Elena and Vincenzo told Asher about what happened that day. I thought Asher would've definitely asked what happened, and imagined and thought Vincenzo/Elena told him about how Matt got caught with the bug in the metal detector-like device but I think they didn't inform ASher about how Mario told him to run away from Asher. I also wonder, did they even tell Asher about how Matty was told the fibb and lie from Roger and how he never would've done it if known the truth. I also think its important for Matty to inform him everything Roger told him and that he never would've betrayed him. I want him to finally apologize to Asher since Ash didnt eexactl let him at ending of last story. Anyway, I think those are all my points now. PLease update asap!

I hope Asher does come to help. I have to wonder what he is going to do to Mathew (Muffin). Please don't let anything happen to Asher or Leah and especially not Matthew.

Update soon!

Get sick again soon!
Oh, I think that's a first for me, wishing that on a person... well... somone I likd, anyway... but hell, it's good for ME, so... Gah, this was a scary chapter! I really did NOT see it coming... but Asher might be on his way! Yaay! Wait.. .the trap... not yay! But, on the other hand, Asher knows about it so... but will he come then?! I... no, you just HAVE to get sick again! *throws germs at you*

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY you made my week! so many updates! and omg you leave the perfect (and torturous) cliffhangers.

and finally ASHER!! i get excited whenever someone even says his name and also I was waiting for muffin to finally meet carter hehe... and the whole 'give me your word' exchange was intriguing and I can't wait to find out more about carter's character and whether he will actually honour his word...
also, is dean carter still alive? i wonder if he'll be introduced to the story... and marie emerson, asher's mom? maybe we'll meet her when asher and muffin get married COUGH COUGH also, what happened to liza?? i doubt she stuck around for asher's house arrest :D
more than anything though, i can't wait for asher to finally show up ;--;

i'm guessing the oliver at the club was some sort of a mix-up, right? that's why ashley went looking for something (or someone)...

leah being excited for the fair was so cute :) and the whistle-blowing was so awwww. i couldn't really warm up to her before but this chapter really killed me. poor baby, i hope she's fine!

even though i'm team asher i'd feel really bad if vincenzo had his heart broken. i think he should come to the conclusion that muffin is in love with asher himself and ~give him up~ willingly, or something :D and for whoever's complaing that asher doesn't care about muffin: "I saw how Asher protected him, okay?" says Roger.

sometimes muffin's slow reactions, like at the fair with the leah-napping, are really annoying but i guess it's because of his medications abuse? although it's always fun to see little snippets of his old self through his zombie mask, like when he's arguing with vincenzo or carter.

sorry this review was all over the place :D as for the asher bettah, vincenzo bettah thing, although i am rooting for asher, i think i'll be happy with whatever ending you write, as long there is an ending, and the story isn't just abandoned... and to quote vonnegut: "Write to please just one person. If you open a window and make love to the world, so to speak, your story will get pneumonia."
so... write to please ME haha :DD

life is crap at the moment and this story is one of the few things that make me genuinely happy, so with that i wish you good health and happy writings! :)

ROGER!! ahhh someone KILL him already!! and Leah is just sooo adorable.
im glad you had a fluke today. its my birthday and this just made today even more better. and i know you said just enjoy the ride and all but i just gotta say TEAM VINNY!!! ok. im done. byyye. cant wait for more.