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May 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hi Mahsa,
New fan/reader!!! Well, I have to say I always wanted to read your fiction, I just wanted to make sure it's finished and then started it! (selfish me!!!) :P so I waited, I hate cliff hangers! lol anyway, until 3 days ago that I was board to death and I wanted something new, exiting, ... and in a whim I started reading Muffin and read and read, non-stop for 3 days until I finished all 36 chapters and I have to say your chapters are long!!! (not that I'm complaining :D ) but English being my second language and all, it took me 3 days and I barely slept! I was just reading, didn't do anything else , not even studying! :P (which I hate)
Anyway, I finished it about 3 hours ago and after 3 days of living with these guys, I can hardly put them out of my mind! O.o I'm just keep thinking ... so I have to tell someone my thoughts and who else better that you! :D
First of all, I have to get on my knees and bow to you! Such story, such way of telling it, thinking and plotting all details, ... my God! you are something! I was thinking with myself: can you do that?! out of question!!! lol
Up until now "Forgotten" by Traxie was my favorite fic here in AFF but after today that would be my number two! All in all: you are great! the story is fantastic, overwhelming, breathtaking, exiting, ...
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Now I have one question that I didn't get any answers for it up until now:
When Roger (am I saying his name right? I have the worst memory :( ) stab Matt, and then Ash and Daniel, ... get there, why was Ash hesitant in giving D the answer? Why not rushing to save Matt???!!! I mean what was the reason to even ask to save M or not?! Should they just do it?! ???
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I also want to say my mom officially declared that her daughter is crazy after laughing off and on for an hour when she kept reminding the scene in conference room and the search for bareback sex!!! lol I was laughing out loud and I just couldn't stop! Even now that I am thinking about it I can't resist laughing! it was hilarious! :D
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The E.T. song really fits! but I want to mention one more song for Ash and M, especially after reading Matthew and reading about rainy days and asking for help and all: "Remember When it rained" by Josh Gorban. This link:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rfxqW9QwOSI
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About Ash, Vini and Matt thing! Well, I love them both, nothing against Vini but a Ash/M thing will fit much better in my mind! I mean there was much much more between these two that can ever be with Vini!!! (I think!) So my vote goes to Asher! ^_^
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Did I mention how much I enjoy watching this movie?! :D lol oh yes, Movie! your descriptions were so thorough that I have imagine evrything right in front of my eyes and couldn't stop thinking what a great movie can be made out of your fic!!! It might break the Titanic record! :D
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One personal question and I then I will continue my babbling in the next review :D (can't get rid of me so easily!) :D
Are you Persian?! I mean your name is Persian, are you?! (if you don't mind) ^_^
New fan/reader!!! Well, I have to say I always wanted to read your fiction, I just wanted to make sure it's finished and then started it! (selfish me!!!) :P so I waited, I hate cliff hangers! lol anyway, until 3 days ago that I was board to death and I wanted something new, exiting, ... and in a whim I started reading Muffin and read and read, non-stop for 3 days until I finished all 36 chapters and I have to say your chapters are long!!! (not that I'm complaining :D ) but English being my second language and all, it took me 3 days and I barely slept! I was just reading, didn't do anything else , not even studying! :P (which I hate)
Anyway, I finished it about 3 hours ago and after 3 days of living with these guys, I can hardly put them out of my mind! O.o I'm just keep thinking ... so I have to tell someone my thoughts and who else better that you! :D
First of all, I have to get on my knees and bow to you! Such story, such way of telling it, thinking and plotting all details, ... my God! you are something! I was thinking with myself: can you do that?! out of question!!! lol
Up until now "Forgotten" by Traxie was my favorite fic here in AFF but after today that would be my number two! All in all: you are great! the story is fantastic, overwhelming, breathtaking, exiting, ...
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Now I have one question that I didn't get any answers for it up until now:
When Roger (am I saying his name right? I have the worst memory :( ) stab Matt, and then Ash and Daniel, ... get there, why was Ash hesitant in giving D the answer? Why not rushing to save Matt???!!! I mean what was the reason to even ask to save M or not?! Should they just do it?! ???
