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May 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh btw I just had a brilliant idea for the next chapter title (lol). 'Mattwurst' *snicker*......well originally it's written 'Mettwurst' (German sausage variation) but considering it has to contain 'Matt' I just modified it a tiny bit.
haha well, I wouldn't act all sulky if you DON'T use it xd. Just wanted to prevent chapter delays only because of missing title options. You see how greedy we are for more Matthew (and Asher......and Vincenzo *mumbles*......maybe some triangle as well...).
haha well, I wouldn't act all sulky if you DON'T use it xd. Just wanted to prevent chapter delays only because of missing title options. You see how greedy we are for more Matthew (and Asher......and Vincenzo *mumbles*......maybe some triangle as well...).
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May 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh god, the latest chapter. Your stories always make my heart somehow skip a beat and want more.
God, I love them so much!
God, I love them so much!
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May 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
" I already knew he was angry with me. He felt betrayed. Abandoned. He was an angry, hurt child throwing a tantrum, and he didn’t know how to vent without lashing out. "
Petulant! Sulking!
Urrrmph! This tension! This anger! This cold shoulder and sulking pattern! Such strong emotions between them! Who'd knew something as simple as anger and ignorance could yeild such delightful simmering heat that simple can't compare to the infamous - sex.
It's when I get read these pieces, that I'm reminded why certain authors simply rock it out better with the simplest of emotions/things...
But of cause ,these two has some awesome history to boot it all up a few scales. ;3
"Not only was he looking at me now, he was talking to me, touching me, and all because… I’d stolen an appetizer? Seriously? I never expected him to be so cheap."
Ah, man, I really missed reading Muffin's monologue.
And whoa, Asher. Even I forgot that Muffin as allergic to shellfish. I can't even remmember a scene where Muffin's allergy was talked about.
But this sort of... closeness, and care and concern... yet the cold shoulder all at the same time....
Maaaan, the atmosphere is electric!
then. then THEN!!! oh.myodeafrdfggod...
“Make me fall in love with you,” he whispered.
My heart stopped.
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!!! AH?! AAAAAAHH!!??!?! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHH!!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!
Your heart stopped?! The fuck?! MY HEART STOPpED!!!
The bloody high hells!!! *grabs and shakes someone* This is an all time HIGH! It feels like , FINALLY, the story has started for real!!!
You sure the hell know how to build up emotion. Build up build up build up, and just let everything explode in one combustive episode.
It's a freaking HEART ATTACK okay! You wanna kill us?! Aaah! *grabs at heart* Oh god... I think I forgot how to breath.
'Make me fall in love with you'... Asher said that... oh god he said that... TO MUFFIN! he said that to muffin. AM I SEEING THINGS?! I think this is the FIRST TIME that FOUR LETTER WORD has been used in VIVID CLEAR OBVIOUS CONTEXT with Asher and Muffin in the same sentence! (you get it) .
It's a whole new level of "OH MY GOD?!" Argh! AAAAAAAAAARRRRGHHHH!!! I keep forgetting, that you are infamous of this CLIFFHANGERS, till you hit us with one time and time again... GAH! GRAH! *shakes you* Where's the next chapter?!?!?
(and what 'earlier statement' did you recant? I didn't catch it, and i think it was for the better. xD )
Which character will say "Don't fall in love with me." Which who who who. Mario? Noooooooooooooooooooeee. I dont know. xD
..............huuuf.... man.... breathe....
I need to go lie down awhile....
See ya~
- nekoii
Petulant! Sulking!
Urrrmph! This tension! This anger! This cold shoulder and sulking pattern! Such strong emotions between them! Who'd knew something as simple as anger and ignorance could yeild such delightful simmering heat that simple can't compare to the infamous - sex.
It's when I get read these pieces, that I'm reminded why certain authors simply rock it out better with the simplest of emotions/things...
But of cause ,these two has some awesome history to boot it all up a few scales. ;3
"Not only was he looking at me now, he was talking to me, touching me, and all because… I’d stolen an appetizer? Seriously? I never expected him to be so cheap."
Ah, man, I really missed reading Muffin's monologue.
And whoa, Asher. Even I forgot that Muffin as allergic to shellfish. I can't even remmember a scene where Muffin's allergy was talked about.
But this sort of... closeness, and care and concern... yet the cold shoulder all at the same time....
Maaaan, the atmosphere is electric!
then. then THEN!!! oh.myodeafrdfggod...
“Make me fall in love with you,” he whispered.
My heart stopped.
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!!! AH?! AAAAAAHH!!??!?! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHH!!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!
Your heart stopped?! The fuck?! MY HEART STOPpED!!!
The bloody high hells!!! *grabs and shakes someone* This is an all time HIGH! It feels like , FINALLY, the story has started for real!!!
You sure the hell know how to build up emotion. Build up build up build up, and just let everything explode in one combustive episode.
