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by kiyoai

person Faust
schedule May 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You can't fucking stop after that. Do you really want our hate on your conscious? Hmmmm?
person xMalaiax
schedule May 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So much squee when I saw you posted. Awesome chapter by the way. Finally some asher/matty scenes where Matty gets to be all growly again! I missed those.

Glad you got your finals over and yeah, jobs suck don't they?

I totally get that feeling when you're sick of characters. I think it might be time for you to end the story, maybe? It's difficult but if you're really feeling that way, a summary or even a last chapter that wraps things up either tidily or untidily would work. Then, if you miss the characters still, you could always just write one-shots of whatever happens in future days. That could be more fun for you than trying to follow a storyline too closely while dealing with all the intricacies of a romance.

I actually love the story. I think it's beautifully written and Matty is awesome. You obviously love the characters, but again, one shots give you a chance to revisit the characters just for fun and with no real set goal in mind.

It's still one of my favorite stories Muffin and Matthew actually ( I consider them one story). I hope you find the inspiration to finish however you want to - whether that's summary, a last chapter or a continuation. The characters are just so intriguing =).

Congratz again on finishing finals! <3
person Anon
schedule May 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
If you stop writing this story, then you are a very cruel person. Just look at all the reviews this story plus Matthew have gotten. Why on Earth would you threaten your faithful readers like that? Not nice of you. They have all been there for you during the long waits due to your classes. I don't think it's even funny that you would joke about it and just be thankful for their support of your stories.

You have a very good thing going so don't blow it by threatening people you won't finish this story after everyone has been supporting you from the beginning.

Shame on you!!!

I do love your stories (and think you are a fantastic writer with a wonderful imagination) and apologize for being rude but your note upset me very much!
person belle nakadar
schedule May 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
<3 -nothing else to say-
person Mint
schedule May 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What are u talking bout, Mahsa?! You are Nuts if you expect us to be OKAY WITH JUST A SUMMARY! All of us WANT you to keep writing no matter what! I don't get why you're bored with your writing. HMMM, well, I agree with Viperidae in that I WOULD KEEP LOVING YOUR WRITING AND neva stop reading it! I heart you so much! Your writing is REALLY GOOD, so good that you're one of the TOP AUTHORS on HERE!

Do you think you need a break from writing or something? SOME WRITERS WHO FELT THE SAME TOOK A NEEDED BREAK AND THEN CAME BACK. MAYBE taking a break from writing will INSPIRE YOU TO WRITE AND FINISH! SOME AUTHORS JUST NEED A BREAK...MAYBE YOU'RE ONE OF EM?? IDK. PLEASE DON'T STOP WRITING! If you dont finish, I will CRY SERIOUSLY! I WOULD SERIOUSLY SOB. This chapter was AMAZING LIKE USUAL! Carter is crazy, and POOR DANIEL. MISS VINCENZO, ELENA AND ALRICK...EVEN LEAH! Asher is a asshole AGAIN HAHA. That's why we love him. THE ENDING WAS UNEXPECTED. It's a lil sad because I THOUGHT HE IS ALREADY OR WAS IN LOVE WITH MATT? I THINK HE IS, BUT HE IS POSSIBLY DENYING IT TO HIMSELF AND/OR TO MATT BY telling Matt to make him fall for him. ASHER ALREADY LOVES HIM, AND MATT LOVES HIM. All of it is OBVIOUS.

KNOW THAT Thousands (exaggeration...I think) LOVE THIS, AND WOULD BE DEVASTATED IF YOU WERE TO STOP WRITING! HOPE EVERYTHING WORKS OUT IN THE END THOUGH with you and this story. Maybe a new story would inspire you again? JUST KNOW I LOVE THIS AND YOU, and I BEG YOU TO KEEP GOING WITH THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule May 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ASHER! *hearts* Matt is so his weakness, and he HATES it, zomg. I am not tired of these two at all, but I can understand what it's like to get tired of your own writing/storytelling. I hate that you're not feeling inspired lately!
person Mint
schedule May 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR NOT ENDING IT!!!!!!!!! *KISSES AND LICKS* *TACKLES YOU WITH HUG* I LOVE YOU MORE NOW FOR CONTINUING! I CAN NOW SLEEEP AT NIGHT lol *ANOTHER BEAR HuG
person kylee
schedule May 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This new story is really god Mahsa. I have been hooked since I started reading.
person xMalaiax
schedule May 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey Mahsa, I just read that you were getting hate mail? WTF? I thought I'd make you feel better by showing you my signature in the forums. Check out k u s g dot com, its the forum for the_slash_pile - my username is chey_d. or you can go to ku sg dot com forward slash TeamAsh dot png. (or just check your deviant art page, I left the links there)
schedule May 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh updated! It's awesome that your finals are over. With any luck, now that you don't have to study you might end up picking interest over this story again. Just take your time with it, quality over quantity and all that.