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wow. speechless.

Oh yeah.... O_O; The rain, the fear, and the chase building up before the love scene? Man, you're good. It's obvious Asher was pissed because he thought Matt was playing with him until he realized that Matt was always in love with him. I think it's so cute when Asher dressed differently just because of what Matt said. So now...I'm guessing that Asher wants Matt to go with him so he can protect him better?

P.S: I miss Vincenzo and Alrick!! *pouts*

all i have to say is this

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ASHER!!!

i love that man so much and I can't wait to see how these two rebuild their relationship now that they've gotten past this first wave of tension. They've never made anything easy and I'm fairly certain that won't change just yet.

OH MY GOD!!!!!! I want to THANK YOU for writing this story!!! Truly, I am grateful for this lovely story of yours. You have NO IDEA how MANY times Matthew and Asher comes up in my mind PER DAY. {Muffin} and {Matthew} are THE BEST STORIES I have EVER read. Thanks!

That was GREAT porn. I can ONLY guess what goes through Asher's mind and his INTENSE feelings towards Muffin. I LOVE THEM!!!!!

"I moaned, because that’s all I could do, because that’s all I had left in me"

Just found a grammar mistake. That's means "that is" (it can't mean that was), so you might want to change these two "that's" to "that was" for the tense to fit.

-“No,” I hissed, shoving my disobedient hand into my pocket to punish it for what it’d done.-
These little nuances are why I read your writing so intensely. They're also why you're one of my favorite writers.

More and more, when I read your stuff, I find myself going "gdi, I wish I had thought of that". I'm both buoyed by getting to read your works and disheartened because it's like seeing a painting you know you'll never be able to paint!

PS: you should put that donate button onto your profile =)

Oh, Matt. MATT! I still wanna cuddle him but at the same time I think Asher might deserve quite a few of those cuddles as well. And everyone else is getting caught in the crossfire. But I do think that Matt won't have that hard a time making Asher fall in love with him, because Asher still feels quite a bit of *something* for him. This is so what I needed tonight; I am so glad to see you're still working on it. <3

So happy you're back! Loved this chapter, missed you so much! Can't wait for more.

*sigh* I have to say I'm not your friend right now =(... I was very clearly on the matt/Vincenzo side of the fence, but now after this chapter asher seems to have grown on me to the point where I can't decide who I want him to end up with (if he does in fact end up with anyone). On a brighter note..awesome chapter! keep up the good work!!! =D

Oh and I think I found a mistake. You wrote:

"His eyebrows rose, bringing back that tinge of innocence that didn’t belong on a monster’s face. My frowned deepened, pushing my lower lip forward."

and I think it should be:

"My frown deepened"