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I also want to say my mom officially declared that her daughter is crazy after laughing off and on for an hour when she kept reminding the scene in conference room and the search for bareback sex!!! lol I was laughing out loud and I just couldn't stop! Even now that I am thinking about it I can't resist laughing! it was hilarious! :D
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The E.T. song really fits! but I want to mention one more song for Ash and M, especially after reading Matthew and reading about rainy days and asking for help and all: "Remember When it rained" by Josh Gorban. This link:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rfxqW9QwOSI
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About Ash, Vini and Matt thing! Well, I love them both, nothing against Vini but a Ash/M thing will fit much better in my mind! I mean there was much much more between these two that can ever be with Vini!!! (I think!) So my vote goes to Asher! ^_^
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Did I mention how much I enjoy watching this movie?! :D lol oh yes, Movie! your descriptions were so thorough that I have imagine evrything right in front of my eyes and couldn't stop thinking what a great movie can be made out of your fic!!! It might break the Titanic record! :D
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One personal question and I then I will continue my babbling in the next review :D (can't get rid of me so easily!) :D
Are you Persian?! I mean your name is Persian, are you?! (if you don't mind) ^_^
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May 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ok, where was I?! Ahh ... you know I have a wild, crazy imagination which takes me to places that ...
Well, I have to tell you what I envisioned. if I don't, I will go crazy!
Before the Warehouse scene, before Ash came, I had this vision that the two cousins were standing in front of each other glaring and all, with princess and M watching. Carter threatening an pointing the gun to Ash and pulling the trigger when M jump in front of him, shielding him, saving his life again by taking the bullet himself ...
Ash was going to take revenge but by this, he was owning his life again to M!!!!! and ...
I was think if this could happen and I read and see that nope, things are going differently! :D
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Then I was getting to the friends and their problems. Shame on me but I envisioned a very angry, bad Ash who was going to the make life like hell for M! His friends leaving, getting alone, out of job, out of money, getting homeless again, in the streets with pimps and prostitution and Ash laughing darkly and M on the wedge of sanity, with all his fears jumping from a bridge to a deep river ...
I know I know, our M (your M) never ever think of something like that but as I told you, my imagination is running wild, I don't have any control over it! :P
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Then I read and passed this part too as I get to the last chapter to the mouse and cat chase, I think it was after the launch that I thought Ash wouldn't budge until something life-threatening happened to M! and then a riding M chasing after Ash, flashed in front of me, when a car crashed to him, through him in the air, down to the car windshield, passed to the top and trunk and landing to the asphalt of street.
A panicked Ash, hearing the sound, stopped the car, rush out to M, to find M bleeding and uncontentious! and there and then he understood that how much M mattered to him!
Well, your version was much more interesting :D the sea shell stuff was great and how Ash panicked! O.O
Well here I am loathing myself why did you start reading something that is not finished?! >.< and in the other hand I am busy with my imagination with all sort of the things that M has to do to make Ash fall in love with him again. Not that is necessary ... Ash already is in love with him. He is, isn't him? but it is interesting to see how???? I mean with Matthew's pride and his friends situation, a battle inside him, again, is going to start ... and how hard Ash is going to make it for M?! and how heart broken Vini is going to be?!!! :(
Well I can't wait to read more and I hope you update soon :D please please, pretty please ... (puppy eyes begging) :D
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emm, this is the last, I promise :P
I was think about the beginning of the story and that how everything was fun and bright and light! and how deep, dark and heavy it has become! Not a bad thing, I was just wondering how the life of a troubled, care-free kid had changed during such a short time ... and now he is in the middle of WW3, with both of the leaders being OK with his presence in the middle of meeting just like he is part of ... THEM!!! he has become them and I don't think he can ever be something else!
It's just hard for me to see a bright future for them, at least not in USA! :D
BTW, where is the diner key ring?! I want it backkkkkk :)
aahhh, it's 5 in the morning! forgive my English (second language! I know I have a lot of mistakes ...)
and thank you for the great tome that you gave me!
xoxo
Roya
Well, I have to tell you what I envisioned. if I don't, I will go crazy!
Before the Warehouse scene, before Ash came, I had this vision that the two cousins were standing in front of each other glaring and all, with princess and M watching. Carter threatening an pointing the gun to Ash and pulling the trigger when M jump in front of him, shielding him, saving his life again by taking the bullet himself ...
Ash was going to take revenge but by this, he was owning his life again to M!!!!! and ...
I was think if this could happen and I read and see that nope, things are going differently! :D
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Then I was getting to the friends and their problems. Shame on me but I envisioned a very angry, bad Ash who was going to the make life like hell for M! His friends leaving, getting alone, out of job, out of money, getting homeless again, in the streets with pimps and prostitution and Ash laughing darkly and M on the wedge of sanity, with all his fears jumping from a bridge to a deep river ...