It's a freaking HEART ATTACK okay! You wanna kill us?! Aaah! *grabs at heart* Oh god... I think I forgot how to breath.
'Make me fall in love with you'... Asher said that... oh god he said that... TO MUFFIN! he said that to muffin. AM I SEEING THINGS?! I think this is the FIRST TIME that FOUR LETTER WORD has been used in VIVID CLEAR OBVIOUS CONTEXT with Asher and Muffin in the same sentence! (you get it) .
It's a whole new level of "OH MY GOD?!" Argh! AAAAAAAAAARRRRGHHHH!!! I keep forgetting, that you are infamous of this CLIFFHANGERS, till you hit us with one time and time again... GAH! GRAH! *shakes you* Where's the next chapter?!?!?
(and what 'earlier statement' did you recant? I didn't catch it, and i think it was for the better. xD )
Which character will say "Don't fall in love with me." Which who who who. Mario? Noooooooooooooooooooeee. I dont know. xD
..............huuuf.... man.... breathe....
I need to go lie down awhile....
See ya~
- nekoii
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May 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
And because I just haaaaaaad to be a busybody and read the other reviews, I gathered what I had missed (since I read the chapter after you edited the last part).
What Summary?! What 'sick of Asher and Matt' ?! What 'the end' ?! ... Hell NO!
and here, I quote Lisa:
If you think I'm tired of these two, you gotta be on crack! Seriously, these two boys are and continue to be amazing! Also, if you think you're writing is getting WORSE, you're on stuff way more serious than crack!
Because seriously! You're writing is surely IMPROVING! This chapter, Match, as proof! The electricity in this, the tension. The way the emotions simply convey and flow into your readers by mere words! Words written by you *knock knock* hope you heard that *brings out megaphone* WORDS written by YOU ~!
And yeah. this whole Love issue... I bet you my entire manga collection, that NEITHER of them had realised, that 'LOVE' was already in the equation waaay back in 'Muffin'. Just all these angst, and betrayal, and drugs (on Matt's part), has blurred the clarity of their feelings - feelings that they have yet to accept and understand themselves. So it's gonna be a emotional mess for these two. Good luck unraveling the red string of fate dudes.
Matthew Matthew Matthew. Asher Asher Asher. We all love you, and you do to, just gotta... rekindle that love.
If you can afford it (as in, there are no other pressing issues in real life) please do continue with this story at a normal pace. We will wait for your updates, like we've always had. (Unless I die or something, then that's a different story).
so yeah, as long as you still can, PLEASE DO CONTINUE.
But if you really can't, then I'd understand, though, it'd be nice if you could tell us why you can't continue.
That's all.
Good luck and All the Best with Life Mahsa ;3
- nekoii
What Summary?! What 'sick of Asher and Matt' ?! What 'the end' ?! ... Hell NO!
and here, I quote Lisa:
If you think I'm tired of these two, you gotta be on crack! Seriously, these two boys are and continue to be amazing! Also, if you think you're writing is getting WORSE, you're on stuff way more serious than crack!
Because seriously! You're writing is surely IMPROVING! This chapter, Match, as proof! The electricity in this, the tension. The way the emotions simply convey and flow into your readers by mere words! Words written by you *knock knock* hope you heard that *brings out megaphone* WORDS written by YOU ~!
And yeah. this whole Love issue... I bet you my entire manga collection, that NEITHER of them had realised, that 'LOVE' was already in the equation waaay back in 'Muffin'. Just all these angst, and betrayal, and drugs (on Matt's part), has blurred the clarity of their feelings - feelings that they have yet to accept and understand themselves. So it's gonna be a emotional mess for these two. Good luck unraveling the red string of fate dudes.
Matthew Matthew Matthew. Asher Asher Asher. We all love you, and you do to, just gotta... rekindle that love.
If you can afford it (as in, there are no other pressing issues in real life) please do continue with this story at a normal pace. We will wait for your updates, like we've always had. (Unless I die or something, then that's a different story).
so yeah, as long as you still can, PLEASE DO CONTINUE.
But if you really can't, then I'd understand, though, it'd be nice if you could tell us why you can't continue.
That's all.
Good luck and All the Best with Life Mahsa ;3
- nekoii
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May 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just want you to know that I adore this story very much. I love how you write Matt; I love how delightfully flawed he is and how earnest he is, and his mind works in very interesting ways. I love Asher; I love how he seems to gaze down from his high horse. And I really love Vincenzo because holyshitsexyItalian and how smoothly his character develops over the two stories (and how he migrates towards Matty -- yep, picked that one up back in Muffin). And right now I'm trying to figure out the words for how much I adore that love triangle; the dynamics between the two relationships is so astoundingly different; Asher and Vincenzo really do draw out different sides to Matthew.
