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by kiyoai

person DarkSacrifice
schedule March 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
DUDE! ASHER DUUUUDE MAN WOOOOOJOOOOOOOOOOOJOJOJOJO THIS IS MY FAVORITE CHAPTER JUST BECAUSE HE HAS PART IN IT JAJAJAJ I AM HAPPY I LOVE ASHERRRR YAYAYAYA THANK YOU AND PLEASE UPDATE SOON WITH PARTS OF ASHER IN IT !:PXD
person womo
schedule March 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
side note: i thought it was really cool that one of carter's men sort of save leah and matthew (by pushing them out of the way of falling metal? i don't remember)

just goes to show some people are just generally nice :D
person Chasing
schedule March 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really want Matt and Asher to be together again. Despite what happened, they are just too cute together. I want them to be a couple again! Even though they have some major issues. The part where Asher checked his temperature made me smile, despite the fact that Asher pulled away quickly! Please update when you can! Thanks!
schedule March 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god this chapter is freaking AWESOME >.< I totally can't wait till the next one comes out.
person wizzy891
schedule March 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
MattXCarter = `Hell #NO.

MattXVinny = `Hell Yes.

MattXAsher = `MAYBE.
person Touli
schedule March 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
MattXCarter WOOOO! Haha, but then I can't have him with Vincenzo. Unless Carter's love for Matt is unrequited, which would be fun! But I love and miss Vincenzo, although I'm glad at Asher's cryptic return into Matthew's life. Cannot WAIT for next chapter :D
person Old Hag
schedule March 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Matt/Carter? Sure! Anyone/Matt is good.
Exept, maybe, Alrick...
You're good with writing UST and angst, keep writing, please.
schedule March 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I just couldn't believe that Asher actually left Mathew there bleeding and didn't spare a glance at him. I know that Asher is still bitter about Mathew's betrayal but that is just cruel... Also, Asher actually pushes Mathew away when he was gripping him... urghhh

p.s: maybe adding Carter to the equation would not be bad and more interesting. It's almost ironic to have Carter falls in love with Mathew since he and Asher met the same way too
person BecauseMashaIsAwesome
schedule March 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hello Masha! I am a fan of your Muffin story but sadly, I am not reading Matthew until it is finished. I don't do well with WIP's since I go a little crazy and get a twitch waiting for the update.

I know. I'm an idiot. Especially since I am cheating and reading the reviews of the story. Not the spoilerific ones, just the virginal teases. The bitches. Because really... MattxCarter?!?! What the hell is happening in this story! lol

I think I'm going to have to break my vow and just read along. Either that or bring myself to *stop* reading the damn reviews which *certainly* aren't helping my resolve. Damnit.

Oh and I am all for that threesome with Asher, Vincenzo and Matthew that I keep seeing people ask for.

Keep being awesome 'cause you kick some serious writing ass =]

P.s. Either you're psychic or you live where I live because it hasn’t stopped raining since this morning where I am. Another damnit. Sigh.

person uchiha sasuke
schedule March 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
nno threesome..plssssssssssssssssssssss. i am begging you... it will make you know much more romantic and meaningful if muffin(yes i still want to call him that since its cute)will chose only one guy...because if you have a threesome it will just lower the story and be like the other who's just all about sex... but this has a story... a very good story in fact so plsss... no threesome... why do i get the feeling that carter will fall in love with muffin... omg i cant wait to see it... i mean muffin is so amazing.. not only does he got asher and vincenzo, now i think carter too.. carter liking muffin will make things really interesting... i think asher will be really jealous... i can't wait... pls update soon.. i really really like your story to even review and i can tell i dont review unless i love the story..

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