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ahh. ahhh. i cant believe he left him in there!!! and where in the heck is Vincezo??? and nooooo never ever do a matt and carter unless like matt is gonna kill him right after lol. glad youre feeling better! good luck on your midterms :)

No, no MattXCarter! And Matt is in so much trouble, not just with Asher but with Vincenzo too. But I am so glad that Leah is safe, and that Matt overcame his issues enough to help her. I have a feeling that saving Carter is gonna come back and bite him in the ass, though. And Matt's lucky he ran into his friend, and that he has friends, but they're going to end up in the middle of this whether he likes it or not.

Good luck with your school stuffs!

YES! Asher in the flesh. I'm trembling in anticipation of whats to come. Right now there are thousands of delicious ideas running through my skull on how exactly he could choose to extract revenge. Go Asher, go! Run Matthew, Run!

MattxCarver would be interesting cause it would piss Asher off. I still want Matt and Asher to be together. Can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the good work!

Lots of Love,
Kristen

yeah, sure, why not?have fun writting it.but I'd like to see it only as a push to Asher's jealousy and rough loving later after he kicks Carter to a bloody pulp.Yessssss.That would be good slash.It would certainly get my rocks off;)

AH!!!!OMG!!!! Asher is finally in hea! Can I say that I LOVE YOU FOR BRINGING IN ASHER AT THIS POINT IN TIME? I for one am damn proud that he is bacc in Matty's life before him and Mario got to do anything so I am feeling optimistic/hopeful that he and Mario won't get together because you know why?! ASHER IS BACK; his one and only luv! AHHHHHHHHHHH! Damn Asher is scary like Carter said. Not knowing what he's gonna do as we're reading... I love this uncertainty about Asher's plans. Also, I wonder what happened to Mario and Elena. DId they find out about everything that occurred. Is Asher gonna punish them in any way? HE CAN FIRE THEM 2! They so went behind his back so many times! Also I think that dirty blond hair was DAniel...or was it Alrick?! I think I remember Daniel had the dirty blonde... ah well! At first I was CONFUSED when Asher felt his forehead, and touched his...body lol! First (well, to me at least, it seemed like he was only doing it as a SHOW to look concerned in front of Rick...but now that I reread it a few...it seems like he was TRULY CONCERNED ABOUT HIS FEVER!!! And he touched him further because HE IS STILL INFATUATED AND IN LOVE WITH MATTY! Me thinks tHe is still a PERV! LOL WELL I LOVE THIS. YOU NEVER FAIL TO AMAZE/IMPRESS/INSPIRE ME WITH YOUR WRITING! YOU'RE THE GREATEST THIS SITE HAS SEEN (to me). Luv ya lots.
BTW, I SERIOUSLY HOPE YOU'RE NOT ANNOYED WITH MY NUMEROUS REVIEWS. I KNOW YOU SAID YOU CANT BE ANNOYED BUT I got myself wondering... OH WELL! I cant help my love for this story that MAKES/COMPELS TO REVIEW :D PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!!!!! I love Asher's aggressiveness, and how he always got up in his personal space xD It's hott!

MORE. NOW. I simply DEMAND more.

Huh Wonder if you're gonna inform us somehow HOW ASHeR KNEW WHERE HIS PLACE WAS. He obviously didn't follow him so I'm thinking tracking device maybe, or outside sources like Vincenzo and Elena. He coulda forced them to tell him where he lived as their boss. Also, ASHER MUST KNOW WHERE ALRICK IS HIDING I'M ASSUMING SO it makes me wonder JUst why Elena/Mario don't know where he's hiding. Asher probably didn't inform them. I wonder also if Asher had a feeling or if he somehow KNEW that Mario let Matty escape AND KNEW WHERE HE WAS IN FRANCE OR DID ASHER JUST RECENTLY FIGURE OUT MARIO HELPED HIM ESCAPE? Anyway PLEASE OH PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!!

As usual this chapter broke my heart. And there are so many things to worry about too. At least our little Leah is okay.

When I see this story has updated, I get all emotional. I swear. There might even be tears. Lords I love this story.

holy crickets!!! i love youuuu!!!

Carter seems a little unstable but what the who, asher, matt and carter are pretty much in the same boat!!

they should have a threesome. eh heh lol

great chapter! i enjoyed reading it. so much action!