What I'm trying to say is, you have some deeply flawed, messed up, selfish, cruel, magnificent bastards in this story yet at the same time they're so adorable, so charming, so endearing that it's damn impossible to not love them. In other words, they're like real people. They live and breathe, as the expression goes.
I've been following this story silently for a while. I got sucked in and addicted after a friend linked me. And I have to say, it is always worth the wait. I spend days with a huge grin after each update. And I'm actually reviewing for a change cos the break made me feel guilty about lurking shyly instead of telling you how much I enjoy this. You're an amazing writer, this series is amazing, and I am so patiently excited to read more. (Actually, I think I rather like the breaks. Processing time, time to theorise with my friend, and the feeling of being completely wrong is so good when it comes to fiction!)
Enjoy your summer!
What I'm trying to say is, you have some deeply flawed, messed up, selfish, cruel, magnificent bastards in this story yet at the same time they're so adorable, so charming, so endearing that it's damn impossible to not love them. In other words, they're like real people. They live and breathe, as the expression goes.
I've been following this story silently for a while. I got sucked in and addicted after a friend linked me. And I have to say, it is always worth the wait. I spend days with a huge grin after each update. And I'm actually reviewing for a change cos the break made me feel guilty about lurking shyly instead of telling you how much I enjoy this. You're an amazing writer, this series is amazing, and I am so patiently excited to read more. (Actually, I think I rather like the breaks. Processing time, time to theorise with my friend, and the feeling of being completely wrong is so good when it comes to fiction!)
Enjoy your summer!
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May 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Mahsa, don't listen to the handful of reader entitlement reviewers who got on your case. This is YOUR story. It's YOUR choice of what you decide to do with it. Not theirs. It sucks, but it happens. Hell, I give you props for offering us a summary, something most authors don't. You're a great writer. You seem like a very nice person too. You don't deserve to have people call you cruel and other shit when your posting this for free for us all to read and love.
Anyway (now that I've calmed down some), I want to say that I've been loving Matthew so far. I got caught up one update ago; I think I was afraid to read it before but I finally sat down and started in on the sequel: why was I afraid? Mostly just how you were gonna take it, but I wasn't disappointed at all :) in fact, my Team!Asher wavered at times with Vin. Yes, it wavered! Me, who loves AsherXMuffin very very much, lol. But really, this is the only (in maybe a few) fics that I really can read it and be fine with Matthew ending up with either. Usually I latch onto just one and it sticks and I just cannot see the character with any other. Eh, speaking of Vin though... I'm worried what might've happened. Seems like Asher knows where he is and knows he helped Matthew so I'm worried what that means. Imma thinkin trouble.
Carter... hmm. I'll say after the end of last chapter I think? Whichever one Matt saves him, I kinda thought he might feel a little... not in debt per se, but less likely to do any (much) harm to Matthew now...? Maybe? But he's a sneaky fellow. And a bastard, so I won't hold him in much hopes. This last chapter he seemed especially slimy. And why he wanted Matthew to stay at the table... I don't know XD I really don't trust that guy. He's kinda cool though. For a bastard.
Asher. Man, just typing it has me all smiling and shit. I LOVE HIM. I almost forgot how much I just, love, love, love him. He's such an asshole. But he's sooooo, god. (ignore me while I spaz and shit). And the scene with the allergy! I'll admit I reread that like, 3 times. I swear. I just.. god, no words are coming. I'm SO glad Asher is back! I just hope he forgives Matthew. Even if they don't end up together, I at least want some I dunno, peace of mind for poor Matthew. He was only doing what he thought was right. That last line though! I'm wondering what Asher means... like, does he really want that? I hope. But I'm not putting any trust in Asher right now. He could me messing with Matt for all we know. Or... he could be kinda warning him...? Like, if he gets him to fall in love he won't want to kill him. But, I'll be honest, I think Asher really cares for him. I dunno if I'd call it love. Maybe messed up, kinda love. But I think that's why he hasn't done the worst that I KNOW he's capable of. And why he stopped him from eating that oyster :P
Anyway, I'm babbling. Again. You may remember (prob not since it's been forever since I've reviewed. I'm bad at that lol) me from before. bloodyxunicorns. I used to ramble and stuff. a lot. I'm like that. (and i hope you participate in a certain forum i saw you join... that i'm joined in as well... hint hint) Anyway, love this and love you. And do whatever you want. Remember, this is your fic. We're just lucky enough to get to read it (us readers) :)
Anyway (now that I've calmed down some), I want to say that I've been loving Matthew so far. I got caught up one update ago; I think I was afraid to read it before but I finally sat down and started in on the sequel: why was I afraid? Mostly just how you were gonna take it, but I wasn't disappointed at all :) in fact, my Team!Asher wavered at times with Vin. Yes, it wavered! Me, who loves AsherXMuffin very very much, lol. But really, this is the only (in maybe a few) fics that I really can read it and be fine with Matthew ending up with either. Usually I latch onto just one and it sticks and I just cannot see the character with any other. Eh, speaking of Vin though... I'm worried what might've happened. Seems like Asher knows where he is and knows he helped Matthew so I'm worried what that means. Imma thinkin trouble.
