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for Matthew

by kiyoai

person slaveneko
schedule May 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ohh so u were just joking im glad though what will i do with the 56 knight i bought just for u hmmmmmmmmmmmm ^^ glad to see our encoregement got u interested again lol
person Tex
schedule May 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
WORTH THE WAIT!! And grats on your finals!
Man, your writing is NOT getting worse at all. Don't stop writing this, it's not boring, and as much as I love Vincenzo, Asher absolutely 1 upped him with the "Make me fall in love with you" bollocks. *dreamy sigh* Cocky twat.
Please don't stop writing this. You might feel it's getting boring, but it really isn't.
I just hope your next update isn't doesn't take as long as this one did >> It's well worth the wait, but I'm not patient at all :P
I found it very, very cute that Asher remembered Matt's allergy >> And I cooed when the only thing that got a reaction out of him was when Matt was about to eat the bloody thing. Very cute, yes.
Next update soon, please? D: PLEEAASEEE?!??! xxx
person Yolandi
schedule May 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please dont just put up a sumary. I really like your story. It wont do it justis. So it may get a bit bad but the story line will stay the same and that is what I like about it. Please please dont just put up a sumary
person tacita18
schedule May 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It was a long wait but totally worth it. I'm running off to read. More in a moment :)
person Yolandi
schedule May 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
bay the way i like this one more then muffin so how can it get bad?
person Me
schedule May 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*jaw drop*

yah, please don't end with a summary!!! if you're bored, that's okay, i'll wait!! or or or maybe just, i don't know, make it quick? (i don't write so anything i say is probably unrealistic lol)

but, you are an excellend writer so i'm not sure what kind of bad writing you're referring to -- i'm sure your "laziest" writing is still ten times better than half of what is posted out there (which makes me the more willing to wait it out). either way, happy to see an update and good luck with the job hunt!
person tacita18
schedule May 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
'm back.




WOW!


That was something! The ending was very unpredictable. I expected sth along the lines of "be my bitch", "submit to me" etc, but never sth like that!

I liked the chapter a lot, and I hope we won't wait as long for the next. :)
person jay
schedule May 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please! Don't stop writing this story! I love it!
person Mint
schedule May 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Side Note: I AND MATT MISS THE BLUE HOUSE! HOPE HE VISITS IT SOMETIME!
schedule May 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the update!! I had been thinking of this story a lot lately and look there's more of it to read. I'm glad to Asher back. I am very surprised by that last line though. Now I desperately want to read the next chapter...(whimpers in agony).

Update soon please!!