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Another mistake alert: Ch 6 of Muffin: "I pushed the comforter that had been tucked up over me to one aside, outstretching my feet out to the floor so I could steadily regain my balance." Word "aside" should be "side."

if you are bored I suggest inserting some new characters :)

well like temp ones. maybe a rival for matt. j/k

personally i would not mind a summary, but i would also love to read more from you, whatever story it is. i like your plots.

that said, i enjoyed the chapter. maybe you should try to get muffin published, after editing it a bit?

there are some other authors on aff.net that publish with this one company/website. i forget what it's called though. you can also always ask for *cough* donations *cough* XD set up a paypal or whatnot, if it isn't against aff.net rules...
money is a good motivator. if not, a muse is as well.

you can always ask for fanart :)

and oh yeah Asher is totally in denial.

he's already fallen in love and still in it, i think.

he just doesn't want to admit it. poor muffin has to knock some sense into him. i wish he could give asher an emotional heart attack! mwahahaha

it would be icing on the cake if carter knowingly helped muffin make asher realize it. LOL

that bastard. i like how you describe his smile. they're sort of like mood swing indicators.

congrats on your finals! Amazing chapter, it was my fav so far, probably because of all the matt asher interaction :D can not wait for the next!!!

"I already knew he was angry with me. He felt betrayed. Abandoned. He was an angry, hurt child throwing a tantrum, and he didn’t know how to vent without lashing out. We were doomed to destroy each other because neither one of us knew how to talk it out."

Yep! That's it in a nutshell. Both emotionally traumatized and extremely vulnerable, these two desperately need to deal with their past ghosts. WTH? "Make me fall in love with you"??? Awwwww, that's soooo Asher...you beautiful control freak you.

dont worry illl beat the inspiration into you you better give me more asher you better kyaaaa that last phrase caught out of surprise how could anybody be tired of them omg i love them i missed ya hope next chappi come soon or thell be hell to pay >< pleas feed my addictiong od mattew O.o

NO don't quit writing!!! I still love it and would be devastated to loose the story! I thought this chapter was great. "Watching" Matt struggle with Asher's cold demeanor all day got me all worked up for him! And the ending was a great cliff hanger.

Don't give up!

Ack! Please don't stop with this story! When I saw the new chapter today it literally made my day. I'm in love with Muffin's new mental issues (i.e- aversion to coffee, sirens, ext) and I can't wait to see Asher's reaction to them. I'd hate for their messed up, but somehow extremely adorable relationship to just be summed up. That sucks that you're getting bored with your writing, but I'm honestly in love with the new turn in the plot. Having Muffin make Asher fall in love with him, golden. I can't wait to see the drama this creates once Vincenzo is tossed back into the picture.

c'mon, just keep writting and updates can be far away but keep them coming.Or at least give us a goodbye sex scene.

nooooooooooooo no summary it will ruin it! i'm soo happy you updated, AND LOTS OF ASHER YEEEEES YESYESYES you can't get bored of your writing! i would read this story forever until the day i died if it lasted that long. please update soon, wanna know what happensssssssssssssssss omgg! btw loved how long this chapter was, carter is HILARIOUS omg he makes me laugh.