I know I know, our M (your M) never ever think of something like that but as I told you, my imagination is running wild, I don't have any control over it! :P
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Then I read and passed this part too as I get to the last chapter to the mouse and cat chase, I think it was after the launch that I thought Ash wouldn't budge until something life-threatening happened to M! and then a riding M chasing after Ash, flashed in front of me, when a car crashed to him, through him in the air, down to the car windshield, passed to the top and trunk and landing to the asphalt of street.
A panicked Ash, hearing the sound, stopped the car, rush out to M, to find M bleeding and uncontentious! and there and then he understood that how much M mattered to him!
Well, your version was much more interesting :D the sea shell stuff was great and how Ash panicked! O.O
Well here I am loathing myself why did you start reading something that is not finished?! >.< and in the other hand I am busy with my imagination with all sort of the things that M has to do to make Ash fall in love with him again. Not that is necessary ... Ash already is in love with him. He is, isn't him? but it is interesting to see how???? I mean with Matthew's pride and his friends situation, a battle inside him, again, is going to start ... and how hard Ash is going to make it for M?! and how heart broken Vini is going to be?!!! :(
Well I can't wait to read more and I hope you update soon :D please please, pretty please ... (puppy eyes begging) :D
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emm, this is the last, I promise :P
I was think about the beginning of the story and that how everything was fun and bright and light! and how deep, dark and heavy it has become! Not a bad thing, I was just wondering how the life of a troubled, care-free kid had changed during such a short time ... and now he is in the middle of WW3, with both of the leaders being OK with his presence in the middle of meeting just like he is part of ... THEM!!! he has become them and I don't think he can ever be something else!
It's just hard for me to see a bright future for them, at least not in USA! :D
BTW, where is the diner key ring?! I want it backkkkkk :)
aahhh, it's 5 in the morning! forgive my English (second language! I know I have a lot of mistakes ...)
and thank you for the great tome that you gave me!
xoxo
Roya
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May 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Reading a chapter from you is like somone serving a you a wonderful five-course meal and then telling you you won't get any more food for a few months... ;)AND I'M STILL HUNGRY!!!!! GAAAH! And the ending... I think amnesty needs to be called in, because this is cruelty!
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May 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey Mas thanks so much for the update. We all love your story and would wait for the end of time for updates so don't worry about that. I was just wondering if there was anyway to set up a Paypal account for you to help with rent and as a thanks for giving us this story. I would like to apologize on the behalf of my fellow readers for anything they may have said to offend you in anyway. It is up to you if you feel like ending this story with a summary or not. We owe you nothing but gratitude for this work of art that you share with us. I would be sad as hell if it ended that way but that would not keep me from rereading them over and over again for years to come. Thanks again for the update and let me know if there is anyway we, as your ever faithful readers can help you.
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May 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just finished all of Muffin and caught up with Matthew all in one night, and I have to say, I'm hooked! Let Vincenzo know I'm routing for him, despite the odds against him. ;D But where ever you take this story, I will definitely be there! You truly are an amazing writer and I look forward to your future updates!
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May 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Extremely SORRY for calling you "Nuts" for expecting us to be okay with a summary. I feel bad now. Love you! lol
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May 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Damn! As always you're too dark and tortured for me but damn me if I don't love this story!!!
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May 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Will you let me lick Asher????? lol Great chap!
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May 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH! IT'S AMAZING! AND YOU ARE AN AMAZING WRITER! YOU MAKE ME WISH I COULD WRITE! SO I REALLY REALLY REALLY HOPE YOU CONTINUE THIS FIC! I LOVE ASHER AND ASHER/MATTHEW AND THE "MAKE ME FALL IN LOVE WITH YOU," EVEN THOUGH I'M CONVINCED ASHER'S ALREADY IN LOVE WITH MATTHEW, BUT HE'S HURT AND ANGRY, SO HE CAN'T JUST COME OUT AND SAY "I LOVE YOU." BUT OH MY GOD THAT PART WAS SO HOT AND SO PERFECT. AND I LOVE THAT ASHER SPENT ALL DAY IGNORING MATTHEW BUT HE STILL REMEMBERED THAT HE WAS ALLERGIC TO SHELLFISH AND STOPPED HIM FROM EATING OYSTERS. PERFECTION. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!!!! I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!!!!!!!!!!!! AND, YES, THIS STORY TOTALLY WARRANTS ALL-CAPS AND EXCLAMATION POINTS, BECAUSE IT IS JUST THAT AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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May 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this is perfection.