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Can you please tell us if you have writer's block or won't have the next chapt for awhile? It would benefit us not having to check everyday if we know its not comin for awhile. Update soon PLEASE
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Wow. So I've been away from thissite for awhile so when I checked your page, finding your sequel was such a pleasant surprise! And It's brilliant! The "Muffin series" has become my favorite original story. I find both main parings interesting to explore."Endgame" wise- I'm gonna let you do your thing ;) Now Carter/Matt! I like Carter's fascination iwith mattand expect it to grow ten fold after the rescue (I see wut you did thar lol)
. So Cool twist on that one! Definitely on board exploring that too!

To me, You do your thing and I know it'll turn out the best way possible and good going for not being swayed by ship wars. I've seen tv producers fall in that account 8O
Can't wait for more!!

Oh and I forgot! Leah-You touched me with that character. She's a kid but you portrayed her so realistically which i don't think all writers can do. And the whole sequel is just jhfjfjfh perfect! Oh and the Hero complex Matt has-Genius and makes so much sense after reading the story and him saving evil Carter and I'll Shut up now :)

I am so in love with muffin/matthew I can not wait until the next chapter.......please please update soon it has been over a month.

OH. MY. GOD. THIS IS AH-MAZING! I love the characters and the plot and the pacing and the writing, all of it. I know you don't want to hear about Asher vs. Vincenzo, but ASHER! ASHER, ASHER, ASHER! Asher and Matthew's relationship is beautiful. You did such a good job developing it in Muffin, and I really really really want more. I can has more? Oh, and I came up with some possible chapter titles: matter, mattress, Mattel, and Matterhorn. This is just a suggestion, of course, but you should write a chapter called 'mattress' about Asher and Matthew having sex. And then they could go mountain-climbing in Italy/Switzerland. And buy some Barbies. But, no, really, I'm serious about the AsherxMatthew sex. Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next chapter! Please, please update soon!

oh wow-
I hate wips because you never know if they finish but I waited for Muffin. I was hooked. And sad when it ended. (Though the ending fit.)
And now this. Thank you! I'll be waiting....
I have the same feeling of dread(?) in my stomach reading this. And I enjoy this feeling... (Ususally I don`t). I am hoping for AsherxMatt but I don`t really care. I guess there won't really be a happy ending anyway... And as you wrote in the Note: I am along for the ride.

I just reread Muffin AND Matthew and they are AMAZING! I love Asher and and I love Matthew/Muffin and I LOVE AsherxMuffin! Their relationship is so layered, and you've written it so well! I can't wait to see where it goes from here! As for Vincenzo, I'm SO sorry, but I hate him SO much! And is he actually working for Asher? Cos it kinda seems like he isn't, like maybe Alrick's with Asher, and Vincenzo and Elena kidnapped Leah to use her as leverage to get Alrick on their side. I dunno. Write more soon PLEASE! And write more AsherxMatthew! Including hot make up sex! Or just angry sex. But AsherxMatthew! I love this fic so so much, and I'm really looking forward to more!

The song In My Arms by Plumb reminds me of Ash/Matthew! Don't u think? You should listen to it or download it! Here are some lyrics that remind me of them:

knowing clouds will raise up
storms will race in
but you will be safe in my arms
rains will pour down
waves will crash all around
but you will be safe in my arms

Castles they might crumble
dreams may not come true
but you are never all alone
because I will always
always love you

Its mushy and warm...

Mahsa! This IS irrelevant to this story BUT WHEN MY BRO showed ME HIS NEW BLUE CONVERSE SHOES LAST WEEKEND, I got so giddy and started laughing! haha. He was like "Why are you laughing?" And I'm like, "I'm not laughing." I was though! I HEART YOU. and please update asap! I MISS YOUR STORY SO MUCH *sobs hysterically* *hugs you* Update asap ! xD

Ah!! I put off finishing Muffin for so long, because I was so afraid it was going to end unhappily, so you can imagine my excitement when I checked back in and found out not only had Asher not died but you'd already written eight chapters of a sequel! This is amazing! I love Asher and Matthew and Asher/Matthew, and I could totally get behind Carter/Matthew, but every single thing about Vincenzo, and Matthew/Vincenzo, grates on me, so I'm begging you not to go there, at least not emotionally. And I loved the interaction between Asher and Matthew at the end, with Asher hating him but still caring about him. I can't wait for more!