Carter... hmm. I'll say after the end of last chapter I think? Whichever one Matt saves him, I kinda thought he might feel a little... not in debt per se, but less likely to do any (much) harm to Matthew now...? Maybe? But he's a sneaky fellow. And a bastard, so I won't hold him in much hopes. This last chapter he seemed especially slimy. And why he wanted Matthew to stay at the table... I don't know XD I really don't trust that guy. He's kinda cool though. For a bastard.
Asher. Man, just typing it has me all smiling and shit. I LOVE HIM. I almost forgot how much I just, love, love, love him. He's such an asshole. But he's sooooo, god. (ignore me while I spaz and shit). And the scene with the allergy! I'll admit I reread that like, 3 times. I swear. I just.. god, no words are coming. I'm SO glad Asher is back! I just hope he forgives Matthew. Even if they don't end up together, I at least want some I dunno, peace of mind for poor Matthew. He was only doing what he thought was right. That last line though! I'm wondering what Asher means... like, does he really want that? I hope. But I'm not putting any trust in Asher right now. He could me messing with Matt for all we know. Or... he could be kinda warning him...? Like, if he gets him to fall in love he won't want to kill him. But, I'll be honest, I think Asher really cares for him. I dunno if I'd call it love. Maybe messed up, kinda love. But I think that's why he hasn't done the worst that I KNOW he's capable of. And why he stopped him from eating that oyster :P
Anyway, I'm babbling. Again. You may remember (prob not since it's been forever since I've reviewed. I'm bad at that lol) me from before. bloodyxunicorns. I used to ramble and stuff. a lot. I'm like that. (and i hope you participate in a certain forum i saw you join... that i'm joined in as well... hint hint) Anyway, love this and love you. And do whatever you want. Remember, this is your fic. We're just lucky enough to get to read it (us readers) :)
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May 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am so lucky to start reading the story right at this point. Carter is totally insane. I think Asher and Vincenzo will need to learn how to share. Otherwise it will kill Vincenzo and a part of Matthew too. I vote for a threesome. I have to confess that I was surprised that Matthew would be the kind of guy to actually visit a prostitute. I also hope that Alrick is okay. I imagine poor little Leah must have been so traumatized. This sequel is very tight and well focused Mahsa. Excellent writing. Keep up the good work.
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May 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm still on the prologue. I want to read this soooo badly but I'm terrified to go any further. I can't handle bad things happening to our sweet, wonderful Muffin baby. I'm a big whiny wimp. I'm just going to have to take a few deep breaths . . . and run away and come back some other time. . . But I'm going to read this. Soon.
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May 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Long time no see~ (Well, probably not that long ago, but I'm not keeping track!)
You're back! :D
Ooh, Matt say yes! I have a feeling he will say no, but considering what the offer was - which was the reason he went to Asher in the first place - hopefully he will say yes.
And I don't believe Carter can be that nice for too long. The way he's acting as "Mr. Nice" all of a sudden is suspicious... It's like the saying I always hear: "Keep your friends close, but your enemies closer."
I feel like I have forgotten a lot of details since I've last read this, I have no idea who Daniel is and about Matt's shellfish allergy - heck, I don't even remember whether or not I knew he was allergic! Man, I should reread the whole series to refresh my memory... Dx
Thanks so much for the update!
Night. (Since I need to get to bed!) ^^;
You're back! :D
Ooh, Matt say yes! I have a feeling he will say no, but considering what the offer was - which was the reason he went to Asher in the first place - hopefully he will say yes.
And I don't believe Carter can be that nice for too long. The way he's acting as "Mr. Nice" all of a sudden is suspicious... It's like the saying I always hear: "Keep your friends close, but your enemies closer."
I feel like I have forgotten a lot of details since I've last read this, I have no idea who Daniel is and about Matt's shellfish allergy - heck, I don't even remember whether or not I knew he was allergic! Man, I should reread the whole series to refresh my memory... Dx
Thanks so much for the update!
Night. (Since I need to get to bed!) ^^;
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May 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you recanted what you said earlier! None of your readers should give off a sense of entitlement (we're not paying), like a certain anonymous someone, but should, like I hope to do, encourage you to keep writing because you are really good at it! The last chapter was excellent and, if anything, your writing has improved. Sometimes, when a story has a thick plot, writers tend to get used to their characters and the idea gets a little less exciting. It's kind of like a marriage. One shots are like the pseudo affairs and you get to blow off tension and get "hot" over your characters again. I find it works for me, it might for you as well!